Ram: holds her from back…and both sit on a rock… asks…priya… waise
kitne mahine hue?
Priya: 2
Ram: lekin tumhara pet toh…flat hi hai…
Priya: ram… kya do mahine me… ? hmmm aap na… bilkul… hi..buddhu
hai…and gives a pat on his head…
Ram: priya… main naa…. Tumhare saath har pal rehna chahta hoon… apne
bache ki hone waale hare k aahat ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon…
priya…priya…. And sees that priya..is off to sleep… and says… ye
priyabhi na… baithe baithe so gayi…. And smiles…
Its 6 am in morning:
Priya wakes up… and finds ram sitting in front of her…
Priya: Ram aap? Hum yaha kaise aa gaye? Hum toh… light house me…aur
aap Itni subah subah uth gaye ur woh bhi apne aap…?
Ram: haan kyun uth nahi sakta kya? Shaadi ke pehle bhi uth jaata tha apne aap…
Priya: nahi mera matlab hai..itni jaldi…
Ram: takes priya's hands in his and says woh mujhe naa..raat bhar
neend nahi aayi priya… toh..
Priya: toh mujhe utha diya hota… mujhe toh pata hi nahi chala ke main
kab so gayi… aur hum yahan kab aaye…
Ram: woh..tum shayad thak gayi thi…tum wahi..mere kaandhe pe sar rakh
ke so gayi… toh isliye main tumhe yaha leke aa gaya… waise… pata
hai..sote waqt tumhare chehre pe ek muskutahat thi… toh main tumhe
disturb nahi karna chahta tha,….
Priya: smiles… lowers her eyes… and says… chaliye… mujhe uthna hai..
bahut kaam hai..classes jaana hai…
Ram: ek minute… aaj Sunday hai..aur sab ko chutti hai… aur aaj humari
anniversary hai… aur aaj hum don sirf ek dusre ke saath waqt
bitayenge… so no classes… ok
Priya: jo hukum… shahenshah…. Waise agar aapki izazat ho toh
main…fresh ho jaaoo?
Ram: haan haan kyun nahi…
Priya gets freshened up…
Its 9 am…
Ram playing on laptop…
Priya: ram…ye kya shor hai…aap kya kar rahe hai ram?
Ram: main game khel raha hoon…
Priya: game? Aur aap.. and sits besides him…
Ram: haan kyun.. ab main papa banne wala hoon…toh apne bache ke saath
khelne ke liye…abhi se tayari kar raha hoon…woh kya hai na… kaafi saal
ho gaya hai… games khele hue…toh..i need practice…
Priya: laughing….aap bhi na… ram… ye sab bandh kijiye..and haan…
bachon ko aap…aap ke tarah…couch potato nahi banayenge… aap ..unke
saath… outdoor games khelenge…samjhe aap?
Ram: tumne mujhe couch potato kaha?
Priya: bites her lips.. and says…sorry…lekin…maine jhooth toh nahi kaha naa…
Ram: pretends to be angry… turns his face… and gets up from couch… and
starts walking out of room…. When..priya holds his hand and says…
Priya: Sorry…Ram…and holds her ears…main toh mazak kar rahi thi…
Ram: laughs a loud and says… main gussa nahi hoon… main neeche jaa
raha hoon… woh…car me… mera cell reh gaya hai..
Priya: haay…checks his body temperature and says… aap ko toh aaj
bukhar bhi nahi hai… toh phir aap aise ?
Ram: kya aise kya?
Priya: nahi aap khud jaa rahe hai cell lane toh …vishwas nahi hua and
starts giggling…
Ram: tum naa…. Kabhi nahi sudhrogi…and walks out of room…
Priya…sitting and reading book… Ram enters…. Upset…
Priya: kya hua ram? Aap itne Udas kyun hai?
Ram: kamal hai..aaj hamari anniversary hai..aur kisi ne wish nahi
kiya… vikram aur neha ne bhi nahi?
Priya: haan maa and papa ne bhi nahi… gets sad…
Ram: hey priya…tum itni udaas mat ho… see…lets enjoy together… hum bahar chale…
Priya: woh ram… bahar toh jaana hai…lekin ghumne nahi…
Ram: toh phir?
Priya: woh aaj doctor ne check up ke liye bulaya hai…aur aapko bhi…
Ram: ye tum mujhe ab bata rahi ho..?
Priya: nahi woh...main bhul gayi thi…
At hospital…
Doctor checks priya… and gives the necessary.. vitamin tablets…
Ram takes priya outside and asks her to sit… there..and says…main ek
miunte aya… agla appointment leke aata hoon…
Ram: doctor… priya is alright na… you gave her so many tablets to
take…isliye…pucha..
Doctor: yes..she is absolutely fine… she is weak..Mr.
kapoor..isliye…usse..vitamin tablets diye hai… don't worry…
Ram: thanks doctor… when should I get her next?
