MG FF "Devil In Love" Thread1 - Page 2

it was really good continue, looking forward to the story to develop

Hi...thanks 4 da pm. congrtas on ur new FF. All da best! Seems interesting...update soon n pm wen u do...😛

heya ani...lovely F i must say...this maan is juts like how aash like haan,...rude arrogant dominating and egoistic...
can i get a sherni handa pls...me like her that way...i dont like submissive and subservient geet...better comments when i get longer updates...and ya just cause u have another FF doesn't mean u take longer to update the first one...ur kaam becomes double now on...
@ aash love the song
@ nidz lovely siggie...all the best for exam

hi ana...

and ya forgot to mention

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hi ana...

 

wow...loved it totally totally!

 

reckless...feckless...hath marodofying maan !

 

my fav!! cruel n egoistic to boot!!

 

the song was fab!

 

suit hua..

 

and msk takin her to hotel room??? hawww...itne kaldi???

 

i hope he doesnt rape her...!!

 

uske aasoon uski shayad intentions badal de...!!

 

chalo jaldi jaldi isko aage likho...

aash dear...haath marodofying maan rofl...
hmm precap was intersting i forgot to write abt it...ani me to want him to melt after seeing her in tears,...here strenght or will wont make a difference as maan is way to strong for her...tears will work wonders...

congratulation for new ff
 awesome start
brilliant character sketches
 maan is totally different here
 precap is scary
 continue soon

Hey nice ff..😊

nice start plxxx do update d next part soon 

awesome start love to read more