MG[FF]Maan Proposes Geet Disposes[Thread1/Note149]

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

Niceee
cont soon
thanks for the pm
sorry my likes and comments will be late because of school! i tend to only get a chance to come online on Friday nights!

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

part 4 ...

awesome ...

superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

Today finally i took time out for your updates..this one is looking very interesting...I can understand why Maan is captain in this...😃 and then rishta for her sis...

looks like triangle planning...

Good going...

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Preethi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

😊 Nice Nice update Jazi... I was so much involved with it that when it ended i was liek OMG! This is it?

Maan and his mommy relationship... maan and his dad's relationship...😆 Where will all this stop Jaz? 😃 i mean the similarittes!😃😆😳

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

Ok, now I understand from the Prologue and other chapters that the rishta has come for Sameera but Savitri will choose Geet once she sees her - either during the family ceremonies or on the wedding day 😆

You have been writing in an awesome way..the language is lovely...Geet has a childishness about her which is very endearing and Maan is the complete opposite...

Waiting eagerly for them to get connected😆

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: mechantefille
I have messed up with my computer right after it was fixed and I am gonna get it good so updating my posts, before my funeral.

i loved Maan and his bond with his father...esp the dialogue where he states that he does what his dad asks. that's adorable.

I liked the contrast that you've shown. Sameera and Meera being the ones who teach Geet the steps and listen to the music, but it's Geet who is the extroverty confident one - whoventures forth to perform!!

Nicely done, m'lady!

Thank you.

Hope your PC is hale and hearty now.😆

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: bansipatel
Awesome update..!!
maan ki entry..haaayyee...!! lovely..!!
update soon..!!
eager to know how they'll meet n who they r hooked up with..!!
update soon..!!

Thank you :)

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
yippi...
finally got maan's entry in fourth update...ankhen taras gayi thi😆
BTW...geet pe maan ka impression kuch jama nahi...
ab zara maneet ki bhi meeting kara de...dont tell its only in 15th update..coz i will come and chew ur brain...😆

Lolz...bechare fauji hai...you want him to leave duty only for you to feast your eyes on him😆

*jazzy serves her brain on a dish to Reva* Gasp!! How did you know they won't meet till 15th update??😲🤣

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana
Luved the update!

Maan's character seems amazing...strong integrity despite less than brilliant influences.
Geet seems so cute, always jumping around😆
Wonder how the Cap is going to handle her...especially is she makes him dance!😉

PS: I am flattered that you consider me a favorite author😳
Your writing is pretty amazing...so no need to hide!

Thank you :)

As my father always says...to learn two ways by example...either you know what to do...or you find out what not to do.

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Awesome part dear...

Wow...Maan is an agyakari beta han...good...

Geet is really very cute...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.

Thank you :)