OS - broken promises - Page 3

Hey There,

Originally posted by: maris08

Really nice Ria. Quite interesting and well written, though felt a little sad reading it. But great attempt.👏

 

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

Hey There,

 

Beautiful post, do keep writing👍🏼👏. Thanks for the PM😊

 

 

 

Ria this is real good writing and if this is your first OS then you have a long long way to go...yes reality is always breaking our dreams, very nicely conceptualised..loved it ...Tin

Originally posted by: tintiny

Ria this is real good writing and if this is your first OS then you have a long long way to go...yes reality is always breaking our dreams, very nicely conceptualised..loved it ...Tin

 

Thanks for the PM...really beautiful OS and for your 1st one its amazing! So very sad as well...all I could think of was the Mumbai blasts while reading...trying not to picture Ram and Priya as the couple though! I hope you continue to write more OS/FF!

i like how you have weaved in the terrible acts on human kind in your story.  Well done...very sensitively portrayed.

Originally posted by: alu5123

Amazing OS

Originally posted by: shamma92

Thanks for the PM...really beautiful OS and for your 1st one its amazing! So very sad as well...all I could think of was the Mumbai blasts while reading...trying not to picture Ram and Priya as the couple though! I hope you continue to write more OS/FF!

 

Originally posted by: divan

i like how you have weaved in the terrible acts on human kind in your story.  Well done...very sensitively portrayed.