Jalebis drowning in Sugar free syrup!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola girlies!

 

There are amazing analysts, poets, poetic analysts, intellects,brilliant writers, all-in-one etc etc'..here in this forum'..So I really had to garner courage to post this

 

I don't know what made me to  write this, I wrote from Khushi's POV'..

Errr...I have not categorized  it...If it resembles any particular category...
its purely coincidental😆

Sorry for a stupid title...was not able to think of anything else!

You insulted  me , it created the first slit

You misbehaved with me, a hard hit

 You defamed me, the cruelest cut

 You called me cheap, hated my very sight

 

You challenged me, I surprised you with my wit

 You cared for me, My opinion changed for a bit

 You were in pain, I could not bear it but

 The doors of your heart were  shut


 I was happy, like a flower

 You embraced me as a sunshower

 Its your proximity that makes me shiver

 Day and night your memories hover

 

Though your words are filled with wrath

  I find unexplainable solace in your warmth

 You always hurt me deep down to the core

 But the realization that it was you, agonized me more

 

You never wanted to listen my explanation

 Have you ever realized the effect of your detonation

 I believed you to be an eclipse for my happiness'..

 Wrong  was I, you extracted it  adding to my loneliness

 

Leaving it only in my name

 In your eyes I see the raising flame

 It's always me whom you tend to blame

 Heartless you are, as you claim

 

Is apologizing such a shame

 Finally you did, when it was high time

 Is there still exists a  ball game

 My heart is no more  tame

 Is it me or do u also feel the same?!


P.S - People who want 2 throw tomatoes are welcome to do so at DaShing_ Girl and sbanik , cos they r the culprits who asked me to post this😃

Thanks for reading my rant

This may be exaggerated, insane, lunatic...Share your verdict!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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sugar free tomatoe pies at u baby doll 🤣

heyyy partner 🤗 i just logged in and this is da first post im reading on this beautiful sunday! i think kushi would give u a jalebish jappi for writing this cuz i enjoyed it!!

much love to miss granger & sneha for nagging u to post this 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hai shari 🤗  a good one.
i will throw jalebis 😳   for a sweet poem to a sweet cute  girl
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Nadzy - Awww! thanx hun! 🤗 Glad dat u liked it!

It took me more than a week to post this... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lwfw

hai shari 🤗  a good one.
i will throw jalebis 😳   for a sweet poem to a sweet cute  girl



Hiya Sharu 🤗

Thankooo.. jalebis?!  I love them...

is this a poem? r u sure?!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I luvd it:-)..luvd d title too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute ..enjoyed reading it..great you did post it and thanks to those girls who encouraged  you to do so..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome poem with an awesome title!!
loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cindrella255



Hiya Sharu 🤗

Thankooo.. jalebis?!  I love them...

is this a poem? r u sure?!


yes dear for me with my left brain😭 you are too better 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lwfw


yes dear for me with my left brain😭 you are too better 👏



Awww! Thanks Sharu...U r such a sweet heart😳