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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting eagerly for your next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Please Continue Soon 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Jez, update soon pls

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Posted: 12 years ago
Jez dear missed your updates...i hope you are fine dear...very sorry for being so late in reading your updates...like always awesome updates dear...seems like Isabel is gonna create some problem between NivRen...hope for the best
lovely updates ...continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 46

The girls took nivi out...Divya was already seated there..Divya was looking beautiful as always.. Nivi sat beside divya..she looked around and saw alll the faces around them smilling ..and happy..except one..Isabel..
Niviz smile vanished as soon as she saw isabel...Isabel was satnding near chanchal and Vandhana..and it was clear from the look of her face that she was not liking wat she was hearing..nivi wondered wat the mothers wre talking about..
Chanchal and Vandhana came forward and hugged both the girls and looked at nayantara dadi and Hemlatha.. Vandhana said.. " Chanchal keh rehi thi ki ye dhonon bachiyaan hamare aankhon ke saamne thi aur hame patha hi nahi chala ki yehi hamare beton ki pathniyan banne waali hai..."
"Waqt ka ajeeb khel hain.." said dadi and everybody agreed..
nivi looked at Isabel..no wonder she was not liking it..but before she could get lost in thots...she felt a touch on her hand and saw her di looking at her...smiling..
she smiled bac and decided she wont think about anything else today..
The mehendi ceremony started..
Everybody took turns to put mehendi on both Divya and niviz hands..
Saha, Nayana and Payal were so happy and they were adding to the fun and excitment..
The girls started singing the song...
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai
O hariyali banno
Le jaana tujhko guiyyaan aane waale hai saiyyaan
Thaamenge aake baiyyaan, goonjegi shehnaayi
Angnaayi, angnaayi
Gaaye maiya aur mausi, gaaye behna aur bhabhi
Ke mehndi khil jaaye, rang laaye hariyaali banni
Gaaye phoofi aur chaachi, gaaye naani aur daadi
Ke mehndi mann bhaaye, saj jaaye hariyaali banni
Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho
Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Gaaje, baaje, baraati, ghoda, gaadi aur haathi ko
Laayenge saajan tere aangan, hariyaali banni
Teri mehndi woh dekhenge
To apna dil rakhdenge woh
Pairon mein tere chupke se, hariyaali banni
Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho
Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai..
Every body was happy and the atmosphere was filled with joy sand laughter..but nivi couldnt stop thinking about  isabel said..but every time she thought that she may not be able to hold her tears she found her  family or her friends by her side..maybe they were not aware of wat nivi was going through but their looks, smile or touch just comforted her more than they realized..specially her divya di..all throughout the function nivi felt that her di was there for her..a look... a nod..a touch..a smile..a pat .. she was just there..and nivi needed it..and she aprreciated it too..
but the person she wanted to see the most was...viren..she wanted to talk to him..she wanted to ask him..she wanted to tell him..
wat was she gonna say or ask..she diddnt know.. maybe she just wanted to see him..
After the function she just wanted to go to her room..but she had to wait till everybody left..Finally wen everybody left she went to her room and closed the door behind her and locked it...
there was an uneasy feeling in her mind..she couldnt understand why isabel words were affecting her s much.. she took her fone and started dialing virenz number..but she quickly disconnected the fone..
How could she drag viren into all this..if she is worried that doesnt mean she has to get viren worried also..this is between isabel and her..so..
she was thinking hard and all her thoughts ended up with viren...she so badly wanted to see him..but it was past midnight and there was no chance that she could see him now..
she wished she could just go to the sood mansion and see him..she wished..she couldnt completed her thots before that she heard a voice behind her saying.. "mere baare mein soch rahi ho..."
She turned around to see viren sitting on the window sill...nivi couldnt believe her eyes..
how could viren be here..that too this late..

Edited by daffodils06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

happy to see u back di ðŸ¤—missed u and ur ff so much

another amazing chapter loved nivi and divya's bond
cant wait to read how isabel's track will proceed and the upcoming nivren scene... love u
 
Edited by sandy_nivren - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jez dear mind blowing updates as usual...i hope that Viren will make Nivi forget about that Isabel's words...always loved Nivi and Divya's bonding...i wish we could have seen this bonding in the show as well
comtinue soon dear 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Jez...glad to have you back.  But sweetie, youve just got to add another chapter sooon! can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandy_nivren

happy to see u back di ðŸ¤—missed u and ur ff so much

another amazing chapter loved nivi and divya's bond
cant wait to read how isabel's track will proceed and the upcoming nivren scene... love u
 


me too very happy to b bac...🤗
missed u 2..
thanks for reading..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: edwardcullen19

Jez dear mind blowing updates as usual...i hope that Viren will make Nivi forget about that Isabel's words...always loved Nivi and Divya's bonding...i wish we could have seen this bonding in the show as well
comtinue soon dear 


hi sweety...thank u so much...
me too wanted to c the bonding in the show..lov u..