We r meanT to be togthr..REALLY?(AR OS)ud-2 pge 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey freinds...i m shilpa here...i wrote an OS on AR...i m not good in writing but hope u guys liked it...i hope u liked it...plz read it n tell me hw is it??????

this OS is dedicated all my friends...especially NIKI, GEET, GYANVI, SHARON N SALINA...love u guys gals.hope u liked it...
oka i better be stopped my chapad chapad...

here u go


We r meant to be together...REALLY?????
Two girls r sitting in college garden, they r talking
Girl1: kal to maja aa gya, nikki ne rahul ka band bja diya
Girl2: kuch naya bta muski?
Muski: *confused*kyun ridz, yey purani bat hai?
Ridz:aur nhi to kya niki  teasing n band bjane mein no 1 hai na so(they laughed)
muski:yey bhi hai yaar, vaise ridz, why r u so happy, today?
Ridz:means?(confused) main to hamesha khush rahti hun
Muski: nhi tu aaj jyada khush hai...
Sudenly 1 girl also come n sat
g: hi gals, kya chal rha hai?
R&M:Hi
M:kch nhi nikki, main to ridz se bs yey puch rhi, aaj vo itni khush kyun hai
N:(reaised eyebrow)didn't u knw?
M:(innocently)nope
R: guys main hamesha khush rahti hun, ths is invalid ques??? so leave this tyopic
N:npe sweety, ths is 100% valid ques n why did we leave this topic????...n muski yey itni khush isliye hai bcoz kal PP jo aa rha hai...
Muski is confused n ridz blushing
N:awww ridz tu blush karte huye badi soni lagti hai*winked*
ridz hit nikki on her arm
R: chup baith nikki, aisa kuch nhi hai
N: Oye sherni marna band kar
M asked cnfusingly: wait nikki yey PP kon ha?
N: are Pagal Premi
M: kiska??
R: Are muski iski mat sun yey to khud to pagal hai tujhe bhi pagal kar degi...
N: shut up ridz n muski aur kiska pagal premi offcouse meri ridz ka
nikki laughed, ridz blushed n muski is hell confused
M: oye hasna band kar but yey paga premil hai kon
N: (hit her forehead n rolled her eyes)...areee yaar
muski intrupted her
M:i got it u means Armaan
R: aiisa kuch nhi hai muski
N: u shut up ur mouth n muski ypa Armaan , AM,PP, i wish main use jiju bhi kah sakun...
R:nothing like muski...iski baat mat sun yey mujhe sirf tease kar rhi hai...hum dono sirf dost hai
N: yeah muski nothing like that(see ridz n said sacrastically0...aisa kuch nhi hai bas yey ek dono k best fiend hai mere baad...but u know mucki she loves him so much but just like a friend n when he

toldf her abot any gal or his ex, shhe jealous but just like a friend...n she wants to become his girl friend n wife but just as a friend...
nikki glared ridz, ridz looked away
M: what r u saying nikki??????
N: i m saying true yaar ab kissi ko manna hai mane nhi to baad(hell) mein jaiii
R:yeah muski its true but gals aisa kuch nhi ho sakta ham dono jante hai
M:are aisa kaise nhi ho sakta...
R; muski dad armaan k dad ko pasand nhi karte...or i don't know Armaan mujhe as a friend love karta or as a lover(disaapointedly)
M:matlab...usne tujhe kabhi love u nhi bolo...
R;bola hai roj bolta hai but i dn't know frnd ki tarah ya lover k tarah
M; phir usse puch le na
N; muski puchne se kya hoga jab dono maan kar baithe hai they aren"t meant to be each other, but both know they love each other truly n madly
M:means
N:oye kitne sawal puchti hai.pta nhi rahul tujhe kaise jhelta hoga
M:hahaha very funny...ho gya ab batyegi
N:means yaar jo hal ridz n ka vo PP ka bhi hai...jab ridz usse kisi boy k tarif karti hai ya apne crush k baare mein btati hai...vo jealous hota ha...even cont that boy in his enemy list n told his number...use

jab kisi ki sath ki hjarurat hoti hai vo ridz ko call karta hai but vo to isse  friend wala p\aar karta hai.hain ridz...natanki band kar we both know he loves u so much n vo bi as a lover...
R: blushing n said okay fine we both love each other so much but we also know that in baato ka koi matlab nhi hai dad hate his dad...or hum dad khilaf nhi ja sakte
M:but ridz why does uncle hate his dad, i mean armaan mom n ur mon were childhood friend?????
N:oye muski, yes her mom n his mon were best friend or vaise bhi  tujhe kay AM aur ridz k dad  ki setting karann hai kya???/
M:oye kya bol rhi hai tu...pagal hai
N:nhi tu pagal hai jo aise Ques puch rhi hai...nhi like karte to nhi karte hme kya karna hai.hume to ridz n armaan k baare mein sochna hai
ridz blinked her eyes towards nikki n thank sileently
R: koi jarurat nhi hai sochne ki...kuch nhi hoga so leave it n chalo class mein chalte hai

ridz cell beeped
she checked 1 msg from A

Gud morngin...whass up?

