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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
and lovely ending...
waiting for the epilogue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome..
so.. this wall.. planned by.. SA..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww u ended it..
But that ws beautiful...
Glad that mayank cud make her confess to him...
Loved the last part most..It ws beautifully written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dii u too ended the ff???????/
😭
awesumest update👏
at last both r i love with each other
thanks 4 the pm
do write an epilouge...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...and superb cum shocking ending...
no one could guess that it was all a plan to convince nupur...
totally amazing...



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Posted: 12 years ago

 

What surprised to see Singles pm again…

Ya fortunately or unfortunately I was able to write its epilogue …

I am sorry to all of u whom I some how disappointed with its sudden closure…. Why and why is an unanswerable question

Thanku all soo much for loving it..

Ruchi(let it go), Parul, Anila, Suja, Daneilla, Amber.. all who requested so much , and few of u asking me to continue..

Here is an Epilogue for u

 

Lov ya

Fiza

 

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pardon errors

Epilogue:

Nupur: tumhara mein qatal kerdo gi asa kuch nhi hoga

Mayank: ji nhi asay hi sab hoga…

Nupur: kyun..kyun hoga

Mayank: kyun k yeah meri shadi hai

Nupur: tu akelay hi kerlo,..itni old fashion shadi..

Mayank: tu tumhara style mein kerain..ek kam kertay hain..boothnath theme rekhtay hain…soch sab zombie ban k aay gay..oohhh…..booothhh..he said actually acting like a zombie…..ka sa…

Nupur: kinta perfect hoga na…tum ko tu makeup bhi nhi kerna paray ga wah bulkily character mein hoo…

Mayank: aur tum make up kerlayna larki lago ki tu sab wasy hi daar jaty ga….bewaquff

Nupur: acha tu tum aqalmand ho na…tu tumahry style mein rekhy teeli…just imagine na dulha wood log k getup mein…aur sir per turban k bajay…ghass laga layna…perfect lago ga….

Mayank: very funny…nupur kiya hai bhi…shadi hogi tu asay hi hogi bus…

Nupur: tu thik hai na…Zenya ko call kerdayti hoon us se kerlo…mein nhi kero gi Retro theme mein…bus

Mayank: tu ek kam kertay hain 2050 theme per kerain..he said sarcastically …

Nupur: nhi aj k zamany mein rahny mein kiya masala hai tum ko…mera wedding planner jab arrange kerta hai tu sab dekhty hain…

Mayank: mjhy nhi kerani kisi weeding planner se arrange shadi..mein khud kero ga bus…. Retro nhi tu ok fine…but mein apny hi style mein kero ga..and I am not listening to u on this…

Saying so he lye in her lap..hugging her

Nupur: mayank..utho mein ny kaha na…tumhari akely ki shadi hai kiya…

Mayank: I cant here anything….

Nupur: mayankkk…kya musbiat hai bhi…

Mayank: jab dress designer tumhara hai tu arrangement meri hogi us waqt mein ny kuch kaha tha…he said sitting again

Nupur: han han kuch nhi buhat kuch kaha tha…mein is design kerwao ga…yeah tu khud table cloth behana hua hai yeah meray kapray deign keray ga..tumhari tu choice hi nirali hai…mjhy zaroor tum red Indian bano gi shadi mein…red Indian hi banjo kapro ki zaroorat hi nhi paray gi…

Mayank: chi nupur…kasi kasi baatein kerti hoo…apni wild imaginations ko thora control kero..

Nupur: shut up mayank..

Mayank: kiya shut up..pata hai mjhy mein irresistible  ho magar..shadi se pehly hi tum mjhy asa dekho gi tum mera kiya hoga..thori tu sharm kerlo..

She was blushing and was hiting her head in her mind why she cant watch her words when she knew he will never let any chance of pulling her leg…

Nupur: mayank baat maat paltu..

Mayank: mein ny kaha kuch kaha tum ny hi yeah baat ki k tum actually mjhy kasay dekhna chahti hoo…mein tu massom hoon mein ny kaha kuch kaha..he was smirking

Nupur: arrangement tumhari pasand k nhi hoga…

Mayank: meri hi pasand hoga…he lyed again on her lap…acting as he has slept…

Nupur: mayank stop acting aur utho na…

Mayank: if u wouldn't stop ..mein tum ko chup kerado ga

Nupur: may….

Her words were left incomplete as he made her quite with a the bestes way he has …moving away he was smiling looking at her….

Mayank: if u didn't agree with me..i will full fill ur all  IMAGINATIONS right now…he said with smirk

Nupur: mayank…whicing….

