FF-PAYER TO HONA HI THA(NEW UPDATE 26/10,PG-17)+VM - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_forever

hey nice and lovely update...

 
and VM awesome...
thnks for PM do update next part asap





hey tnx dear for loving ff  & vm...i'm really glad to see your comment hope you will like next part  also 😊...yeah i will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read this whole... The story is too good
Plzzz do PM me also
 
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prachimishra85

I read this whole... The story is too good

Plzzz do PM me also
 
 
 
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hey prachi...i'm so much glad  that you like my whole ff... oviously i will pm you & hope you will like that part also😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

part -- 11

in the morning ram is getting himself ready to go office.
priya enters the room & ask ram for break-fast.ram was in
hurry so he denied to do so.priya starts to force ram.then
niharika comes & see both of them is talking freely with
each other.she feels angry & left the room.silently she
starts making her devil plans.here at the end ram has
to take his break-fast.ram:ok...priya.main chalta hoon.
bye.then suddenly vikram enters in the room.ram:vikram
main avi ahi raha tha.vikram:no...Mr. Ram Kapoor ab apko
office janeki koi jarurat nahi hain.maine sab fixed kar
dia.ram:hello...kya fixed karke aye hain aap??vikram:aj
tu office nahi ja raha hain.tu aj rest kar aur sham ko
priya ko lekar mere ghar ajana.ram:thik hain sham ko
ajaeyenge uske liye office kyun nahi jaun??vikram:sab
bahana dhundtehe gharme rehne ke liye or tu...sun main
chahta hu tum dono sara din sath raho.ram:kyun?vikram:
kyuki agar aisa hua to tum dono mere gharme koi jhagra
nahi karoge.priya:actually no need to do this...hum sham ko
ajaeyenge.
ram:ok..its final.now lets go.vikram:ok...yaar...agar
tujhe chutti nahi chahie to main aur kya karoon?

in viram's house...
after dinner all of them starts gossiping.neha:ok ok...
time out every one & listen to me.ram ab hum tum dono
ke bareme kuch bat karte hain.in kuch dinome tum dono
ek doosreko kitna jan paye ho...i will take the test.
vikram:awesome idea.priya:aree nahi nahi...aisa kartehe
hum ap dono ki test lete hain.after-all both of you are
so lovely couple.neha:priya humare shadi to ab hume
khud purani lagne lage hain.you & ram are the new love
birds.ram:listen i'm not going to play this funny childish
game.neha:you cant say no cause you are in my home aur
yaha ke minister main hoon.vikram:ram is bareme mujhse
koi umeed nahi rakhna.ram:tujhse to kavi vi koi umeed
rakhna chod diya hain maine.its ok...kya karna hoga mujhe?
neha:jayda kuch nahi...main kuch words kahungi aur tum
dono usse ek doosre ko define karoge.you will get very
small time.ok starts.1st word is-heart.hurry-up ram
ram:ok...as soft as wax.
priya:as simple as child.
neha:...oh what a comparison...ok next word is-nature
ram:as horse as crow
priya:what??...aapne mujhe crow kaha??
ram:maine tumhe crow nahi kaha bas crow ko tumse compare kiya.
bechara crow.aab jaldi se answer do nahito har jaogi.
neha:guys both of you...please dont start again.
priya:shuru to ram kar chuke hain,ab khatam main karoongi
priya:ok...my nswer is--as silent as death.now i'm going to
give word & my word is--weight.
ram:hey what is this??isko beech me kyun le ayi?
pria:give me answer ram...varna har jaoge.
ram:ok...as light as air.but...
priya:my answer is - as big as an elephent.
ram:tumne mujhe hati kaha?
priya:no..main aisa kaise kar sakti hoon...maine bas hati ko
ek naya nam dia.
vikram:ye sab kya ho raha hain???just do shat-up yaar.
ram:ree chup kaise ho jaun...isne mujhe hati kaha.
vikram:shuru to tune ki hain na...tune use crow kyun kaha?
neha:mere bachhe vi aise larna chor dia hain kyun ki unhe
lagta hain ke woh ab bachhe nahi rahe.aur tum dono...shame on
you guys.actually fault meri hain...na main is stupid si khel
ke bareme bolti na aisa hota.
vikram:mujhe lagta hain ab tum dono ko ghar jana chahie nahito
kal sab mujhe tum dono ka divorce ki bawaja puchne ajayenge.
ram:neha...nothing is your fault.
priya:to kiske fault hain????...apne pehle mujhe crow kaha aur
badme maine apko hati kaha.tou fault kiski hui???
ram:hann...ab sab fault meri hain.usdin vi restaurant pe
sab meri galti hi thi
vikram:ek miniute...tum dono usdin vi lare the kya..??
ram:aur nahi to kya...ye madam jo mere sath thi.
priya:ap jhut kyun bol rahe hain...shuru to apne kiya tha.
ram:vikram-neha...i'm going.bye & excuseme madam...aab aap car
tak janeke kasht karenge please...
priya:maine mana hi kab kiya??neha...bye
neha:i'm extremly sory priya.when neha was talking ram moves
away.vikram:priya ye ram to aisa hi hain...but hum ye to umeed
rakhte hain ke tum use badal doge.
priya:(with smiling)...who knows...anyways bye.