Doctor: 1 minute..and gives him the check up… schedule…
Ram comes out of doctor's cabin…and says.. chalein priya…
Outside..hospital…Priya trips..again…and ram holds her…
Ram: ye kya hai priya? Abhi toh tumhe apne aap ko sambhalna
chahiye…tumhe apne saath saath…bache ka bhi… khayal rakhna hai … main
har baar nahi rahunga…tumhare saath…
Priya: sorry …
Ram: chalo..ab thik se chalo…
Ram and priya have lunch outside together… go to siddhi vinayak to
take blessings…
Its 7 pm..Ram gets a call…
Ram: haan vikram… bol
Vikram: kya hai..ram..kaha hai tu? Dopahar se call kar raha hoon…woh
actually..kal ke meeting ka discussion karna hai..main tere gharpe
hoon abhi..come soon…
Ram: haan woh actually… main…hos…when priya…stops him…and says…abhi nahi…
Ram: woh.. main abhi…woh… hosiery shop main hoon… aadhe ghante main aajaunga…
Both Ram and priya enter ..kapoor mansion…
Ram; ye itna andhera kyun hai…. Vikram ne toh kaha tha…ke woh… ghar
pe…hai…toh phir…
When..lights come on…and everybody,..say…happy anniversary….
Rama and priya…surprised….aap logon ko yaad tha?
Niharika, ishika, nutz, rishubh, shipra, sudhir, Ayesha, karthik,
vikram, neha, daadi all wish them…good luck..
Ram and priya…cut cake… and give the first bite to each other…
Ram: woh I have an announcement…
All surprised? aanouncement?
Ram: woh… mera aur priya..ka promotion hone wala hai… I mean..sirf
hamara nahi… aap sabka…promotion hone wala hai… 7 mahine baad….
Vikram: tu ye kya bol raha hai? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai….
Ram: woh…actually… main papa banana wala hoon..aur priya..maa….
All shocked… happy….
Vikram..hugs ram and says…congrats yaar…
All congratulate priya and ram.. for the good news
Karthik- Natasha…
Natasha: bhai … hum logon ki shadi ek saath hui…aur aap…ne… itni jaldi…
Priya: shy..turns and is about to leave… when neha holds her…
Neha: arre..tum abhi kyun Sharma rahi ho? Hey karthik nutz… tum dono…
ye fatty aur…priya ko kyun ched rahe ho… and smiles…
All happy… except niharika…
In niharka's room:
Niharika: sach keh rahe the..bhaiyya… meri hi mati maari gayi thi…. Jo
priya..ko is ghar me..leke aayi… ab ye… maa…matlab… ram ke poore
jaaydad ka waaris… nahi..main aisa hone nahi dungi….
Ishika /Nutz/ Rishubh in niharika's room:
Rishubh: maa… aap aise soch bhi kaise sakti hai…. Woh bhai hai…jinhone
hume kabhi sautela nahi samjha…
Ishika and nutz: haan maa… plz.. sambhalo apne aap ko… aap sab galat
soch rahi hai..aap kyun ram bhai se..itne…jalte hai maa… ram bhai ne …
hum sab se jyada aapko izat di… humse jyada pyar karte hai…
aapko…kabhi…aapke khilaf kuch nahi bola… aur aap unse hi
itni..nafrat..kyun maa? Sirf paiso ke liye..?
Rishubh: maa… aaj aapne aisa soch kar… apne aap ko..hamari nazron
me..gira diya hai…
All three turn and are about to leave room… when they see…ram and
priya…standing ram has tears in his eyes…
Ram: maa..ye sab main kya sun raha hoon…aap… mujhse nafrat…? Kyun
maa?…sirf paison ke liye… aap mujhse… acha bartaav… jaanti ho..maa…
mere zindagi me..aapse..zyada koi maayine nahi hai… ye paise
bhi..nahi… aapko..sirf…paise chahiye na.. maa… thik hai… main apni
puri property…aapke naam karta hoon… aur kabhi aapke saamne nahi
aaunga… turns and takes priya… and is about to leave room… when… Nutz/
ishika/ rishubh: ek minute bhai… aap akele nahi hai… hum bhi aapke
saath challenge….
Niharika: nahi…tum sab… nahi jaoge… ram..i am sorry…main paison ke
lalach me..andhi ho gayi thi… sorry ram…mujhe chodkar mat jao..priya,
mujhe maaf kardo…aaj ke din..mere wajah se…tumhe…dukh hua hai.. and
folds her hand…
When priya says…
Priya: Nahi maa…. Maana aapse galti hui hai..lekin aap badi hai..aap
aise..maafi maange.. ye thik nahi hai…. Aapka haath uthna
chahiye..lekin sirf aashirwad..dene ke liye…
Niharika: hugs priya and says… main bahut khush hoon..ke mujhe tum
jaisi bahu mili…infact..bahu ke roop me…beti mili…
Ram hugs niharika and says…ab se aisa kabhi mat kehna maa..ke main
aapka sautela beta hoon…
7 months later… in hospital…
Ram walking tensed outside OT… Niharika, ishika, nutz, rishubh,
shipra, sudhir, Ayesha, karthik, vikram, neha ..in hospital…tensed…
When doctor comes out…
Doctor; congratulations Mr. kapoor…aapko .. twins hue hai… ek ladka aur ladki…
Ram: aur priya? Kaisi hai…
Doctor: she is fine… youcan meet them once they are shifted to ward…
Ram enters ward… hugs priya..and says… Mubarak ko..begum sahiba…
Priya: aapko bhi… shahensha…
Priya: waise…aapne kya naam socha hai..bachon ke liye?
