New OS " A Good-bye Kiss vs. an Eternal Kiss" - Page 10

awesome!! I just loved it. Actualy i loved this film and reading my fav couples's story as in film was just superb. I too was imagining it but i didnt think that good the way u have prensented. The song was breath taking and well written wid maaneet scene! I just loved it. Thank u very much for giving me oppurtunties by pming me!! Do pm me other updates too. I will love to read them

beautiful i just loved it, mai nai bodyguard abhi tak nahi dehki, but i just loved each and every bit of this OS specially song and khoon bhari maang part 

AWESOME OS U R A FABULOUS OS WRITER WHEN WE READ AN FF IT SHOWS TREMONDOUS OF FEELINGS LOVE, CARE, AFFECTION,NAUGHTINESS,MIRCH MASALA, RONA DHONA etc...BUT I COULD FIND EVERYTHING UNDER THIS OS...ALL IN ONE...ALL THE EMOTINS FEELINGS...REALLLY NICE ...TC😊

awesome thank u for the pm

Lovely zee...i first time read ur work n its ws really good jus luved it...keep rocking...!!

so beautiful story...really really lvd it...keep writing some more os...

beautiful and musical one..
luvd it a lot..

awsum..luvd it..it ws so touchin n beautiful...thx 4 sucha beautiful OS..

hey that was really nice ….!!! 👏

OMG that was AWESOME :-D
Loved da song lyrics ;)