He strt snoring ….and hugged her more….wincingly she hugged him back..and he chuckled kissing her cheek

Mayank: that's like my girl

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Shilpa: ab tum dono ko kiya hoga…

Nupur: mein is se shadi nhi kerogi…

NM: kyun ab tumko kiya masla hai..sham mein shadi hai aur tum ko subha mein bhi chain nhi hai…tum dono k kuch nhi hosakta…ya khuda mein kya kero ..mahman arahy hain aur yaha yeah dono

Mayank: mom mein ny kuch nhi kiya is ny hi shoro kiya…

Nupur: han han tum kahbi kuch kab kertay ho…..sab mein hi tu kerti hoon…

Mayank: dekha yeah khud man rahi hai…..

Nupur: maaa…dekho is ko aj bhi lar raha hai mjhy se….

SA: tujhy kya masala hai…

Mayank: mein honeymoon per America kyun jao jaha 5 saal waha guzar k aaya hoon….

Nupur: yeah mjhy jaan bhooj kern hi lay jaraha hai….

Mayank: dekho dekho is ko mjhy per atibar hi nhi hai…yeah kiya shadi keray gi mjh se…is ko doubt hai check kerny jarahi hai…yeah mein ny is ko buhat pehly kaha tha mein ausrtaila jao ga…

Nupur: aur mein ny tum se 7 saal pehly hi kah diya tha k mein states hi jao gi apny honeymoon per…mjhy Nigra falls jana hai…

Mayank: kyun khud khushi kerni hai…

Nupur: woh tu tum se shadi ker k ho hi jay gi….

SA: ya khuda indono k bacho k kiya hoga..asay laro gay in k samny

NM: aray pehly shadi tu hoon in ki…bachy tu baad ki baat hai…poray ek mehnny mein 40 bar shadi cancel ker chukay hain yeah dono….

SA: rukh jao bus..chup tum dono…problem kiya hai…dono jaga chaly jao…10 din ek jaga aur 10 dosri jaga…

Nupur: mom itni lambhi chuti kasay ….

Mayank: ek kam aur aj se hi kam per chali jao shadi cancel…

Nupur: zidi ho intehai…. Thik hai..

SA/NM: shukar…ab tum dono shadi se pehly ek dosray se koi baat nhi kero ga

M/N: kyunnn…

NM: taky phir tum dono phir na shoro hojaoo..

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Nupur: stop smiling teeli..

Mayank: stop blushing boothnath…abhi tu sirf hath pakra hai….

Nupur: mayank sab dekh rahy hain…

Mayank: tu woh un ki majbori hai itna handsome grrom aj tak khabi nhi dekha unhony…

Nupur: uff..such over estimation

Mayank: nhi ..wasy ek baat aur hai….

Nupur: kiya….

Mayank: itni khubsoorat bride bhi nhi dekhi hogi…he whispered in her ear…making her smile...

Siting in madap they were still busy teasing pulling leg and loving each other, yet one thing which they didn't very seriously was performing their wedding ritual. It meant a lot for them, way too much than they have shown or expressed….

..……

The candles and the dim light, the fragrance of flowers and there love all was making the ambiance so romantic,

She felt his arms around her waist embracing her in his arms…

Mayank: hi wifey..

Nupur: hi..

Mayank: kiya baat hai someone is actually shivering with my touch, mjhy tu lagta tha asa khabi ho not possible..he said resting his head on her shoulder dramatically..

Nupur: very funny…

Making her turn around.. he forget all that he has planned to pull her leg.. his lips curved in an expression of admiration..without thinking a second he move forward and kissed her passionately…

Breaking away, resting there head together…

Mayank: not fair.. I thought to trouble u a lot, yaha tu ap mjhy trouble ker rahi hain

Nupur: lol.. kitany batmeez hona tu, koi gift plan kerny k bajay mjhy tang kerna plan ker rahy thy..

Mayank: lo gift kyun plan kero…mein khud itna bara sar tumhari life mein enter hoa hoon..yeah gift hi tumhara bus…is per hi sabar kero…

Nupur: o hello… mera gift nikalo..asay hi choro gi mein tumko

Mayank: mein chata bhi nhi aj mjhy ap ek sec k liyn bhi chorain…

Nupur: mera gift…

Mayank: first thing first… pehly mera pair choho…

Nupur: KIYA….haha in ur dreams

Mayank: no sweet heart…abhi mein tumahra pati hoo sahbash do the honurs..he said crossing his arms pointing to his feet..