A

 Gud Mrng...nothing nikki tease me so much...now going to class...talk to later
bye take care n take proper breakfasst...lovesss
R

okay.why did nik tease u??, to take my name...;) vaisse hi to her...bye sweetheart...yeah will take breakfast...concentration on class dn't day dreaming about me...love u so much

A


ridz blushing...n her 2 sweet friend observe her action
N & M : ahem ahem...kiska ka msg aa gya????
R:kisi ka nhi vo Airtel walo ka hai...
N:acha kya vo love u jo tu blush kar rhi hai
M: nhi nikki...dn't day dreamin about me
R:what u saw on my msg
M:yup sweety jab tu kisi k khayalo aur blush karne mein busy thi
R:blushing so much:shut up n chalo, class k liye late ho rhe hai
N:tum dono chalo main abhi aati hun
R&M:okay jaldi aana
R & M went


now nikki is alone n think:oh GOd kaise dump friend hai mere na to kuch karte hai na mujhekarne dete hai...PP n ridz love eachother so much...but yey dono to maan kar baaith kar they aren't tobe
meant each other...ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega...n she called someone
phong bell ro\ing n a man picked it
Man:hello
N:hello...main nikki bol rhi hun
Man:haan nikki beta hw r u?..
N:i m fine uncle, hw r u?
its shankank
S:i m also fine.kya hua tumari class nhi hai
N:nhi uncle hai but mujhe aapnsa kuch imp baat karni hai
S:bolo beta kay baat hai?
N:uncle vo phone par nhi ho sakti, kkya hum mil sakte hai
S:haan offcourse beta...bolo kab milna hai...
N:uncle abhi mil sakte hai agra aap free ho...
S:haan jarror but tumhe class nhi leni
N:nhi uncle vo aapse baat karni Jaroori hai
S:ok,ek kaam karo tum office aa jao
N: okaya uncle, i will be there soon
S:okay, bye beta take care
N"bye uncle
they disconnected call
N:ahhh...thank God ab mujhej uncle se baat karni padegi but use pehle mujhe kissi or se confirm karna padega

she again called someone
phone ring n a hot n handsome young man pick it
YM:hello...who is this????
N:hello AM,  nikkita here, hw r u????
yes yes that hot n handsome boy is Armaan Malik
A:nikita u mean nikki...riddhima ka frnd nikki...
N:shut up AM, yes i m nikki, ridz friend
A:ohk...hi, hw r u?? what happened??? why did u call me???
N:oh shut up AM, kitne ques puchte ho...i m fine...yes everything i fine.n kyu main apne friend ko call nhi kar sakti
A:no its nothing like that but ofcors u call me whenever u want but i m surprised isse pahel u never call me.so i thought...
nikki interupted him
N:shup up u moron , kitna bolte ho...aur jiske baare mein sochna chahiye vo nho sochte n kahte
A:confuesd n asked mean???
N: u know what yey sab chodo n give me my ques ans n i want strieth ans no diplomatic ans
A:okay.asked????
N:do u love ridz n vo bhi as a lover?????
A:he is hell shocked n think what d hel she asked n whta ans he give to her...
N:AM r u there? kya hua?
A: kuch nhi.nikki yey tum kya puch rhi ho...
N:AM give me ans
A:nikki
N:AM jusy ans my ques...i want only ans n i want to warn u giive me rght ans...dude may be aaj sach bolkar tumhe bebifit ho jaye
A: means????
N:pehle ans
A:yes, i love Ridhhima so much...but u nkw what nikki we aren't be together
N:who said??????
A:we know n i know also u know evetythng about our family her dad doesn't like dad...ridhhima ne tumhe btaya hoga with reason
N:yes, i know but dude atleast ek try to kar sakte hai, or AM ur mon n ridz mom best friend the na...vaise bhi ridz ko tere saath rehna na ki ucle k saath...or tu to mumbai mein rehta hai...n i know jo

