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Posted: 12 years ago
rupu...wow...itne sare๐Ÿ˜ณ...thnx sweety...tere liye bhi๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys๐Ÿค—...lo aa gayi me part 2 lekar๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...nd thoda zyada lamba ho gaya, isliye part3 bhi he, don mind๐Ÿ˜›
 
 
 

Dakshna are in bed ok...Dakshu upar. He's playing with her hair, picking a stray petal (u kno kaha se rite๐Ÿ˜›) from here and there, trying to talk her into the next thing on his agenda : a shower, and Naina is about to say yes, ki the phone rings (ha, ha kebab me haddi, i kno๐Ÿ˜†...par kya kare)...Halfway down for a kiss, Daskhu freezes.

N : Daksh...

D : Mat kaho. Mujhe pata hai.

N : (smiles) Tum normali notic nahi karte ho...

D : Hmm. Par iss bar pata nahi kab se baj raha he...

N : (mildly shocked) Kya?

D : Normali tum notic karti ho, nai?

N : Me...busy thiโ˜บ๏ธ

D : Haa, me bhi๐Ÿ˜†...

The phone buzzes incessantly...

N : Daksh...

D : (gets off the bed) acha theek he...kaha gaya? Yahi kahi tha...

Umm guys, mayb it got knocked onto the floor, jus don't ask me how๐Ÿ˜‰

Daksh emerges frm under the bed. "Ye raha."

Naina takes it from him(no complaints, use pata hai kaise neeche gira๐Ÿ˜›). "Oh no! 11 misd calls!"

Dakshu sits on the bed. "Kiska?"

N : (pushes her hair back) Mrs. Singh. Bahot nervous type ki hai...

He tucks her hair behind her ear. "Hmm."

N : Daksh...tum naha ke ao na, mujhe inhe call karna hi hoga ab...

D : No way Naina...bad me call kar lena. Ab chalo tum.

N : Pls Daksh...rude lagega...wo kabse call kar rahi he...

D : Naina...

N : Please? Me aa jaungi...

He huffs and gets up, muttering. "Wahi floor pe rehne deta use..."

Naina has hit the dial button, and looks up. "Daksh kuch kaha?"

D : Nahi, kuch nahi. Jaldi karo tum.

N : Ha baba...ab jao...

 
 

Dakshu is done with his shower and comes out in a white towel...Naina s still on phone...She's trying to calm down an apparently hyper client, and phone tucked between her ear and shoulder, is getting her nightdress and a towel out. Dakshu ke PJs are alredi on the bed...

N : Ha Mrs.Singh...ap bilkul tension mat lijiye...Ho jayega. Me kal sham tak vapis aa jaungi.

Dakshu frowns.

He comes up from behind, puts his arms around her.

N : ...Ap chaho to Monday subhe ko me apko venue dikha sakti hu...(bats his hands off cos she's finding it difficult to concentrate๐Ÿ˜›) Mrs. Singh, ek minute...

He parts her hair, puts it to one side...

N : Daksh...kya kar rahe ho tum...

D : Call hold pe he? (drops a kiss on her shoulder)

N : Ha...Daksh pls...ek minute wait nahi kar sakte?

D : Nahi. Bahot bat kar li Mrs. Singh se... (nuzzles her neck) Baki ka time mera hai...

N : Daksh...(pleads) adha minute...call hold pe he...

D : Theek he. 30 seconds๐Ÿ˜‰

N : Ha Mrs.Singh. Ha...apni beti ko bhi le ayiyega...(Dakshu starts his badmashi again๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†) Mrs. Singh...me apko kal subhe call karti hu ab...Kuch...important hai. Bye.

Dakshu takes the phone from her, tosses it onto the bed and turns her around.

N : Daksh...Meri phone...

D : Mujse zyada to us phn ko time milta hai tumhare sath.

N : Acha? Tho leke kyu diya?

D : Kab se ro raha tha, taras kha ke neeche se utha diya...wahi rehne deta, to tum mere sath ati...

N : (hits him) Bahot badmash ho tum. Pata nahi MRs.Singh ko kya laga hoga...

D : (laughs) Kyu? Wapis se call karke clear karna hai kya kuch๐Ÿ˜†...

N : (hits him again) KP...

