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DIL MIL GAYE
Hello frnds. This is piya and i m writing an OS for the first time. Im sure there would b loads and loads of mistakes since this is my very first attempt. Comments both good or bad are welcome. This OS would mostly be of 5 or 6 parts. I would continue if you people want me to do so😊
CHARACTER SKETCH:
GEET HANDA: 20 yr old bubbly girl. Sweet, modern, romantic and a complete chatterbox. Pursuing a graduation degree in arts and working part time as an RJ in Just Chill radio station. Her world revolves around her mommy dearest and her 2 best friends Yash Malhotra and Maan Singh Khurana.
YASH MALHOTRA: 22 yr old smart, goodlooking eligibile bachelor. Exactly opposite to geet's nature. Works as an RJ with geet. Best friend of Maan.
MAAN SINGH KHURANA: 22 yr old smart handsome hunk. Manages his family buisness and is the boss of Khurana Constructions. Mainly a reserved person but loves to spend quality time with Geet and Yash. Secretly admires and loves geet.
MEERA KAPOOR: Simple smart and intelligent girl. Plain looks and a diehard fan of Yash. Never misses a single show of his and loves him unconditionally.
PARI KHANNA: An aspiring model and best friend of Meera. Far more superior in looks as compared to meera.
SAVITRI HANDA: More than a mom a great friend of geet.
CHAPTER 1
Savitri Handa: Haiyo rabba is ladki ka main kya karu. Itni badi ho gayi hai par harkate ab bhi chote bacche jaise. Kisi sarkari daftar ki haalat bhi iske kamre se kafi behtar hogi.
Geet ...Geet bete uthiye subah ho gayi hai.
GEET: O mommy dear aapki entry humesha galat waqt par hoti hai.
Savitri Handa: Wo kaise?
Geet: Wo aise ke jab bhi wo ghadi aati hai jo ke geet ke dil ke panno par sunhere aksharo mein likhne layak hota hai... aap aakar mera pyara sa sapna tod deti hai.
Savitri: (smiling) Achha to zara main bhi to sunu ki wo kaunsi ghadi hai jiska humari ladoo rani itne besabri se intezaar kar rahi hai.
Geet: Blushing
Savitri: Ab bolo bhi ya yuhi sharmati rahogi.
Geet: Apne Prince Charming se pehli mulakat.
Savitri: O to ye baat hai acchha zara ye to batayiye ke aapke Prince Charming dikhte kaise hai.
Geet: O mummy aapne meri dukhti rag par haath rakh diya.
Savitri: Wo kyun?
Geet: Mummy jab bhi mujhe unke handsome se chehre ka deedar hone hi wala hota hai to kaano mein ek surili aawaz gunjne lagti hai jo kehti hai ke geet bete utt jaayiye subah ho gayi hai.
Savitri: ( starts laughing) accha ji to humari beti aur unke prince charming ke beech mein hum kabaab mein haddi ka kam kar rahe hai. Theek hai kal se hum aapke shahi neend to todne ki justakhi nahi karenge bhale hi aap Radio Station jaane ke liye late ho jaaye. Kyun thik hai na?
Geet: Oye teri, aaj phir deri ho gayi. Jaldi kar geet tujhe kisi bhi tarah us duffer Yash se pehle Radio station pouchna hi hoga warna aaj pehli baar use teri taang kheche ka mauka mil jaayega.
Savitri: Geet bete aap abhi bhi khud se baate karne mein lagi hai. Lagta hai aaj aapki scooty ki tabiyat thik hai kyun?
Geet: Pata nahi aisa koi din aayega bhi ya nahi. Har subah mujhe apni us khatara scooty ke saath khusti ladni padti hai.
O mumma abhi baato shaato ka waqt nahi hai. Aap bhi na kitna bolti hai aur main bechari nanhi si jaan aapke baato ke chakar main humesha late ho jaati hoon.
Savitri: Accha ji to main baate karti hoon
Geet: Ji mumma, accha abhi mujhe taiyar hone dijiye tab tak aap nashta taiyar kar dijiye.
Savitri: Jo hukum rani saheeba
SAVITRI ABOUT TO LEAVE
Geet: Achha mumma kal ho sake to 5-10 minute late uthana, shayad aapke future damad ke deedar ho jaaye.
( Smiles and goes to the washroom singing " KAISA HAI KAUN HAI WO JAANE KAHA HAI)
Savitri: Pagli ( Smiles)
PRECAP: BLIND DATE
Part 2: pg 3
Link to my OS: Tere mast mast do nain
Link to my FF: Mere humsafar
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