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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Siacutie

continue ur second ff teri meri prem kahaani it was also a nice ff plz continue that one😍


ya forgot abt it 😕
will try to continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jakther

awesome post, continue soon


thanks 😛
epilogue will be up hope you'll like it too
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi friends here is the epilogue as I have told so enjoy it

Epilouge:

Ram was pacing impatiently outside the operation theatre with only one thought in his mind that let everything be fine.

Vikram who was with Ram: Ram tu ye kya kar raha hai

Ram continued his pacing ignoring the question

Vikram: tu itna tension kyun le raha hai sab thik ho jayega

Ram: tension kaise nahin loo kitna dheer ho gaya hai

Neha: fatty thoda tho patience rakho sab kuch thik hoga

Vikram: haan aur ab tu baith yaha pe, made Ram sit on the chair and gave him a pill as he was very stressed

Ram: nahin maine Priya ko promise kiya tha ki main pills nahin lunga

Ram was very stressed so he rested his head on the wall behind him, he then remembered their journey his and Priya's journey from the day when they knew that they were about to become parents to this day how they hugged each other when he knew that he was about to become papa then after few months they came to know that they are going to have twins the moment Ram knew about it his first concern was about the complications it may lead to doctor assured him that everything was fine they were on top of the world knowing that now one more angle would join their world their fight whether it would be a boy or a girl Ram wanted a girl where as Priya wanted a chota golu like Ram, he remembered Priya's mood swings how difficult was it for him as he dint know how her mood would change and her mid night carvings he too took this as an opportunity and enjoyed with Priya but couldn't enjoy for long as this was his Priya who wouldn't allow him to easily change his diet which she has been working on for so long then his surprise for Priya by arranging their kids room he still could remember the happiness on her face and her  twinkling eyes, today… when Priya was in pain they brought her to the hospital 

Ram: doctor sab kuch thik ho jayega na

Doctor: Mr.Kapoor kuch complications hai but we'll try our best

Ram: doctor please meri Priya… with that word Ram came back to reality he got up looked around Vikram and Neha were beside him along with their families

After sometime doctor came out and gave the happy news that Priya and kids were fine and told that he he is now father to a boy and a girl.

There were no bounds for Ram's joy: doctor kya main Priya se mil sakhta hoon

 Doctor: hum kuch dher mein Priya ko doosre room mein shift kardhenge phir aap mil sakthe hai

As soon as doctor left Vikram and Neha hugged Ram and congratulated him which was followed by other family members both family members were very happy to hear this and were congratulating each other.

Ram entered the room and saw Priya lying in the bed she looked tried he went towards her, held her hand in his Priya opened her eyes and saw him

Ram: tum thik tho ho na

Priya just nodded head with a smile knowing that he was very tensed about her: humare bacche

Ram: ek ladka aur ek ladki

Priya: humare Luv aur Khushi

Ram: kya…

Priya: humare baccho ke naam

Ram: Luv aur Khushi…

Priya: haan maine socha ki agar dono ladke hote tho Luv aur Khush hota Ram ke Luv Khush aur jab ab ek pari hai tho khushi there was a knock on the door and two nurses entered the room carrying babies

Nurse: Sir aap ke bacche

Ram went to them to get a look at them but he couldn't see properly as his eyes were moist with the joy he wiped his tears then saw the two babies only one word came to his mind angels… who were now his life, nurse tried to give him the baby but Ram didn't accept

Ram: nahin

Priya: kya hua Ram

Ram: Priya dekho na ye kitna chote hai agar maine thik se nahin pakda tho

Priya: kuch nahin hoga Ram

Ram: nahin Priya kitna delicate lag rahe hai agar inhe chot laga tho

Priya: Ram please aap unhe godh mein lijiye na after a lot of insistence Ram took one baby in his arms as soon as he took the baby in his arms he felt so happy on the top of the world he raised his hand to touch the baby but with only his fore finger he caressed the baby's cheek he thought if he used his whole hand he would hurt the baby then he gave the baby to Priya and he took another baby too to from the nurse and went to Priya.

 Ram: thank you Priya this is the most precious gift in my life and kissed on her forehead.

Ram too sat near Priya both were looking at the babies with their eyes filled with tears of joy then one of the baby has opened eyes and was looking at them then the other baby too smiles were spread on the faces of Ram and Priya

Priya: kitne pyaare hai na 

Neha: pyaare tho honge hi na fatty ke jaise ofcourse Priya ke jaise bhi abhi humhe bhi dekh na hai

Vikram: haan yaar kab tak hum bahar khade hoke wait karenge

Rishab: hum sab bhi tho milna chahte hai humare naye chote Kapoors se all the family members entered the room.

