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Posted: 12 years ago
too good.  continue soon





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part was awesome as usual
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Continued from last post...

"High is not the exact word", adds Seth.

D:"But sir, it was your decision. I just suggested it."

S:"Because, I had no other choices left."

Dhanraj, looks frustrated, "So now, I am to blame?"

Gilbert intervenes, "Oh c'mon you two! Fighting like kindergarten kids! Suhel, I believe, without your formal permission no doctor can perform such...uh...what to say...such...uh..weird...to be exact, process on their patients."

D:"But it worked. It really did. Until, Bharti did her part."

Gilbert sits down with another drink. He drinks a lot. Already Gilbert has gone through 4 pegs where Dhanraj and Seth are still trying gulp the first one.

Gilbert takes another sip, "That I know. Bharti actually never supported this process. Suhel told me once about it."

D:"You know? Then why are you asking me?"

G:"Before I come to that point, I want to know the end."

D:"When Bharti disclosed everything to Radhika, she felt she was ditched by me, ditched by everyone and suddenly she had the hallucination of her dead friend Charu. Before we can act she ran towards the barrier of the garden, which in fact a dead end cliff. She jumped from that cliff and committed suicide. I divorced Bharti after that incident and...uh...uh..."

Gilbert comes closer to Dhanraj, "Yes Dhanraj, try to remember, yes...go on."

D:"Ah...I...can't remember...how did I come here?"

Suhel stands up, 'Well, I think Dhanraj needs some rest. Go to your room Dhanraj, we'll talk later."

Gilbert rings the bell on his desk and a man comes in the room, takes Dhanraj with him and goes out.

Suhel ends his drink, "What do you see Frank?"

G: "Unfortunate, but still he can recount up to that point. That point ended his career as a doctor and made him a patient. Death of Radhika was really unfortunate."

S:"Will we get him back soon?"

G:"It's almost 4 years now. We are still working on him. The best part is he's fighting back to life. Only those moments need to be recall for."

S:"Should I call Bharti?"

G:"Did you forget what happened last time?"

Suhel now goes out of the chamber and looks back at Gilbert, "Surely Frank, this is Paradise Lost, a sure paradise lost..." and he goes out of the room.



Coming up the Epilogue - Paradise Lost...Regained!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome. OMG what a twist  Dhanraj became a patient n radhika died. 😲

congrats on completion of your story 🥳

waiting for the epilogue 😍


Swetha
Edited by vss08 - 12 years ago
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interesting waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
y dnt u born at goldn era of englsh literature :P
lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luved the story waitin for d epilouge n ur next ff
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All Parts Were Awesome Simply Just Waiting For The Last Part . 👏👏👏👏👏👏Edited by Radhikarani123 - 12 years ago
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The Epilogue: Paradise Lost...Regained


Radhika closes the Paradise Lost book and looks at Dhanraj, "Finished it."

D:"Did you like it?"

R:"Yes...but why so suspense?"

D:"I love thriller."

R:"And why Bharti?"

D:"Because...no reason."

R:"Why me as lead?"

D:"It was necessary."

R:"To kill me and marry Bharti...necessary?"

D:"She was my wife on the first place...didn't you read that?"

R:"Your wife?"

D:"Uh...I mean Dhanraj's wife."

R:"So who are you?"

D:"I'm Dhanraj Sharma...not Chopra."

R:"But I am Radhika Sharma...right?"

D:"Yes...but Mrs. Radhika Sharma."

R:"Or better to say Mrs. Radhika Dhanraj Sharma?"

D:"Sounds perfect."

R:"Now...the main part...you are eyeing my sister Bharti from a long time...so you fulfilled your fantasy with your story, huh?"

D:"Radhika...I'm a writer...and writer have to think fiction with real world."

R:"Is it?"

D:"Ofcourse...didn't you notice Dhanraj went mad after Radhika's death?"

R:"That's because preventing me from getting mad at you?"

Dhanraj's mobile rings, he receives the phone.

D:"Yeah Bharti...yeah your didi is mad at me...writers don't get independence these days...huh...okay...I'll be there with your didi...bye."

R:"Bharti called?"

D:"Yes...she told me that your dad and mom invited us for a dinner tomorrow."

Radhika gets close to Dhanraj and cuddles by him, "Thank god you're a writer not doctor. Otherwise those doctors are mad."

D: So I'm your hubby genius?"

R:"You're my darling."

Suddenly Charu enters the room, "Bhaiyaa, dinner is ready, mom is calling you both. Come on bhabhi lets go."

Radhika smiles, "Coming."

Charu leaves the room and Dhanraj kisses Radhika on her head, "Paradise...isn't it?"

The End
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow suppa suppa suppa suppa. Lvd it. Awesme.