He laughs, she laughs, and she pulls him down...short, sweet kiss๐Ÿ˜ณ...

N : Me bas do minute me aa jaungi ok...

D : Do minute. Usse zyada hua to...

N : Case kar dena๐Ÿ˜›...Ab jane do...

He pulls her back to him for another one, and she returns the favour happily...Thodi der bad, both are fuzzy and out of breath and pull back for air...Naina, all cute pink, reaches out for the towel and the nightgown she'd laid out on the bed, and goes off.

Dakshu smiles, turns to the bed- some of the flowers are on the floor...He scoops up one crushed petal and smiles at it, remembering- and then he remembers her gift. So he goes to get it.

He comes back to the bedroom, picks up his night shirt - only to find out that its HER night dress, not his๐Ÿ˜‰...

                                 
 

                                                  ... contd ...

 
 
 

                                            click 4 part 3...๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by sweetaish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya kahu yaar..awesome.๐Ÿ‘.luv this naughty dakshu,๐Ÿ˜ณ,kitna pyara hain๐Ÿ˜..and this mrs singh kabab mein haddi,aur phone bhi...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

And 30 sec to end a call..too much haina dakshu๐Ÿ˜‰..loved it..๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—the whole scene..thumbs up๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 12 years ago
heylo again๐Ÿค— here's part 3...ab iske aur instalmnts nahi ayenge, don wori๐Ÿ˜† now u guys kno na ki kitnaaa lamba ho gaya tha๐Ÿ˜›...hav fun๐Ÿ˜Š...
 
 

So he gets her gift (choti si pouch me), comes back to the bedroom, picks up his night shirt-only to find out that its HER night dress, not his...he starts laughing.

D : Naina...

N : (washroom se)Ha baba...bas nikal rahi hu...Kya hu- (there is a short pause) Daksh...

D : (almost laughing)Ha...?

N : Wo...meri nightdress bahar reh gayi...

D : Acha...? Andar kya leke gayi thi tum...

N : Tumhara hai.

D : (laughs)Ha, to kya hua.

N : Daksh...

D : Bolo.

N : Meri night dress do.

D : Dhyan kaha tha tumhara...

N : Tumne distract kiya tha mujhe.

D : Me khud hi distracted tha๐Ÿ˜›

N : Daksh pls mazaq band karo aur do na...

D : Nahi. Mera wala hi pehan lo.

N : To kya tum mera pehnoge.

D : Kyu? me aise hi theek hu. (sits down on the bed, smiling) Vaise tum khud akar le sakti ho ...

Naina opens the washroom ka door and comes out in this white silk shirt (don't kick me...its modest enough๐Ÿ˜›...), annoyed. "Daksh tumhe to me-" she stops, stares (he's still in his fluffy towel), then starts again. " Tumne change kyu nahi ki ab tak?"

D : Mera shirt koi le gaya tha (gets up, walks towards her)

N : Acha. (takes a step back)

D : (nods) vapis do, me pehan lunga.

N : (another step back) Aur koi shirt nahi he kya.

D : Mujhe ye wali chahiye.

N : Rehne do, tum aise hi theek ho.

D : Par problem to thodi der pehle tumhe hi thi na๐Ÿ˜†...(makes a grab for her, misses)

N : (skirts the bed) NAhi. Abhi mujhe koi problem nahi he.

D : Mujhe bhi, Tum isme zyada achi lagti ho๐Ÿ˜‰.(she climbs the bed, grabs the gown and gets down on the other side, he follows suit)

N : Ha, pata hai. Tum to aise hi kahoge. Vaise bhi mere night gowns ki kya halat kar dete ho tum...Tumhari to yahi philosophy hogi ki paise kyu waste karne he nightgown par jab tum-

D : (corners her, finali ; she drops the gown) Jab me, kya?

N : (slightly breathless) ๐Ÿ˜ณKuch nahi. Hath me kya hai?

D : Tumhari gift (holds it out of reach). Ek shart he meri.

N : (dubious) Kya...?

D : (cutie smile๐Ÿ˜Š)Tum change nahi karogi.

N : Kya? Daksh tum...(small slap on his wrist) Do mujhe. Kab se keh rahe ho ki baad me dikhaoge...

