MANNEET MOHABATEIN... - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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part:5
after a week:
aunty ji ,muskna kaha hai?
kya beti tumhe path nahi muskan do dein pehele margayi...😭😭😭
kya ye kaise kisne mujhe kaha kyu nahi?
geet is petrified with tears...
she did not no wht to do her only one frd in hp is no where nw
heavy rain falling...
her tears r mixed with rainy water
any one did not absorve that she is n tears...
she just sat in the admist of the road...
she just crying til her heart sinks...
only one person observe that she is is in tears...he dont no for which reason she has to cry... BECUASE SHE IS GEET HANDA ...but his heart started rapid beat seeing those tears...
he went near to her...
when he came there unknwingly she touched his legs
he startled her...
he put his hands on her shoulders...
he cant bare the tears any more...
she just looks up deep in to those black eyes...
she dont no wht to talk with him
he did no hw to cocoon her
he wanted to touch those tears...but he thought who is he
to that but his heart said do ...he is MSK he listend to brain and did not touch her tears...but he said to her...
ZIS ISSAN KE LIYE TUM RO RAHI HO
AGAR WOH ISSAN ACHA HAI THO EN ASU KO ESTHMAL KARO
VARNA BILKUL NAHI
KYUNKI ES DUNIYA ASSU KA KOI MATLAB NAHI HAI...

her heart some where knw this truth said
by him
because even she also experienced
but she left numb there...thinking
who killed her?
who killed musskan?

why they should kill her?
wht the y get if they kill her
hw come she did not no abt this



he came back to home hit the wall
he dont no wht is happening to him
why again he is believing in the emotons why ?
he cant


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he did not knw why it matters to him that much
who is she ?why i cant se her tears...
there is something in that girl hich makes me to loose myself...
i cant commit gain mistake in mylife...
after 3 days...
musnshiji:chota saab chhe tho hum jakar geet handa se bath kare
nahi maunshiji main hoona me samlunga sab kuch
geet is in temple at that morning
she is unawre that hw can she do thiss
she is thinking abt mann
hw can she touched his legs
his eyes
which look loke deep ocean?
why?
wht happened me at that time...
she again noticed him infront of her eyes
but it is not dream...
she finds he is here before her eyes...
she dont knw her heart feel relax for some time seeing him...

they both r unaware of this that there mohabaatein is stared nw...

precap: first fight

hope u ll kie this one
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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
hey sendin u buddy request...plz pm me next tym...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
cool... i am waiting for their fight...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
hi saw ur ff in FB...read it...
nice one...
so muskan was killed bcoz she was pregnant...
who killed her...
y does geet say that she is not handa...
love to c how maaneet fall in love...
i have sent u buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list
Edited by preethia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
wow great part love it i like maan and his dialogue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hi dear,
very nice update with beautiful pictures. loved them very much.
you are giving a different dimension to maaneet pictures. very nice one.
thanks for the update buddy.
eagerly waiting fot the story to unfold
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Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
part 6
she noticed him getting frm his jeep towards her
she thought it has illusion but it in real
only sky is left between them
she scared to see in this eyes
she dont no why she cant...
ye lo es papers par tum sign kardo
mujhe tumara zameen chahiye
aur tumhe kitna paisa chahiye utna lelo

geet did not undertsand wht he upto
but she got that he want take her land
she said look mr...
MANN SINGH KHURANA{in attitude}
u may be anything
but i cant give my land to u at any cost
he again sees in to those moist eyes...he cnat control himself when he sees those eyes ...he feel he is seeing himself in them...
so my answer is NO
i cant give this land for u
got it...
no one dares to say NO for msk
and u...
may be no one but i can say no for u
i m not ur pupprt to give my land when u want
it is mine and it is fatal that i m not giving it to u
he some time admires her dare
because no one cant say NO for him...but she said in front of him that to seeking into his eyes...
it hurts his ego
he much money u want u take...but i want that land
and onmore thing u ll give me that land for me ok
it is MSK chalkenge with u
i ll take that land with in 2 days

kk check ur luck MSk
becuase may be u thik that with money u can but anything but it is impossible...
there are manythings in life which are inportant than money
emotions and love which makes a person complete
and coming for that land i have much realtion with that so do wht u want?
u may by malls,buididngs,cars,...but u cant buy selfrespect
and emotoins of someone

these words touch mann somewhere
but he smirks
listen ms.GEET HANDA dont five e lessons
i m promise i ll take ur land frm u with in 2 days
she cant bare his attitude so she leaves frm there
while going she says I HATE U MSK

he did not knwn wht happened to him
why those eyes make him to see himself
wht happened to me?
why i cant control my emotions
no i m MSK is should't have emtions and love in
my heart is closed...it is a stone...
I HATE U GEET
HANDA HAVELI;
when geet came back she notices a letter for her
sh opens and saw a message frm GAURAV and he said he to meet tomorow at 11am in the morning
it is important
she feels sad for him
she thought GAURAV has her brother frm her kid
she called raji and said that tomorow we r meeting GAURAV
and we should not say this to anyone in the house
be careful
she leaves to her room

but she thinks abt mannonly hw could he asked the land
that to demanding
I HATE U MSK

I HATE U GEET
there r thinking that hatred is for lifetime but forgot that there MOHABATEIN is started there unknownlingly...

precap;unkwon jealous for mann...geet knws truth


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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
hey nyc update...but itz short.😭...thnkx 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
sorry for the short updates...
i have medical entrance exam on 31st of this month, becoz of that preparation i m giving short updates...
after that i ll give the long updates soon...
hope u all understand

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and give ur comments

love,
abi
Edited by abisamratgunjan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
awesome update ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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