ram is driving but suddenly he mentions that priya is looking
at him with angry eyes.ram:kya..?? aise kyun dekh rahi ho...???
priya:meri akhe hain...main jaha chahu dekhu ye meri marji hain.
aur main udhar najara dekh rahi thi jo aapke bawjese thikse
dikhai nahi de rahi thi.
ram:what..??he couldn't end his words suddenly car stoped.ram tries
to start it but he become unable to start it.
priya:kya hua..??...gari kharap ho gayi..??
ram didnt give her answer  starts finding his mobile.but he dont
find it at all.ram:meri mobile...oh shit jhagre ke time maine
use shayed vikram ke gharme chor aya.priya...
ram become surprise cause priya is not in the car.
ram:aree ab ye kaha gayi...(he starts shouting)..priya
ram get down from car & notice priya is walking on the empty
street.in the midnight when she was walking on the empty street
& there are some moonlight is on her way,ram feels that a fairy-
Queen from heaven is walking there and light of her beauty is
making way for her.ram finds himself in a dreamy world & he starts
following her.after sometime priya turn back & become surprise to
see ram.
priya:kya hua...gari thik nahi hua?
ram feels that he is fallen down from the sky.he become nervous
& starts stammering.
ram:woh...woh mobile vul gaya.ab phone vi nahi kar sakta
priya:vul gaye matlab...? kaha..?..r u all right..??
ram got back his conciousness.
ram:what happens to me...i'm ll right.ab hum kare kya ye bolo,
maine mobile vikram ke ghar chor aya.ab na hum udhar ja saktehe
na kisiko phone karke car la sakte hain.
priya:i have a plan...if you like so.
ram:koi aur rasta nahi...bolo tumhe jo bolna hain.
priya:yahase kapoor mantion kuch half kilomitre hogi ya thodi
jayda hogi...hum agar
chalna shuru kare ...uparse rat vi hain humto aramse ja sakte
hain.
ram:its impossible
priya:their is nothin impossible ram.apne shayed aisa kavi kiya
nahi isi liye odd feel kar rahe hain.ratko na dunia kuch
alag hi lagte hain.you must try this
ram:i dont know whats happening...lets go.
they starts walking but both of them has no any words to talk
about.but in hole time stealthily ram was trying to see her.he
see that priya is looking so happy.her eyes is smiling even she
is enjoying the hole nature.inside his mind one voice is telling
him to enjoy with her but when he is all-ready to talk with her
something stoping him.
priya:apko shayed acha nahi lag raha hain...lekin agar ap apni
sari pareshani vulkar apne aapko is palke hawale karde to dekhna
ye rat,ye tanhai,ye pura jahan apni sari khushi aapme vardegi
aur...
ram:aur...meri pareshani...meri na-kamavi...??
priya:shayed puri tarahse nahi mit paye lekin itna to halka ho
jati ha    hain ke ap ek nayi suvame khulke saans le sakho.kavi kavi
kuch pareshani aise hote hain jo kisise share nahi kar sakte hain
aur jise apki sabse apne vi lenese inkar karti hain...magar ye
rat hain joh sare pareshania ek-pal me le liti hain.
ram laughs...priya:apko meri batein funny laga na..??
ram:nahi...i was thinking that ek hi insaan itni tarah ki soch
kaise rakh sakhti hain.you know,when you expose something always
its means a lot.mujhe lagta tha ke tum aise kuch sochna to durki
baat tumhare sapne me vi nahi aa sakta hain.but i was totally
wrong.you are too different from others.
priya:acha...derse hi sahi apkovi samajhme ahi gayi(she laughs).
ram:i'm not kidding...seriously you are too different from
others.
priya:itna different ke ap hamesha mujhpar gussa ho jate hain.
see...ghar agaya.maine kaha tha na hum chalte chalte pouch
jayenge.dekha pouch gaye.
ram:shayed
priya:what..??
ram:nothing...chale.
priya goes inside of the house.ram is standing outside & was
looking in the sky thinks..."kya priya sahi bol rahi thi...
agar woh sach thi to meri pareshani dur kyun nahi ho rahi hain.ok
.lets try one more time,ram".he looks at the sky & tell--ajvi
priya mujhe galat samajh liya.main use bolna chatha ke mujhe uski
adatsi ho gayi hain.agar woh jhagra nahi karti hain to mujhe kuchvi
acha nahi lagta hain...kya uske man me vi mere liye koi feelings
hain jiske liye priya vi mujhe miss kare.he closed his eyes & see
that priya is laughing.how beautiful she looks when she smiles.
when she talks she looks so sweet & also when she Quarells with
him she looks like a child.ram open his eyes & feels one strange
feeling & now he is not sady like before.
ram:priya right thi...i'm exactly feeling better.but now i have
to make all things right...i promise you priya tommorow will be
new morning for you.



friends there is also a vm for you...hope all of you will like this
...this VM is on one of my most fav song ----- iktara

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RsSNjMVwRtI&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by riya01maddy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update. loved the vm too. thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Isha what a wonderful update and ur VM is just fab... Totally siuts this part
Thanks for the PM and plzzz cont.soon
 
 
 
❤️ Prachi
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey isha wonderful update dear and nice vm also
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update...

N i like VM too coz itz one of my Fav Song...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey isha awesome update yaar
RAm --- Hathi
Priya---------- crow
hilarious🤣🤣
lovd it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part isha
loved the nok-jhok btw Ram and Priya and the VM too