Piya- Love Collide with Veracity - Page 2

Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful, no word describe for you writing , amazing post , you make abhiya special beyond the words 👏

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Rani

@pyar-ishk

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

I don't know how you do it

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG what a beautiful post.Loved ur poem.It was just simply awesome...

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568267

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Sadaf awesome post and so true is that love so easy, so yeah now she has to do some work

Loved it

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sonia

@-Sonia-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely post...

Well I was truly mesmerized with the scene...

They were looking a fabulous passionate couple who were seen deeply in love with each other...

but abhay is abhay.. he will never change..he knows how to ruin a romantic scene with his harsh words...why does he wants to live in dark! when the light wants to embrace him in his arms...

abhay deserves happiness, not misery. abbhiya deserve each other. ur poem made me cry also...it was perfect..

tc

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monomoon

@monomoon

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautifully expressed sweety.

Although i am not on good terms with whats going on but i guess thats the only way creatives know for now. the ending of the scene wasnt a pleasure sight at all. Atleast more gentle with words would be fine and have worked the same way.

But true. Both their true place is in eachothers presence. As we could see Abhay lost in the moment trying to take a good look at her as possible before giving in to his escape again.

Thnx for the pms. even though i cant always read and comment but its hearwarming. TC.

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