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awesome ...superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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finally maan and geet engaged :)
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lovely update...
maan announcing in front of the world that geet is his fiance
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Geet is feeling happy

She looked at the sky……………………………

On the other side

Sasha got worried………….

She gave a call……………………………………

She dialed a number

Suddenly geet felt two hands encircled her

She turned tofind ……………….

The owner

Maan………………………..

She whispered.

Yes sweet heart………………………..

So how is my surprised

U didn't tell me all this…………..

I feared that this beauty may be stealed by someone

Oh……………………………………

So ifsomeone steal thenmaan singh khurana leave him…………………

Not in this life……………

He smirked ……that geet is talking carefully.where she used it to before

He cannot see the scary face of geet.

He want her to smile.like his angel.

The beautiful moment disturbed by.adi…

He turned .his angry glareadi gulped.but he didn't have other option.

Sir it is very urgent business……………he stressed business…………

Maan understood the code.

He excused…………..

Yes adi……..

Sir ……..sasha informed him.and he is going to come here anytime.

Oh don't worry

It is time for next move………………

He called someone

Yes…………………………………………..

Get ready for ur work………………..

On the other hand……………..dev is worried

Geet is engaged to maan singh khurana

The emperor of khurana industries and khurana estitates

He is the top most business man of…………………india…

And a eligible bachelor and a dangerous brain………………………………………….

His moves

But he need to meet…………………………………….him……………

As he about to open the door………………………………………

He saw a police inspector standing onhis door way

Mr dev.mehra ur under arrest……………………..

Under arrest why………………….

For this

This is one of the client

First charge

He did n't complete.the project handover………………

And the second one

He tried to bribe one of the govt employee tonget the tender

The police got enough evidences

And try to behave……………………odd with one of the employee

Dev gulped his salavia.

And the police took him,

And one of them called…………..maan,

Sir ur work is done

Be careful with our guest he should be there for permently.

And one more thing.

No mor lawyer should get him out.

So make necessary arrangements………………………………..

And for u .will ge trenough rewards.

Thanku sir.

We always want ur good books.

Thank u sir…………

He cut the phone.

And called his detectives

Nice job.

And one more thing……………I want more evidences……….

As it is not enough for mr akshaya ato go……………….

Ok…………………….

Ok sir

Ur work will be done……………………………………………..

Ok.bye

He turned back to adi.and smiled.

Where sasha…worried why dev is not there

Before she could say.anything,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

What happened sasha………..

I think ur not happy.are u alright

Maan manly voice ………………………

She turned……………….

Geet is looking beautiful na……………………don't u congratulate her……………….

I think u need.

Just tehn dadi maa.called him.

He excused……………….

And after sometime he played with pari……………………………………..

Pari hugged him and said did the monster come…………………………

No one can…………………………come .and

My super hero is there

Super hero who.

u.

he smiled…………………………………….

He kissed……………………..him.and rohan also kissed him.

He looked for geet

Geet blushed……………

At the night

Geet felt some one at the window

She afraid and found maan is smiling at him

His face expressions changed.

I came for mygift

Gift

Yes………………..

Even pari and rohan gave not by u

I will not go……………….until I give my gift

He winked a thim.

No.

He turned…………………

And just then he felt something cold……………………….geet bend over and brushed her lips a tteh cheek…..

He smiled.and put his hand…….on the cheek……………….

He enter the hall with hand o nhis cheek………………………

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Geet is feeling happy

She looked at the sky……………………………

On the other side

Sasha got worried………….

She gave a call……………………………………

She dialed a number

Suddenly geet felt two hands encircled her

She turned tofind ……………….

The owner

Maan………………………..

She whispered.

Yes sweet heart………………………..

So how is my surprised

U didn't tell me all this…………..

I feared that this beauty may be stealed by someone

Oh……………………………………

So ifsomeone steal thenmaan singh khurana leave him…………………

Not in this life……………

He smirked ……that geet is talking carefully.where she used it to before

He cannot see the scary face of geet.

He want her to smile.like his angel.

The beautiful moment disturbed by.adi…

He turned .his angry glareadi gulped.but he didn't have other option.

Sir it is very urgent business……………he stressed business…………

Maan understood the code.

He excused…………..

Yes adi……..

Sir ……..sasha informed him.and he is going to come here anytime.

Oh don't worry

It is time for next move………………

He called someone

Yes…………………………………………..

Get ready for ur work………………..

On the other hand……………..dev is worried

Geet is engaged to maan singh khurana

The emperor of khurana industries and khurana estitates

He is the top most business man of…………………india…

And a eligible bachelor and a dangerous brain………………………………………….

His moves

But he need to meet…………………………………….him……………

As he about to open the door………………………………………

He saw a police inspector standing onhis door way

Mr dev.mehra ur under arrest……………………..

