nice update...thanq
Originally posted by: shamma92
nice update...thanks
Originally posted by: Anamika163
ππ keep writing yaar
Originally posted by: fan_forever
nice update... thnks...
wating for your next update...last dialogues of RaYa... were gr8... seems there heart has accepted each other... its only they need to realise it... hey after reading your update specially last dialogues following lines came to mind...hope you like it... as its 1st time i'm writting something... pls forgive me if its too stupid...chaha tha humne jindagi se...miley koi aisa jisse hum keh sake aapna...ek arsa bit gaya...kii humne jindagi se kuch aur maanga...apni har dua...mai hai bus usko chahaphir ek waqt aayajab iss aas ka daman haath se chutne laga...laga kii yeh to hai ek sapnajiska pura hona khud ek sapna sa laga...tab jindagi ne milayauss se jo mere khawabo se tha bilkul juda...tab bhi humnehaskar jindagi ke iss fasele ko apnaya...socha shayaad yehi tha...meri aas ka sira jo chhutne laga tha...par iss soch ne bhi saath na diya...tab yeh maan hi liya kii jindagi hai bewaafa...phir bhi humne...isse samjhote ka naam dekar aapnaya...najaane is jindagi sekitne baar hum hue rusava...har pal... isse bewaffa hi jaanapar kaun jaane kii samay mai kya hai chhupa...lekin aaj hai jaana... jisse hum samaj rehe the...bewafai... usi mai tha jindagi ka sabse bada tohfa...
amazing simply amazing... wonderful... ππΌπ π
Originally posted by: ShaiqMadiha
wow amazing just awesome..its so heart throbbing, i just loved so emotional n so real.. d last part was just fantastic..
very nice update. thanks
loved the update especially the last dialogues
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