os-Without you... - Page 3

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

res

 

oh my God, what do i say

 

rockstar, u have again rocked

 

oh i can't think of an arjun without aru - it was so sad to know that aru gave her life for arjun

but u compensated her loss with a new kid

 

purvi has again done an excellent job in this OS - she had helped arjun to realise the real meaning of his extended life

 

great one - pls write more of OSs

 

 

 

Originally posted by: moonkmh

Wao!
M speechless dr.
U r amazng,i felt goosebumps in my body nw.
God! What a story dr.
I love it yaar. The emotn of arjun is describd amazingly. He adopt lil aru in d memory of his luv. Superb dr.

Originally posted by: ...vibha...

beautiful
it was sad one bt loved it

Originally posted by: vrshn

very beautiful! so emotional!!
you are completely awesome!!
wow! our forum has so many wonderful writers!!

Originally posted by: cybergali

wow. this os of ures is so beautiful and emotional😭 this is to goood. he named his kid after arohi. and he didnt even get married. and arohi gave her life for him u are such a great writer rockstar. i loved ure os. left me speechless. i cried so much 😭 and i reread it like 50 million times. to good. btw what ure name rockstar??

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

N AM CRYING HERE...
cant stop ma tears nw...

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96

this is such a lovely OS...

ITS SO emotional nd touching...

continue writing, ur really gud at this :)

Originally posted by: Anupa28

OMG...what a lovely OS...fell in love with it...you have made me so emotional...

Time goes by but however dark the night is it always brings with it the promise of daylight.. and it is up to is to give a chance to that ray of sunlight...wrote a poem long  back and even posted it today.. but not knowing how apt this will be for this OS...

Sands of Time

 

Hope of golden morning

Turns somber yellow,

As the sands of time drop

Hour after hour.

 

The frenzied passion of noon

Turns smokey grey,

As the darkness of solitude invade

Hour after hour.

 

The copper chrome cravings of evening

Turns frozen red,

As the vortex of pain sweep

Hour after hour.

 

A sense of numbness

Engulfs the sleepless night

As the hope of morning gleams through

Hour after hour'..

Keep on rocking...Love..Anu di

Originally posted by: arohi_arjun

Thank for the pm

It was awesome but sad. Lovely OS and emotional...

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

rely beautiful os rockstar!!

 

 

so emotional

 

 

 

very wel writen!!

 

 

 

thnx 4 pm.x