Nupur: mayank mera gift do na

Mayank: kahana pehly jo kaha jaraha hai woh kero..mein mazak kerta hoon tu is k yeah matlab nhi k tum meri izaat na kero..do as I said…he said seriously

Nupur: her face dropped, she pouted with almost teary eyes… mayank tum mjhy asay treat kero gay..

Her expressions were to much to hold on to his jokes…this he can tolerate not at all... he move forward and cuped her face

Mayank: aray nhi baba mein tu mazak ker raha tha …tum janti ho mjhy..mein asa khabi kero ga tumhary sath..

She burst in to laughter and he glared at her

Nupur..tum …

Nupur:  tum meri leg pulling ker rahy thy na..lo mein ny ulta hi kerdiay..beta planning ki nhi us  k liyan aqal ki zaroorat hoti hai..tumhari planning kit u…

Mayank: mein tum ko nhi choro ga…

Nupur: mein chahti bhi nhi aj tu mjhy ek sec k liyan bhi choro…she said mimicking his seductive voice

Mayank: acha ruk

Nupur: she said running away..mayank log kiya sochy gay… room mein log bhag rahin hai…

Mayank: sochny do… sab aqalmand hai tumhari tarha…ab kyun bhag rahi ho…

Nupur: mayank yaar bus pls.. itni heavy kapro mein mjhy se nhi bhaga jara hai hai…

She sat on bed, holding her breath….

Mayank: tu jao change kero jab tak mein sochta hoon tumhain gift do k na doo…

Nupur: thik hai.. socho..mein bhi phir wohi kero gi…

……….

Mayank: nupur pls na mera gift do ..

Nupur: mein kyun pehly do… after u..tumhara behrosa nhi hai… mera gift kah jao gay..

Mayank: nhi n ladies first…

So much arguments can only happen at here wedding night.. the planning is not to make the other feel blissd rather to make them irritated, yet this the way the love each other, this how they love…

Sitting on the bed now the argument was on present…

Nupur: thik hai yeah lo…

She forwards a rectangle gift…

He opened it with so much excitement..

Mayank: wao frame…humari picture ha…his smile change into glare

Nupur: tumhari picture hai… tumhari favt

Mayank: nupur yeah kiya hai…

Nupur: tumhari reality….

It was the framed version of check list he always keep with him…having qualification of the girl he want..

Nupur: dekho mein ny kaha  tum ek bar phir se check kerlo… soch rahi hoon waha wall per lag do …kaaa mayank…

She was irritating him too much and the only way to take revenge was he pulled her hand and turned around on her back…

Mayank: nupur.. mein bhi yeahi soch raha hoo…tum mein tu is ki koi bhi quality nhi hai… sirf deemgh kahana ata hai…

Nupur: mayank choro…

Mayank: kaha na aj tu mein tum ko ek second k liyan nhi choro ga..

Nupur: cheater..mein ny tu gift diya tum ny tu woh bhi nhi kiya….choro..she was struggling to get out of his grip…

They were siting on bed on there knees, and the continous struggle made them loss there balance and fall on bed..

Mayank:  mein cheater.. han…aur tum kiya ho.. wasy I like the gift… releasing her hand..

Nupur: dekha.. aur tum ny mjhy abhi tak nhi diya…

Mayank: I have planned something more previous than just a materialistic present…

He said crawling his hand from her shoulder to hand to her waist, griping her..making it difficult for her to rply

Nupur: dialogues marna band kero… mera gift kah gay tum…

Mayank: hmm..he diped his head n kissed her neck.. wht I didn't hear u..

True her voice was cumin like a whisper..

Mayank: u realy wana have ur gift right now.. she smiled nodded in yes and hugged him … he chuckled and kissed her again…

………………

Rahul: wao yeah kiya hai… he had a pieces of paper in his hand and he went to the living room..

Where his father n mother was busy in an argument..

Mayank: dekho boothnath.. apni beti k life mein tumhary hath mein nhi day sakta

Nupur: dekho teeli… tumhari life agar meray hath mein nhi hoti tu tumhara kiya hota..

Mayank: donot call me teeli… bacho k samny bolti hoo

Nupur: bacho nay nhi suna..  aur wasay mayank ab tu tum teeli hi hogay hoo..

Mayank: oh hello..aj bhi larkiyana mjy per marti hai.. samjhi…donot doubt on my popularity booth nath..yeah tumhara beta itna muskura muskura k , kayaloo mein kho ker kiya parh raha hai..

