FF-PAYER TO HONA HI THA(NEW UPDATE 26/10,PG-17)+VM - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update especially the last dialogues
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nypunya

nice update...thanq




tnx for liking this part...i hope you also like the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shamma92

nice update...thanks




hey shamma...nice see your comment and tnx for liking this
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika163

πŸ‘πŸ‘ keep writing yaar




tnx dear...i will update next part asap hope you will like that also
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_forever

nice update... thnks...

 wating for your next update...
 
last dialogues of RaYa... were gr8... seems there heart has accepted each other... its only they need to realise it... hey after reading your update specially last dialogues following lines came to mind...
 
hope you like it... as its 1st time i'm writting something... pls forgive me if its too stupid...
 
chaha tha humne jindagi se...
miley koi aisa jisse hum keh sake aapna...
 
ek arsa bit gaya...
kii humne jindagi se kuch aur maanga...
 
apni har dua...
mai hai bus usko chaha
 
phir ek waqt aaya
jab iss aas ka daman haath se chutne laga...
 
laga kii yeh to hai ek sapna
jiska pura hona khud ek sapna sa laga...
 
tab jindagi ne milaya
uss se jo mere khawabo se tha bilkul juda...
 
tab bhi humne
haskar jindagi ke iss fasele ko apnaya...
 
socha shayaad yehi tha...
meri aas ka sira jo chhutne laga tha...
 
par iss soch ne bhi saath na diya...
tab yeh maan hi liya kii jindagi hai bewaafa...   
 
phir bhi humne...
isse samjhote ka naam dekar aapnaya...
 
najaane is jindagi se
kitne baar hum hue rusava...
 
har pal... isse bewaffa hi jaana
par kaun jaane kii samay mai kya hai chhupa...
 
lekin aaj hai jaana... jisse hum samaj rehe the...
bewafai... usi mai tha jindagi ka sabse bada tohfa...




hey first tnx for liking my ff...and second part is, this is also my first ff and i'm writing somethis in details so no need to sory for any fault or anything...by the way this poem is wonderful... & oviously i like it too much...tnx for sharing it here
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: balhfan

amazing simply amazing... wonderful... πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜ πŸ‘ 




hey tnx for the compliment...i will update next part asap , hope you will like that also
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShaiqMadiha

wow amazing just awesome..its so heart throbbing, i just loved so emotional n so real.. d last part was just fantastic.. 




hey tnx for being with me and liking this ff...i will update next part asap hope you will like that also
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anizor

very nice update. thanks





i'm glad that you like this part also...hope you will like next part also
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: M_n_h

loved the update especially the last dialogues




hey i'm glad that you like this part also...when i was writing it comes my mind and i wrote it...i will update next part asap hope you will like that also
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Posted: 12 years ago
part-10


after that night ram & priya starts maintaining some more distences.
in the office ram is sitting in his cabin without any work.vikram
enters and asks him what happen...??ram kepp silence.vikram forced him
but he dint break the silence.vikram:ok...priya ke sath kuch hua hain..?
ram:maine kaha na kuch nahi hua hain...tu itna kuch kyun puch raha hain.
vikram:now i realise whats the problem...chal bol hua kya hain?ram:kuch
nahi...woh kuch mis-understanding hain.vikram:phir dur karde use...chal
phone kar use.ram:ree tu nahi janta hua kya hain...tu ja main khud solve
kar lunga.vikram:to tu nahi bolega...ok...but ek bat boltahu aisi batoko
jaldhi solve kar lena chahie nahito badme haatse nikal jata hain.i hop u
understand.ok.bye.after he left the room ram thinks about the hole matter
& decide to talk with priya.he returns home as soon a possible.


priya was with dadi.dadi was telling her about some rituals.ram comes &
ask priya to go with him.priya was not agreed but dadi forced her.so she
makes her way to the bed room.priya:yes Mr. Kapoor...apko kuch kehna tha?
ram:yes...mujhe actually kuch batein clear karna tha.if you have time.priya:
ap bolie apko kya clear karna hain...meri bat chorie.ram:tum avi vi naraj
ho..?priya:apko shayed lagega main lecture de rahi hoon...but kehna to
parega apne pucha hain isi liye...mujhe lagta hain ke naraj usse hua
jata hain jispe apki hak ho...jise ap kuchvi keh sakteho without any
hasitating...hamara rishta to iske aas-paas vi nahi hain to phir main
apse naraj kaise ho sakti hoon.ram:tum normally to aise bat nahi karti thi
isi liye mujhe laga.priya:avi agar main apse formaly baat na karoo to
bewaja ap mujhe datna shuru kar denge isse acha hain ke main jitna ho
sakhe kum bat karoon.anyways...ap shayed kuch kehna chatethe.tell me.
ram:no...its ok.lets leave it.priya:ok.priya starts walking but when
she goes out from the room ram feels that he has done a huge mistake.he
was all ready to talk with her,so he cant let her go.but he cant tell her
anything.during the dinner ram mention that priya is looking too upset
and he feels guilty for this.

after the dinner priya come to the garden for some freshness.she starts
walking without sandles.ram follows her from dining table and also
starts walking behind priya.suddenly priya realise that someone is
following her so she turned.she become surprise to see ram.ram:(with
a cute smile)...mujhe laga yahapar koi hain isiliye main dekhne chala
aya ke kaun hain.akar dekha tum.to tum itni rat ko yaha kya kar rahi
ho...avi sojana chahie.its too late.priya was looking at him without
any twinkle of eyes.she realised that ram is telling lie.ram become
nervous for her looks.ram:oh..meri ghari kharap ho gayi hain shayed.
avi to dinner kiya ina rat kaise ho saktu hain.priya breaks her silence
with a beautiful smile.priya:are you alright?ram:its nice to see you are
laughing...mujhe to laga tha ke.lets leave it.can i walk with you for
sometime?priya:apki garden hain...dekha jaye to mujhe permission lena
chahie.she smiles.ram thaughts...its going to be tuff Mr. Ram Kapoor.
both of them starts walking but unable to talk with each-other.ram:priya,
i am sory.priya become too surprise & also feels so happy but she cant
talk.she was trying to stop her emotions.ram:priya...kal actually jo hua
woh nahi hona chahie tha.main actually idiot hoon...priya mujhe ladkiose
bat karna nahi ati...main bolna kuch aur chahta tha... you also reacted
so uickly that i couldn't define my words.i had no any intension to hurt you.
mujhe to avi yakeen nahi aa raha hain woh sab kaise ho gaya.i really ram
mentions that priya is crying)...tum ro kyun rahi ho.i'm really sory.ram
keeps her hand on his hand...ram:i'm really sory.priya:its ok Mr. Kapoor
apne ye kehdia ehi kafi hain.i know everything but pata nahi kyun aise
reract kiya.sory.ram:ok...its eQual now.but tumhe ek shart pe mafi mil
sakti hain.priya:kya...ok tell me.ram:priya gharme sab mujhe ram kehte
hain...Mr. Kapoor ...tum jab mujhe pukarti ho mujhe aisa lagta hain
jaise main koi meeting me hoon.priya:oh...i will try Mr. Kapoor...sory
ram.


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