Nivren scenes: New scene 11 ud pg 19 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful scene dear 🤗 can i noe ur name ??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful scene sunayana.loved it and missed nivren more while reading your scene.do continue dear...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please continue 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: kinha123

beautiful scene dear 🤗
<div></div>can i noe ur name ??


Thnx my name is Sunayana. What is ur name? If u don't mind telling.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: jaindeepti9


beautiful scene sunayana.loved it and missed nivren more while reading your scene.do continue dear...😊


Thnx for reading and liking, miss kinha hope they come back as a Jodi. Keeping my fingers crossed.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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S 7 Passion is thy name

The night was still young. Nivi looked at herself in the mirror. Her cheeks were flushed, her eyes were bright and shining with a dream in her eyes. She had brought this deep red chiffon saree in the mall for their resort opening before Divyas death. After the tragedy she had lost interest in everything and had kept back in the wardrobe. Viren and the family had brought her back inch by inch from the brink of disaster she herself was created for herself and family. He stood by her even when he was deeply hurt by her action of not wanting the child of their own. He had given his love and was patient with her till she started to live again. She wanted to give him all the luv she can, he on the other hand made her feel luved and secure by his naughtiness and wink of his eyes to let her know he is there for her in evey way.
The color of the sari made her look different, and she had stitched the blouse differently with ties for back and on sleeves. She had made the blouse with Viren in mind, but had never felt brave to wear it. She had curled her hair, but left it open. She was wearing heavy pearl ear studs, she looked different but beautiful. She wanted to do this for both Viren and herself.
She had gone to visit NT dadi today, dadi had made gajar halva and wanted to take it for Viren. she had hinted that she has to spend more time with Viren because down the road it will be difficult for them to spend
time later. Nivi was wearing very light make-up. She was waiting for Viren to come home. She had a mysterious smile on her lips and her eyes was shinning with anticipation.

Viren came to his room door and stood there speechless, she looked simple and beautiful always but today she was looking very different, there was no other word but lord she looked too sexy.Looked around came inside and closed the door shut. Viren had a devious smile on his lips and said to himself you are gone today Viren Sood, he gave whistle and when she turned from table. He winked at her and asked
"kya aap meri biwi Niveditha viren Sood ko Kayi Dekha hai"
Niveditha saw Virens luv and passion filled eyes and she started to feel very shy for a second.Then she had a mischievous smile, walked towards him slowly and deliberately held his shirt front in both of her hands and looked boldly straight into his eyes and said
"woh tho idhar hi hai kahin pae, tumhae woh chahi hai? Yeah mein"
He held her waist and pulled her tightly to him and said "woh meri Jaan hai aur meri jeenae ki maksad, aur tu meri ashiyana woh tume hai lootnae ki man karta hai"
He kissed her on the lips lightly and started to toy with her strings at the back and looked at her. Nivedithas breathing quickened she started to feel flustered and shy. Viren gave a mischievous smile and started to trail his lips on her neck, while removing the last strings. Nivi knew what he was doing, so she started to open his shirt buttons and put her hands on his chest. Viren took a sharp breath and started to hold her more tightly
. Nivi pushed him from her and said innocently
"dadi nae gajar halva bheji sirf tumarae liyae khakar bataho kaisi hai"
He looked at her and gajar halva, then took it on his fingers and went very close to Nivi and started to brush it her lips. Nivi was stunned did not move viren brought his face close to her and started to kiss her on the lips, Nivi held on to him tightly, before nivi knew what was happening nivi was on the bed
Viren said with mischief and passion "gajar halva aaj bahoothi tasty hai na" and switched off the lights.

Special note: went little bit too far, just for fun hope u have fun reading it. If I have offended someone pls forgive me.




Edited by Butifuleyes - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Besharam scene yaar... Gud work.. 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
oye hoye besharm scene...too gud 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Butifuleyes


Thnx my name is Sunayana. What is ur name? If u don't mind telling.

nyc name 😊
my name is atiya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Omg sunyna you almost gave me a heart attack. Gosh that was sooo hot and romantic at the same time. Right from the bit 'viren sood you're gone' and then the whistle it was tooo good. Loved it and omg he smeared the halwa on her lips and kissed her!! phew that was HOT!!
You have written the whole scene so well. Will wait for you next one. X

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