Nupur: pata nhi… she smiled.. girlfriend k letter hai kiya..

Mayank: had hai ..email aur sms k zamnay mein tumhara beta tumhari tarha kapotoro( pigeons) per dependent hai.. tumhari speed se chala tu kiya hoga… meri bahu nhi ati ..mjhy hi kcuh kerna paray ga…

Rahul… bahu ny asa kiya likha hai jot u itna muskura raha hai

Rahul: dad apki list waqi kamal ki hain

Mayank: meri list… kaun se list

Rahul: yeah list… wao.. kya define kiya hai apny..i didn't knew ap itnay romantic hai…wao dad its so gr8..

Nupur looked at the list keenly and her eyes went wide

Nupur: yeah tum ko kah se mili…

Rahul: dad ki study se… but mom dekho yeah list follow ker k dad ko ap mili… ap mjhy bhi bulkily asa hi biwi chahy.. wao.. phool jasay hath, sitaroo jasi ankhein..

Nupur: she hit her head with her hand.. nhi..idhar do yeah list.. yeah bikar list ko dekhna bhi nhi… meri zindagi azab kerdi thi is list..

Rahul: com on mom.. dad it brilliant

Mayank: I know… per dekho mila kiya

Nupur: kiya matlab hai tumhara han… aur tum yeah list ko tu aag lag do..agar asy mein ny bahu talsh ki tu is janam mein tu nhi milay gi…

Pooja: wasy asi kaun se larki ho gi phool jasi nazauk, buter jasy hath…dad this is hilarious man

Rahul: kyun hosakti hai..try kerny mien kiya harj hai….soch ker hi kitna acha feel horaha hai

Mayank: thts like my son

Nupur: oye hello…tumharay aba ny tu yeah mjhy irritate kerny k liyan kiya tha….tum pls humain aur na kero…

Rahul: common mom meri life k sawal hai….

Nupur: islyan k rahi hoo beta.. mayank tm aur pooja sirf haso gay ya kuch  kero gay

Pooja: mom wht r u so freaked out…

Nupur: freak out… zahar se baat hai.. tum janti hoo 2 months tak is list se ur dad trouble me so much

Mayank: tu aur kiya kerta..seedha taraha tu tum manti nhi hoo… so have to make u freak out… cause ek baat tu confirm hain tab tu tum sirf meray pass hi aao gai…

Pooja: aay hay..

Rahul: per mjhy asihi larki chaiy bus.. mein single hoon Mayank Sharma k beta hoon… itna tu mein deserve kerta hoon .. bus this final…

Saying so he left with pooja .. leaving nupur and mayank.. mayank who was laughing and nupur who took the cushion and threw out on his face…

Nupur: mayank… yeah kiya musbiat hai…

She sat beside him resting her head on his shoulder… and he encircled his arms around her ..

Mayank: lol..tum aj bhi tab ki tarah react ker rahi hoo… relax kuch nhi hoga…

Nupur: tumhara beta hai… dekho tumhari jasi harkaty ker raha hai….

Mayank: woh hi tu mein kah raha hoon… meri jasy hi harkatein ker raha hai…

He said kissing her frown, she raised her head and looked at him

Nupur: kya matlab…

He smirk at her…and heard all three of them burst into laughter…

Rahul and pooja accompany there parents beside them…

Rahul: dad it was so cool.. he laughed..

Nupur: tum sab mjhy ullu bantay hoon…batmeez..dekh ab mein teri shadi hi nhi hony dogi…

All three of them touched there ears, and said sorry….

She smiled playfully hitting them… and had a family hugged..celebrating there lifes, with a little salt n peppers..

 

 

 

 


Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
edited.


Very nice epilogue Fiza.

beautiful yet hilarious.

bechare mayur ... aur koi topic nahi mila to theme par hi jhagra karne lage ... LOL😆

waise to unn dono ka jhagre me bhi pyar hai😃

wah wah ... kya dialogue hai 😆

mayur r mayur... kabhi nahi badlenge .🥱

nupur broke marriage in morning??? had hai in dono ki

par chalo shadi thik se ho gayi😳 ... koi bhag nahi gaya shadi se😆 ...aur romantic night bhi ho gaya.😛

love mayur ... how cool they are ... bt mayank ws hilarious ... email k zamane me kabootar se chitti😆

love kids ... they r so sweet.😃

lovely ending.

love ya


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
like i told u before this has been my fav, sorry for not replying regularly.

this epilogue was so sweet, how they fight!!!


Edited by np18 - 12 years ago
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very very lovely ff...


fabulous