Ram: woh.. . ram scatches his head…and says..main ladki chahta
tha..isliye…ek hi naam socha tha…"piya"…mere priya ki piya….
Priya: smiles and says..acha hai… aur main chahti thi..ladka ho…isliye
maine naam socha tha… "prem"… ram aur priya..ka prem…
Ram smiles and says…humare...prem aur piya…
And hug each other…
Ayesha/ karthik/ rishubh/ sid/ nutz/ ishika/vikram/ neha… say…yaha bhi
romance..hum log raah dekh rahe hai…ram… priya aur bachon se milne ke
liye…
Ram: arre toh aa jao na…
4 years 3 mothslater…
Ram: arre priya… meri tie kaha hai?
Priya: wahi wardrobe me..hogi ram… thik se dekhiye na… main bachon ko
tayar kar rahi hoon… and says…prem – piya..jao..neeche jao aur
dekho…rishubh chaha… tayar hue ya nahi… jao…
Priya: ram..aap abhi bhi..tayar nahi hue…
Ram: meri tie kaha hai priya…
Priya: aapse ek kaam nahi hota ram… and gets tie…wahi thi.. wardrobe
me… aap bhi..na… ye lijiye..
Ram hugs her.. and says… bachon ke aane ke baad…toh ghar me..meri
value hi kum ho gayi hai… koi mujhe time hi nahi deta… koi pyar hi
nahi karta..
Priya: turns around… and says. Ole ole… ye mera bada bacha kya keh
raha hai….. and puts her arms round his neck and says….
Ram: holds her waist and says… aapke bache ko kiss chahiye… woh bhi abhi….
Priya: gently slaps his… cheeks and says.. aap na… bade… besharam… ho
ram…pehle toh the hi..lekin…abhi kuch jyada hi… ho gaye hai…
Ram: smiles… and says… hoon toh sahi…. Lekin…aaj kis liye bagair…
nahi… chodunga… and moves towards door holding priya in his
arms…looking into her eyes……and kisses her…
There is a knock at door…
Ayesha: dii… dii… chaliye.. sab aapka raah dekh rahe hai… neeche…
Priya: haan Ayesha abhi aayi…Ram chodiye mujhe.. neeche jaana hai… now
chaliye… checks herself in mirror… and opens the door… and says…
chaliye aap bhi…. Ram… holds her hand… and both go down…
Its their…5th marriage anniversary…
Vikram: ram bahut der laga di….
Neha: haan priya ne choda nahi hoga na…fatty aaj…
Ram: nahi aisa kuch nahi hai…
Neha: kya kuch nahi hai… priya.. aise pyar ke nishaan… dikhne laayak
nahi chodte priya…
Priya sees… her lipstic.. mark on ram's neck… and quickly wipes it
with… hanky… embarrassed…
Neha: hota hai hota hai…
Ram and priya… holding each other's hands say… in 5 saalon me..kitna
kuch badal gaya hai na ram…
Priya: Rishubh and Ayesha married and I am so lucky ayesha to have you
as my devrani… (yes… rishubh and Ayesha are married ;-))
Sid… is married to Neha's younger sister Sneha…
Ishika..has a year old son… Nutz is carrying…
Ram: haan… and you are looking beautiful and hot day by day…
Priya: ram..aapko bhi na.. bas… flirt karne ka bahana chahiye rehta
hai… lekin…ek baat kahu… aapka ye romantic andaz… mujhe bade ache
lagte hai…
Ram: aur mujhe tumhare ye pyar bhare…nakhre bade achelagte hai…priya
(BALH music in bg)
Ayesha- Rishubh: Dii / bhabhi…chaliye na… sab aapka wait kar rahe
hai…aap..romantic…. baatein…baad me karna…
Both cut cake…everybody enjoy party together…
And …. All live happily together…
The End……..
Hi friends... here i end my FF on a high and sweet note... hope you all enjoyed reading it...
Your suggestions and comments motivated me... to continue this FF till the 50 page of forum and could'nt believe that i...who cannot read a 50 pages novel patiently... have actually written more than 150 pages (word document ff)... and continued it say about more than 3 months...😛
I would like to thank the forum co-ordinator's who gave a platform for writing...and for indirectly... showing a ...writer... in myself and further motivating me..by not removing post from forum and help me continue... this till date...
Last but not least... i request all readers to ...please comment... on this FF... how they felt.. my writing...good or bad... and give a motivating one liner to me... so that...i can keep the writer in me... alive...and active...
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