D : Nahi. Pehle tum meri man lo, phir๐Ÿ˜›...

Naina changes tactics๐Ÿ˜†..."Please Daksh...?"

Dakshu bechara is in semi meltdown, shakes his head again.

N : (touches his cheek)Please...?

D : Not fair Naina...(opens the little pouch) tumhe pata hai ki tum pls kehti ho to me...

N : Ha, pata hai๐Ÿ˜›...ab do na...

Dakshu takes out this bracelet, puts it on her wrist (check it out guys...aisa hi kuch : http://www.bulstore.eu/338-493-large/lovely-rose-bracelet-party-gift-purple.jpg๐Ÿ˜Š)

N : Wow...

D : (no-big-deal tone)Theek hi hai.

N : Kya...? Sach me...(holds it up, admiring it) bahot cute hai...

D : Tumne pehna hai, isliye (pyara sa kiss on her wrist๐Ÿ˜Š)

N : Ha, tum to aise hi kahoge.

D : Kyu?

N : Kyunki tum thode se pagal ho...lekin mujhe tumhara pagalpan bhi bahot cute lagta hai...(peck on his cheek)

D : Ha, pagal hu...(head butt๐Ÿ˜) Tumhare pyaar me...lekin ek bat kahu...(toying with her damp hair) Abhi iss room me sabse zyada cute to tum hi ho...

N : (cute pink๐Ÿ˜ณ) Chup karo KP. Phir se shuru ho gaye tum...

D : Are...acha theek he, muje ek cheez dikhao jo tumse bhi zyada pyara hai...(she opens her mouth, but he cuts her off, smiling) mujhe chod kar.

N : Tumhara naam nahi lene wali thi๐Ÿ˜›.

Daksh gives her an oh-really expression. She smiles, turns his face to a portrait on the wall, of this pyaari si, cute si angel smiling down at them.

D : (smiles) Pyaari hai, (leans in, and soflty) par tumse zyada nahi.

N : ๐Ÿ˜ณThank you...

D : Itna dry thank you? Nahi chalega...

Naina shakes her head No, smiling.

D : Kyu?

N : (soflty) Koi dekh lega.

D : (looks around, den back at her) Kaun?

She looks at the portrait, then back at him, still smiling.

Dakshu smiles, covers the angel's eyes with one hand, pulls Naina closer with the other...

She puts her arms about his neck, and gives him one soft peck on his lips, but he's having none of that...pulls her back to him...

Dheere dheere his other hand comes down too, and he pulls her closer still...and Dakshna are lost to the world๐Ÿ˜, as the angel on the wall looks on, smiling...

 
 
 
 
 
ohk...done...all parts๐Ÿ˜› pata hai zyada lamba ho gaya, but i jus cudn help t๐Ÿ˜Š...acha dis s t frm me 4 sum time nw...xms, xms all around๐Ÿ˜›...
 
loads f smil๐Ÿ˜Šs,
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Contd...
 Daksh also realises that they had been on floor๐Ÿ˜‰ romancing๐Ÿ˜ณ

Naina; samaj mein aagaya na ki kaha par hain...Mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki raat bar hum yahi par..๐Ÿ˜†..
Daksh; kyu, acha nahi laga floor pe romance.๐Ÿ˜†.๐Ÿ˜‰.(naughty tone winking at her)
Naina; maine aisa tho nahi kaha.๐Ÿ˜ณ (naina gets up)..lekin sab tumhari wajah se(
Daksh gets up; maine kya kiya?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Naina ; kya zaroorat thi gud gudi karne ki...
Daksh; haan..kya zaroorat thi gudgudi karne ki.๐Ÿ˜†...tumne bhi tho kiya..aur movie dekhne nahi diya..๐Ÿ˜‰
Naina stands up ; maine dekhne nahi diya ya tumne? badmaashi tumne shuru kiya tha( takes of pillow and goes and sits on bed)
Daksh also gets up and..picks the pillow, bed sheet and and settles on bed..
Daksh; aur tumne khatam kiya.๐Ÿ˜‰...aur rahi baat movie ki tho tumne mujhe, aur maine tumhe dekhne nahi diya..kyu ab hissab bara bar haina..๐Ÿ˜›

Saying this daksh falls on bed..looking at naina..

