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Posted: 12 years ago
Continued from last post...

"How's going, Suhel?" asks the man.

Dr. Seth in his chamber with a man in his 50s.

S: "I am losing hope."

M:"I relied on you."

S:"Listen, I am still working on it."

M:"Suhel, you're my school friend. I know you are the most talented and gifted psychiatrist in this whole country...and the better part is you don't accept failure."

S:"I know Prakash, but the whole scenario is going out of my hand."

M:"This is all happening because of that new doctor!"

S:"C'mon don't blame h..."

M:"Please, please", he shouts, "don't you try to save that young one! The whole problem started because of that idiot. You said that everything will be fine. I told you I don't rely on that new recruit of yours."

S:"Cool down, Prakash, cool down. If you lose your patience, we will be in a deep trouble. I am trying to save everything."

M:"Can't you understand my pain? My agony?"

S:"Yes I can. But please be calm."

M:"Now tell me what is left?"

S:"It's our last resort to fight. I have just few hours left. Then I will bring out my best arsenal."

M:"Do it!"

Suddenly Radhika storms in to the room. She looks horrified. She runs in to the room and grabs Seth's arm.

R:"Save me save me. They are trying to kill me. They will push me back to the gorge."

S:"What? Who Radhika, who? Tell me Radhika, who?"

Suddenly Radhika stands up, looks at Dr. Seth, "Charu will kill you all, Charu will kill you all!" and runs away from the room.

S:"Radhika, Radhika..." he turns towards Prakash.

Prakash looks angry and have fierce look in his eyes. He comes closer to Seth.

P:"I told you once. Now see the result. You made your actions. Look at her!"

S:"Prakash..."

P:"Enough! Do you know who she is? Tell me!"

S:"Prakash", sighs Seth, "I am sorry for your daughter...Radhika."

P:"Now tell me where I can find that stupid bast*rd Dr. Dhanraj Chopra!"

Continues in next and climax chapter: Paradise...Lost.
Edited by bengalscott - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woahhh!! while reading only i could smell Prakash is Dr, Radhika's father!! damn interesting!! looks like she isn't a doc but a patient!!!! 😲
amazing... waiting for next part!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Charu21

Woahhh!! while reading only i could smell Prakash is Dr, Radhika's father!! damn interesting!! looks like she isn't a doc but a patient!!!! 😲

amazing... waiting for next part!!! 😆



But as I said...I have still a surprise for you. 👏👏 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bengalscott



But as I said...I have still a surprise for you. 👏👏 😉

n i just can't wait for that!!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow too good part and intersting too. just can't wait do continue soon..


Swetha
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's Simply Great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Coming up soon

The EPIC Conclusion of "Paradise Lost"

One of the most anticipated FF climax in CGM Forum

In this regard I'd like to thank all my friends who supported me with warm and cordial criticisms of my story. I am overwhelmed with joy and I am highly encouraged to start my next FF "Hero" very soon.

Thank you CGM Forum, thank you India-Forum.


👏



Edited by bengalscott - 12 years ago
Amor. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
its getting interesting
loved reading it

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for it 😍


Swetha

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb nd interesting prt 👍🏼
waiting for climax.