DEJAVU II (horror) UPDATING

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kahkashansakina

@kahkashansakina

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Awesome update

very intersting

loved it

I thought maan is ghost ROFL🤣

pls cont

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Samra

@ssch

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Mehek25
Awesome update. Am a bit confused. But no problem will have patience and wait for ur story to unfold. Feeling a bit spooky but i guess thats the fun of it.Thanx for the update and PM. Pls continue soon.Am already anxious for the story to unfold.

sorry cant help it story thore low pace pe hi chali ge start me

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ana56

@ana56

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

awesome update boss ji

continue soon

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poongs123

@poongs123

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

😊Awesome update dear 😊 plz continue soon dear

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Kamalika

@KamalikaG

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Wow wow superb update yaar!😊

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

nice update lovely

please cont soon

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: ssch
thanx
lucky you did not jump to conclusions like others

you will see the characters very soon

but kia karo thore to lambe lambe coments thore ziada no me chahiye tabhi mere likhne i gari me fuel full ho ga na

hehehe...I agree...fuel to chahiye...I always try to give my share 😊

and I am sure when ur story will move ahead...ur gari will get overloaded with fuel😉

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Bingo ...same thing when I was reading part 1 first I thought may be Geet coming to Maan but then colors of the dialogues gave me hints that she is not Geet...

Part 2 very interesting emotional update...Maan is alone and in pain because Geet is not with him...because of seeing him in pain Yash is running from commitment...now where is Geet? what happen to her? why is Maan alone and if this is reincarnation story then whose reincarnation?

I am waiting eagerly for further update to get some hints of the answers...thanx for pm Samra

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago

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saam123

@saam123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

SAM very nice ff & awesome update but one thing did not understand IS maan is dead . if he is dead then how come yesh can talk with him. where is geet. little confusing but still love this.