Daksh; waise swt hrt tumhare gusse ki wajah kya hain? gud gudi kiya iss liye  ya movie dekhne nahi diya ya phir floor pe...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Naina looks at him ;gusse ki koi baat nahi..lekin...
Daksh; pulls her on to him๐Ÿ˜‰; Lekin??

Naina; ( spreads her arms around him)ye soch rahithi ki tumhare smart dimmag mein gudgudi karne ka idea aur FR ka idea itni dher se kyu aaya..?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Daksh is surprised at naina's answer;๐Ÿ˜ฒ and says; hogaya satya nash..poori tarh se bigad chuki ho tum๐Ÿ˜†...mujhe pehle se bigadliya aur ab tum bhi...

Naina; lifts up her head; sab tumhara effcet hain...๐Ÿ˜› 
Daksh;smiles; acha..! tho chalo phir se floor par chalte hain aur..๐Ÿ˜‰
Naina; chup karo daksh//( gives him a small hit and hugs him)

  Daksh;( playing with her hair); waise kal morning walk par chale?๐Ÿ˜‰
Naina; good idea..chalte hain..jabse yaha aaye hain..bahut late ut rahe hain
Daksh; aur tumhe pata hain na late kyu ut rahe the?๐Ÿ˜†

Naina' lil shy;๐Ÿ˜ณ haan pata hain.( lifts up her head and looks at daksh),,.aur ab tum sone doge tabhi ut payenge kal jaldi
Daksh; tumhe nahi lagta ye dialogue mujhe kehna chahiye๐Ÿ˜†..kyunki asal mein tum mujhe sone nahi detina.๐Ÿ˜‰...Naina gives half kp look..
Daksh; bas bas...mrs kp! ab sojaaye??.

.naina smiles and nods her head and hugs him tightly..๐Ÿค— ditto with dakshu.. both slip into sleep...๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aish sweety once again superb ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ totally getting fida on this besharam Dakshna...
GRR... these kabab main haddi unwanted phone calls ๐Ÿ˜ก poora maza kharab kar dete hai... I like u showed Dakshu playing with Naina's hair ๐Ÿ˜‰ aur actually 1 sec bhi Daksh ke liye bahut jaada hoga ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Naina se dor rehne ka ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† 
Night dress ki adla badli loved it..๐Ÿ˜‰.. I just loved this naughty naughty Dakshu๐Ÿ˜ณ... Super liked it yaar,,,, ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— Bracelet hmm good choice ha Dakshu ๐Ÿ˜›
Thanks for head butt dear...๐Ÿ˜‰
Thank u thank u inta cute scene ke liye ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

 
Naina; ( spreads her arms around him)ye soch rahithi ki tumhare smart dimmag mein gudgudi karne ka idea aur FR ka idea itni dher se kyu aaya..?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Daksh is surprised at naina's answer;๐Ÿ˜ฒ and says; hogaya satya nash..poori tarh se bigad chuki ho tum๐Ÿ˜†...mujhe pehle se bigadliya aur ab tum bhi...

 

 
 
ha re...dono bigad gaye itna๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...but love dem both dis way๐Ÿค—...lucky thnku๐Ÿค—...itne bigade huye, pyaare dakshna ke liye๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— nd FR bhi๐Ÿ˜› mast idea๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

 
 
ha re...dono bigad gaye itna๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...but love dem both dis way๐Ÿค—...lucky thnku๐Ÿค—...itne bigade huye, pyaare dakshna ke liye๐Ÿค— nd FR bhi๐Ÿ˜› mast idea๐Ÿ˜‰


Ditto Ditto ๐Ÿ˜Škuch kehne sunane ke liye baki hi nahi bacha hai aab.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†... Itne cute cute bigade huye Dakshna ke liye Thank u thank u Lucky yaar ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— U bought a big big smile on my face๐Ÿ˜ƒ... Loved all the dialogues ๐Ÿ‘ 
Superb ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
lucky nd rupu...thnku thnku thnku๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— nd thnku again๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—...dis one s 4 u guys (split kar lena๐Ÿ˜›)...
 
 
 
luv,
 
aish
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ aish and rupu

Thanks buddies..๐Ÿค—

@ bold.. I know ki ye dialogue poora scene ka highlight banega..๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜‰...