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Sorry for late comment Fiza
I loved the concept its beautiful and different.
It is very difficult for me to comment on first ten chapters as I cant see nupur in pain also I cant tolerate majan and their closeness he is too much into gunjan that it feels he ignores nupur and she still cares for him, ready to sacrifice everything for his happiness, I just wish mayank understand once what she is going through I know shows care or concern for her but it is not reachig her. After reading these chapter it is difficult to know where this story heads
You have beautifully decribed nupur's pain through her POV
Chapter 11
I read this update thinking he is talking about gunjan but somewhere I felt he cant love gunjan c'mon fiza can be so cruel with us then when I read last part I was shocked then surprised ki thank god he loves only and only nupur
And he loved her from teenage and only thought about her this is next shock but happy one..
Still how can he say he hate her when he love her so much...
After reading nupurs name I have to read this update gain to feel his love for nupur
Kya jhataka diya hai manana padega
Chapter 12
Nupur's pain is killing me, she is unware of his feeling but her love for him that she is sacrificing everything for his happiness
You have beautifully potrayed his feelings of her
As ususal wonderful update loved it
Chapter 13
They loved each other so much but its sad to see how they misjudge eachothers actions
I felt Nupur has always taken initiative to lessen the gap but mayank has increased it in the name of giving her space.
Nupur is feeling so lonely at her place rememberiung about her father, its painful to see her like this when the fact is completely opposite of her thoughts.
Beautifully expressed mayank feeeling about their first morning, blessing and samrat teasing
Lovely updat beautifully expressed their POVs
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