Few years later:

A small girl slowly opened the door and peaked into the room seeing that her mother was not there she went to the bed and slowly climbed the bed snuggled closer to her dad and slept. Ram woke up after some time sensing that some one was snuggling close to him he opened his eyes and saw his Khushi closing her eyes he felt another hand on him he turned the other side and found Luv also sleeping

Ram: chale ab jaldi utt jayiye bahut natak hogaya

Khushi: papa aap ko kaise pata ki hum natak kar rahe hai

Luv: papa hum natak nahin kar rahe hum tho soo rahe hai

Khushi: haan papa hum soo rahe hai aur soothe hue logo ko disturb nahin karte aap ko nahin pata

Ram: accha th aap dono soo rahe hai aur kya kaha aap ne disturb… hmmm aap ke mama ko aane do phir pata chalega ke disturb kya hota hai

Luv: papa mama ke aane tak tho sone do na

Ram: accha ek batao aaj aap dono subah subah aap ke papa ke paas kya kar rahe hai aaj aap ko school nahin jaana

Khushi: papa aap kitne sweet ho aap kitni jaldi samjh jate ho

Luv: haan papa aap bahut sweet ho and kisses him on his cheek and Khushi too kisses him

Ram: aap dono na ye maskha lagana bandh karo aur baath kya hai ye batao

Both he kids were now sitting and making signs to each other for the other person tell

Ram: ye kya ho raha hai… jo pehle batayega na use ek chocolate milege

Then both the kids together said: aaj humhe school nahin jaana

Ram: aur woh kis liye

Luv: papa kal humara bday hai na tho

Priya was listening to their conversation till now entered the room: haan aap dono ka bday hai lekin kal… tho phir aaj kyun

Luv: mama kal tho Sunday hai na

Khushi: haan mama ek chotti tho leni hogi na school se bday jo hai

Priya: nahin koi chutti nahin lega aap dono school jayege ab jaa ke ready ho jayiye

Both the kids hugged their dad and whispered to him: humhe school nahin jaana

Ram: Priya agar ye dono nahin jaana chahte hai tho rehne do… but stopped in mid way as Priya was looking at him

Priya: Ram aap bhi na… aap inka saath kyun de rahe hai aap ko bhi tho office jana hai na

Luv and Khushi: nahin aaj papa ne chutti li hai Priya looked at Ram he just nodded his head sideways

Priya: agar aap dono abhi school jayenge tho phir main aap dono ko shopping lejaungi aur ab chaliye ready ho jayiye aur haan Ram aap bhi jaldi aa jayiye

In evening all were in the shopping mall Priya and kids were in toys section after sometime Priya realized that Ram was not there with them so she along with kids were looking for him, they found him looking at some dresses for kids by the time Priya came to Ram there was a pile of dresses which he had selected and was looking for more

Priya: Ram aap ye kya kar rahe hai… ye itni sari dresses kis ke liye hai

Ram: kis ke liye kya… humare Luv aur Khushi ke liye

Priya: itni saari… aap har baar aisa hi karte hai ek wardrobe tha woh bhar gaya aur ek naya banvaya woh bhi bhar gaya aura b ye sab…

Ram: ek aur banvalenge

Priya: Ram please…

Seeing Priya angry he backed out: thik hai tum hi select karo and he started chatting with the kids

Next day:

Ram went to the kids room kissed them on the forehead

Luv and Khushi: mama sone do na

Ram: aareh kaise sone de aaj aap ka bday jo hai happy bday both the kids opened their eyes hugged him and were smiling: thankyou papa

Priya kissed them: happy bday then they hugged her: thankyou mama

Priya: ab jaldi se ready ho jayiye

Khushi: mama aaj tho Sunday hai tho hum kya karenge

Ram: aap dono aaj mere saath khelnge

Priya: aur mere saath bhi they all enjoyed together later in the evening their was a party

After party Priya and Ram together put the kids to the bed, they were in their room      

Priya: aap kitna laad karte hai unki har wish puri karte hai, itna jyada laad bhi nahin karna chahiye

Ram: kyun

Priya: bacche ziddi ho jaate hai

Ram: tumhari tarah…

Priya: kya kaha aap ne… turned other side

Ram came towards her hugged her from behind: maine tho mazak kar raha tha and made her face him: tum jo ho unke aur mujhe sambhalne ke liye

Priya hugged him: aur aap hamesha ki tarah mera saath denge

Ram: haan jis tarah tum mera saath dethi ho love you

Priya: love you too.


This is my first ff altast completed it after so many breaks 😆 thanks to everyone for your love and support 🤗hope you all loved the epilogue any criticism welcomed 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
okk so me first...yaay😃
so glad that u updated it, will read and comment back
and just a reminder-plz continue ur other FF "Teri Meri Prem Kahani"😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
very good epilogue...thank you..😛...enjoyed reading your work👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Really great writing! 👏 Enjoyed reading your FF a lot! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh! 😍how cute it is, Lovely, in real show I want Raya to have tiwns, tumne dil khush kar diya.. So beautiful.. Love it.🤗big hug to you..
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Posted: 11 years ago


marvellous epilogue hats off to ur writing too gud very nice
keep them coming @continue ur 2nd ff plzzz😍luv the bonding of ram with kidz
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb..ohhh i loved to see in balh yaaar
this epilogue brings a wide grin on my face
thank youuu dear
you made my day