uncle ne aunty k saath kiya aisa tu kabhi nhi karega, or uncle di kitna adore karte hai...
A:hmmm...but main kah rha hun na kuch nhi ho sakta unclae nhi manege
N:shut up AM.u know
but Armaan interupeted her
A:one sec...it is ur fav diaglouge SHUT UP AM...no wonder tum ridhhima ki bestest friend ho
N:(sacrastic)thanks for compliment...agra aap ne meri tarif kar li to kam ki baat kare...haan mujhe btana hai main i m going to talk with uncle today abotu u n ridz...
A:shocked: what???????????????
N:lightlt laughed imagined armaan shock fane n said: yup, bcoz main apni puri like yey sochkar regret nhi karna chahti ki shayad tab hum tum dono k bare men uncle ko bta dete kya pta vo maan jaate or

tum ek saath hote...tum dono idiot ka mijhe pta nhibut main  is baat ko lkearregret nhi karna chahti,,,,,,,,yey kash hum try kar lete
A:smile:really...u r so sweet nikki...i haven't doubt wht\y ridz always talk about u...u r such awesome fried... but nikki agar uncle tumpar gussa ho gaye to.main nhi chata humari vajah se uncle

tupar gussa ho
N smiled n said oye pagel premi aisa kuch nhi hoga main directly jakar thode hi kahna wali hun ki u both love each other...
A:what this pagalpremi???
N:i gave u this name...bcoz u r ridz k pagel premi...thode pagel n thode preimi...
A laughed:i loved thi name...n thanks yaar tum humare liye itna kar rhi ho...i m really happy... we have friend like u...
N:shut up AM friend mein no sorry n no thanks
A laughed:okay mam...all the best i hope uncle maan jaye n i knowtum uncle ki fav beti ho
N:yeye to hai...okay i have to go...bye...
A:bye...take care
N:bye n go take ur breakfast nhi madam tujhe maar dalegi
A:tumhe kais pta
N:mujhe sab pta hai
armaan n nikki laughed
N:okay, bye
A:bye
they discconected call n nikki turned n shocked to see te person oin front of her
to be continued

PART2  = PAGE 4

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Edited by shilpI007 - 12 years ago

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desir thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Shilpu
Firsty A Big Congrats To Ur First OS
U know I am really happy for u
And u write in such a simple yet elegent way sweetheart
The OS is awsome u know i love in With PP hayye pagal premii
Love The Talk Between Love Birds On Chat
When Armaan say ''dontt day dream about him conctrate on class'' it was so sweet hayye kisii kaa itnaa armaan jaisa handsome LOVER ho kiska dhayan class meiin rahega😳
And Love when Muskaan And NIkki caught her red-handed
Well seriously i love the bonding between these three friends Riddhima- Nikki- Muskaan
Starting dialogue of muskaan nikki ne rahul ka band bja diya was so nice i enjoyed their conversation😃
And Nikki she is a sweetheart yar She was doing so much for her best friend Such A True Friend She is😊
I love her ❤️
And Armaan-Riddhima to naa duniya ke sabse bade pagal hai man ke baithe hai we r not meant to be hope ki Nikki Shashank ko mna le aur Humare Pagal P😆Remi ko ooski Riddhima mIl jaaye
Once again Congrats Shilpu
And please do write more otherwise u know naa😈 me
With Lots Of Love
Nik




Edited by niki.5 - 12 years ago
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Hey Shona...A very HUGE CONGRATULATIONS for ur First OS👏...Finalyy u done it...Just love the way u write...the way u describe Ridzy-Muski-Nikki Friendship...Awesome...Awww so AR are already in Love...cho chweeettt...but scare to admit because of thier Dad Matter...wondring what will be thier story...But Nikki is such a sweet friend...hope Shashank  Maan jaaye...now do continue soon Mam...waitng for more...thanks for the PM...take care...and this is just for you...😊

 
LOTS OF LOVE
GEET
 
 
Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shlpu my baby my little sis 🤗. You have grown up girl congrats for writing ff.👏
PP ko shocked kar diya.
awesome friends .i wish ye shanky uncle kachumaar na bana de nikki ka. finger crossed for AR.
oyye jaldi update karna.😡


teri di
ritu
Edited by janu1610 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awwhhh..That's a great start..AR love each other already..!! CHOOO CHWEEET!!! I'm wondering who's on hte other side..!!! =S
 
Please do cont soon..!!
 
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@shilpa truly u r nikki's friend lolzzz

why incomplete it dear complete it soon

nice starting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulations for ur first os👏👏
it was a cute one😊
continue soon
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
really cute
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm

luv
pooja
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS... Do write more... Thanks for the PM! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it 
sooo cute
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
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