Maa tujhe salaam - Page 5

Originally posted by: indupriya2008

Excellent  Ritz... 

It just luks lyk a true incident... True bulling by students n teachers.

"Chirkut" 🤣

N Shah a true character of Sukhi..

Very supportive n truly different nature of Mr. Gupta from Acharya Chankya, Very innovative..👏

Titli's last dialouge is too innocent...😳

Very well portrayed..

Continue soon... 

Thnx indu..aapne pura padha..I know its long...sorry for that..aur Shah amatya hai😊

Originally posted by: Ritu278

Thnx indu..aapne pura padha..I know its long...sorry for that..aur Shah amatya hai😊

Edited by indupriya2008 - 12 years ago

ha ha ha loved the ending

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

ha ha ha loved the ending

bhatka hua student

awesome part 

awww my jai 

us teacher ka sr phod dungi main next time n that yuvi 😡 chircut hoga vo khud 

ha😊
bohot lambi ho gayi na?😕

gr8 update ritz..mujhe apne school days yaad aa rahe hain...some teachers are really irritating 🤢 ...ending is hilarious 😆 bhatka hua student 😉 and chirkut pyaara word hai 🤣..keep it up 👍🏼 waiting for the next part 😛

great part ritu...ab ambhik bhi a gaya aur purusdutta bhi..great...koi ake dekhe hamare ye choti si forum mein kitne talented writers bhare pade hai...

Yaha pe sabse achi shayari kaun likta hai?
Sabse jyada Rushi se pyaar kaun karta hai?
sabke daat kaun thik karta hai?
And u say u r gud for nothing?😕
Aur titli to mujhe bhi pasand nahi hai...par sab Ashka aur Rushi ki jodi banarahe the..son i thot I'll do something different😃
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@ritu - dats soo sweet of u..rushi se mujhe sachme bohot prem hai re😳

@bhargu - u r rite..mujhe apni koi competitor pasand nahi..  aur iss titli ko bohot jald
 aasmaan mein uda doongi main😆

Simply loved it Ritu...Awesome @ your thought of putting their pictures while you are narrating the story...Hats off to you..Continue soon eagerly waiting..

@ritu - awesome update👏..ur story has a vry real feel to it..a delicate balance of
emotions and humour..well done ritu😊

if jai is chirkut..to yuvi kankhajoora hai😆 (millipede)
dat shah😡😡 ...jai rote nahin hai baby..main hoon na😳 aur hindi teacher ka dhyan
yahan bhi pata nahi kahan hai😆

very nice