OS - Desert Rose - Page 3

I loved this OS
great job

Originally posted by: anita_21492

I loved this OS
great job

desert rose is one of my favorite songs!!!

Mine too Anita

it is one haunting melody..that speaks of longing..

and i related that to Arnav's state of mind!!

thanks...so much for liking it!!

Anita Resonance i find in this song!!

Ke tera zikar hai?
Ya itr hai?

Jab jab karta hu...
Mehekta hu...Behekta hu...Chehekta hu...
Ke tera, tera, tera zikr hai?
Ya itr hai?

Jab jab karta hu...
Mehekta hu...Behekta hu...Chehekta hu...
Sholon ki tarah
Khusbuyon mein dehekta hu
Behekta hu, Mehekta hu
Ke tera zikr hai?
Ya itr hai?

Jab jab karta hu...
Mehekta hu...Behekta hu...Chehekta hu...
Tera zikr hai?
Ya itr hai?

Jab jab karta hu...
Mehekta hu...Behekta hu...Chehekta hu...
Teri fikr hai,
Ya fakr hai?
Jab jab karta hu...
Machalta hu...

Uchalta hu...
Fisalta hu
Pagal ki tarah
Mastiyon mein
Tehelta hu...
Uchalta hu
Fisalta hu

Tera zikr hai?
Ya itr hai?
Jab jab karta hu...
Mehekta hu...Behekta hu...Chehekta hu...

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Thanks Kauser

i am reading your work right now... i had missed it the one with Deven...it is very good..will be comment on it once i read all the four parts!!

Yeah i felt Desert Rose spoke of his latent feelings..that he cant even verbalise to himself...

yeah and there is so much silent communication between them...

Kauser????...thats mazkachazka yaar... its Mahi here... Vru Vru Vru VRUSHALIII (SRK's Darr style) tum mujhe bhool gai???....*bawls her fist and pouts* at this injustice of forgetting a year old friend...

I am so sorry!

i donno why i called you Kauser i think i have said that on two occassions..

i donno if i saw someone address you as that and wondered if i had it all wrong..all this time

but *dandbaithak* karke sorry

it wont happen again!!

Vrush...it came out better than i had envisioned...its perfect.  It's short, sweet, and full of details on their emotions and current mental state.  Of course Desert Rose is the perfect song to inspire such a scene...i truly loved it...Thanks!!!  Now, you have spoiled it for me...for a part of me will be very disappointed with tomorrow's episode if i don't get a similar scene or its equivalent...for that will leave me wanting still...and then I will ask for another scene...and this will become a viscous loop...me request...and you write!!!😛😆

I really connected with Arnav here...especially his dream...and the restlessness he feels in seeing Khushi but not being able to get to her...to save her...its was described beautifully!!   If CVs were to do such a scene...i think Barun would do it full justice...i can picture it now!!!😍
Edited by --Nargis-- - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

I am so sorry!

i donno why i called you Kauser i think i have said that on two occassions..

i donno if i saw someone address you as that and wondered if i had it all wrong..all this time

but *dandbaithak* karke sorry

it wont happen again!!

Chalo maaf kiya... tum bhi kiya yaad karogi kis saqi larki say paala para tha. Kauser's awesome yaar, but that doesn't mean kay tum mujhe bhool jao... Khair Chaddo... No worries!!

*Removes Vru from doing dandbaithak and gives a jadoo ki jhappi 🤗*

Btw.. I might be late in reading your FF yar.. so pardon me for that pleeejjj,... for now I just have to read the last chap and I'll be up to date!! yayyy.

P.S: You gave your medical clearing exams last yr na?? what happened tum nay bataya hi nahi Dr. Sahiba??... Must be doing residency right now na??

Mahi!🤗

mujhe pata tha bhagwan ke ghar der hai andher..nahi hai..
see mein hi nahi hoon jo bhool jaati hai

Mein Vrush hoon Viju nahi...jo doctor banane waali hai!!

par agar life ki doctor kehna chaho toh keh sakti ho!

jokes apart no i am not a doctor i am a quack who gives colored tablets..
namely the rose colored glasses to see serials with...

pyar ke chasme...!! you dig?

arre yaar i am just a silly woman who has nothing better to do than write some silly stuff online!!

and for mutual forgetfulness this is another big one 🤗
Edited by -RushTrip- - 12 years ago

OH MY GOSH!!!! Vrushali I'm speechless that was a beautiful OS, the way you explained their feelings was just amazing. Everything that was going through their mind the battle was fantastically explained. and the song fits perfectly! Loved it 🤗

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Vrush...it came out better than i had envisioned...its perfect.  It's short, sweet, and full of details on their emotions and current mental state.  Of course Desert Rose is the perfect song to inspire such a scene...i truly loved it...Thanks!!!  Now, you have spoiked it for me...for a part of me will be very disappointed with tomorrow's episode if i don't get a similar scene or its equivalent...for that will leave me wanting still...and then I will ask for another scene...and this will become a viscous loop...me request...and you write!!!😛😆

I really connected with Arnav here...especially his dream...and the restlessness he feels in seeing Khushi but not being able to get to her...to save her...its was described beautifully!!   If CVs were to do such a scene...i think Barun would do it full justice...i can picture it now!!!😍

mere dimaag ki mombaatti...

pehle request karti hai...phir bolti hai mein disappoint ho gayee toh?

toh kuch nahin...i am a hamster my friend...gol ghoom kar wahin...

tum bolo mujhe ye chahiye

mein boloongi jo hukum aaka!!

Arre yaar why worry about what the CVs will bring.. i am sure..kuch toh hoga..aaj ka epi according to me was the best so far...

intensity...jo mujhe chahiye thi..woh mil gayee...

toh ab... aage jo ho so ho we have this to cherish...

and jyada expect na kar..mooh ke bal giregi

aur tera back up hai na...  - ME!!

hum kuch karlenge... tum kuch bolo hum kuch likh lenge!!