The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113 - Page 60

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maan4EVA

Saammy I see you online


See what you made me...I have become a stalker 😆

😆 me too...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Looks who's back in town 😳 I hardly ever come on IF now but I had to come back just for you. I hope this working incase your annoyed and it's also padding out my post since I think I lost my ability to write super long posts 😔
Anyways I was in a bit of bad mood and needed something to cheer me up and make me laugh which is how I landed up in your FF. I was killing myself laughing catching up all the updates I've missed, omg Geet has THE BEST witty remarks ever 🤣 I think this is my fav Geet out of all your Geets and I'm even envious of a fictional's characters wit, how sad does that make me 😳 The things she says to the gangster make me go 😲 literally. Especially considering she is usually in some crazy dangerous situation, talk about working under pressure. Most ppl would have trouble keeping control of their bodily fluids let alone coming out with cracking one liners.
Oh I've realised I don't think I have lost my ability to talk a load of crap, this post is already longer than what I thought it would be and I haven't even started talking about the last update 😳
I couldn't actually believe he was drowning Geet in the 2nd last update, I think this FF has been a shocker to me, I still remember being shocked when he shoot her. So there is only one way to come back after nearly killing the person you love... it is to have an awful heartbreaking traumatic story to explain why your soo screwed up 😆 well i'm not actually sure that is enough, since I would still be pissed off if I was her, I do hold grudges esp when it comes to attempts on my life, sorry that's just the way I am, can't change it even for a hot gangster 😆
So I was very upset and annoyed at the gangster and was thinking there's no way he can redeem himself to me like he cares but I like to think he does as i'm very in with his creater (ps that's you I mean and not his mum as I don't know who she is). But then I read that whole sneeze incident and I was like he is sweet 🤣 I can't believe he went running after one sneeze, he then even told himself off for running to her like that but then went running back a sec later after she sneezed again 😆 Then he called her a banshee so he was heading for another black mark but then she sneezed in his face 😳 I was oh no, she is going to be in troubleee *imagine it extended in an americain accent 😆 But then he took it soo well, so basically I've let him off the hook for drowning as he accepted her snot on his face soo well. For all we know she could be carrying swine flu or MRSA up her nose it might be a lethal sneeze 🤓 Plus he ran off like a girl when he thought she was going to wake up scared of her screaming and ranting at him 😆
The line at the dinner table about shaving her legs, omg I choked myself no wonder MSK did 🤣🤣🤣 It's her hardly the usual dinner table talk let alone to a man and then a violent gangster on top of it, she is one crazy chick ⭐️ Even MSK nearly burst into a grin if he didn't have to keep up his macho macho man imagine. I bet they were all laughing inside too but scared of their boss 😔
I wanted to know what she was going to say next too, who knows what would come out of her mouth before they were rudely interupted by his last mistress 😕😲😡 So i was about to get annoyed again when he said the line about her beauty being pale in comparison to her stunning vibrancy so I'll hold back dunking his head down the toilet for now. He does like it rough this boy, holds back from shoving her with a tight squeeze that makes her wince *hai rabba now I feel sorry for his tarty mistress, that's a first 😳 but then the slip into his bed naked thing, well she deserved that shove then and nice save there 😉
OMG i can't believe you did this, you crazy nutter 🤗🤣 Never ever have I seen any writer write about constipation 😳 I was surprised when you mentioned it before briefly but this was like 6/7 paragraphs all about she couldn't do a number 2 🤣 Your heroines are always embarassing themselves infront of MSK, your soo cruel 🤣
The line about pushing out a lovechild from JA or AR 🤣🤣🤣 was she expecting twins or was it going to be who is the daddy storyline plot, i'll be the shoulder to cry on for whoever is upset 😈
The toilet seat has been where many great life changing decisions have made, I'm sure of it but ppl are just too embarrassed to admit it 😉😆 I was worried she going to pass out whilst on the toilet seat but thankgod you had some mercy on her
Constipation to stomach cancer, I knew her imagination would get her in more trouble 🤣 I remember being at uni and thinking maybe I have that disease when they would tell about the symptoms 😳🤣 So no wonder after reading wiki she ended up thinking that 😆
You could be onto a new non-drug treatment for constipation tho, I scary car ride with a gangster shooting traffic lights is def enought to give anyone the runs 😆
So i was impressed by his concern and care over our constipated Geet til the last line where I gulped and thought shit I wouldn't want to be in her shoes 😆
Right that's enough from moi, love you loads please don't tortue me 😆 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzz update soon.
where r those days whn u gave back to back updates :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sammy when r u updating??? please update soon... @Parm - ur comments was sooo long... rofl... well atleast that will make sammy happy... as for me...i hv been at such a great loss of words even now that am not able to describe how brilliant a writer sammy is... one lines by Geet and actions of Maan and so shocking and surprising that no comment comes outta me... 😆😆😆😆😆😆... just goes to show how witty sammy thinks as am sure none of us wud hv ever come up with one liners she writes for geet in every situation nor wud anyone else hv written about constipation...😆😆😆😆😆
BTW Pram miss u loads... mwah... incase u dint recognise me... me is Gouri... changed moi name 😆😆😆😆
Edited by vivacious_gurl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

Sammy when r u updating??? please update soon... @Parm - ur comments was sooo long... rofl... well atleast that will make sammy happy... as for me...i hv been at such a great loss of words even now that am not able to describe how brilliant a writer sammy is... one lines by Geet and actions of Maan and so shocking and surprising that no comment comes outta me... 😆😆😆😆😆😆... just goes to show how witty sammy thinks as am sure none of us wud hv ever come up with one liners she writes for geet in every situation nor wud anyone else hv written about constipation...😆😆😆😆😆

BTW Pram miss u loads... mwah... incase u dint recognise me... me is Gouri... changed moi name 😆😆😆😆

😳😆 ummm yeah that was me out of practicing at replying back as I have been awol a bit recently on the FF and had missed several updates so I had to make it up to Sammy and give her something of a decent length, not sure about the quanlity tho 😆
But I don't know why it's only Sammy who gets these super long FF replies, I normally write a few lines to other ppl but with her, I can't stop my non-stop jabbering 😳😆 It takes me forever to write a reply back so I have to make sure I'm not about to go somewhere or its near bedtime before I start 😆 So hopefully my twin is happy with my efforts 😉
I'm not very good at describing how much of a great writer Sammy is, cause I'm awful when it comes to things like that and with words in general hence why i'm a maths and sciene gal at uni but I can talk a load of rubbbish really well 😆 Plus I don't think anyone could describe how amazing she is as well as she does herself 😛🤣 But i found this FF esp shocking and even I am lost for words most times when I was reading at it esp as this MSK is totally different from the rest
I'm one of those ppl who can never comeup with the witty comment on cue, but thinks of one 5 mins later 😡😆 I think Sammy needs to tutor me as she is the Queen 😆
Thanks for telling me Gouri as I wouldn't have known it was you, why did you change it from deniac? I do miss the old days too 🤗
but I will be back in this FF, freaking you out with longgg comments 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
^ tears don't work on her, only compliments of how amazing she is or bribes of hot men 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Parm dont u think deniac shelf life was over?? i hvnt been to den in ages..i only visit FF section... then y continue with that name??? 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Gouri cause I liked the name 😆 only the den wala know it's origin but it was unique and interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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21 times for 21 Days. IT's better if I dont have to paste it again with editions. I have some other ideas 😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh plz take us out of this boredom. where r u 😒
update sooon 😍

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