Under arrest why………………….

For this

This is one of the client

First charge

He did n't complete.the project handover………………

And the second one

He tried to bribe one of the govt employee tonget the tender

The police got enough evidences

And try to behave……………………odd with one of the employee

Dev gulped his salavia.

And the police took him,

And one of them called…………..maan,

Sir ur work is done

Be careful with our guest he should be there for permently.

And one more thing.

No mor lawyer should get him out.

So make necessary arrangements………………………………..

And for u .will ge trenough rewards.

Thanku sir.

We always want ur good books.

Thank u sir…………

He cut the phone.

And called his detectives

Nice job.

And one more thing……………I want more evidences……….

As it is not enough for mr akshaya ato go……………….

Ok…………………….

Ok sir

Ur work will be done……………………………………………..

Ok.bye

He turned back to adi.and smiled.

Where sasha…worried why dev is not there

Before she could say.anything,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

What happened sasha………..

I think ur not happy.are u alright

Maan manly voice ………………………

She turned……………….

Geet is looking beautiful na……………………don't u congratulate her……………….

I think u need.

Just tehn dadi maa.called him.

He excused……………….

And after sometime he played with pari……………………………………..

Pari hugged him and said did the monster come…………………………

No one can…………………………come .and

My super hero is there

Super hero who.

u.

he smiled…………………………………….

He kissed……………………..him.and rohan also kissed him.

He looked for geet

Geet blushed……………

At the night

Geet felt some one at the window

She afraid and found maan is smiling at him

His face expressions changed.

I came for mygift

Gift

Yes………………..

Even pari and rohan gave not by u

I will not go……………….until I give my gift

He winked a thim.

No.

He turned…………………

And just then he felt something cold……………………….geet bend over and brushed her lips a tteh cheek…..

He smiled.and put his hand…….on the cheek……………….

He enter the hall with hand o nhis cheek………………………

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Geet is feeling happy

She looked at the sky……………………………

On the other side

Sasha got worried………….

She gave a call……………………………………

She dialed a number

Suddenly geet felt two hands encircled her

She turned tofind ……………….

The owner

Maan………………………..

She whispered.

Yes sweet heart………………………..

So how is my surprised

U didn't tell me all this…………..

I feared that this beauty may be stealed by someone

Oh……………………………………

So ifsomeone steal thenmaan singh khurana leave him…………………

Not in this life……………

He smirked ……that geet is talking carefully.where she used it to before

He cannot see the scary face of geet.

He want her to smile.like his angel.

The beautiful moment disturbed by.adi…

He turned .his angry glareadi gulped.but he didn't have other option.

Sir it is very urgent business……………he stressed business…………

Maan understood the code.

He excused…………..

Yes adi……..

Sir ……..sasha informed him.and he is going to come here anytime.

Oh don't worry

It is time for next move………………

He called someone

Yes…………………………………………..

Get ready for ur work………………..

On the other hand……………..dev is worried

Geet is engaged to maan singh khurana

The emperor of khurana industries and khurana estitates

He is the top most business man of…………………india…

And a eligible bachelor and a dangerous brain………………………………………….

His moves

But he need to meet…………………………………….him……………

As he about to open the door………………………………………

He saw a police inspector standing onhis door way

Mr dev.mehra ur under arrest……………………..

Under arrest why………………….

For this

This is one of the client

First charge

He did n't complete.the project handover………………

And the second one

He tried to bribe one of the govt employee tonget the tender

The police got enough evidences

And try to behave……………………odd with one of the employee

Dev gulped his salavia.

And the police took him,

And one of them called…………..maan,

Sir ur work is done

Be careful with our guest he should be there for permently.

And one more thing.

No mor lawyer should get him out.

So make necessary arrangements………………………………..

And for u .will ge trenough rewards.

Thanku sir.

We always want ur good books.

Thank u sir…………

He cut the phone.

And called his detectives

Nice job.

And one more thing……………I want more evidences……….

As it is not enough for mr akshaya ato go……………….

Ok…………………….

Ok sir

Ur work will be done……………………………………………..

Ok.bye

He turned back to adi.and smiled.

Where sasha…worried why dev is not there

Before she could say.anything,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

What happened sasha………..

I think ur not happy.are u alright

Maan manly voice ………………………

She turned……………….

Geet is looking beautiful na……………………don't u congratulate her……………….

I think u need.

Just tehn dadi maa.called him.

He excused……………….

And after sometime he played with pari……………………………………..

Pari hugged him and said did the monster come…………………………

No one can…………………………come .and

My super hero is there

Super hero who.

u.

he smiled…………………………………….

He kissed……………………..him.and rohan also kissed him.

He looked for geet

Geet blushed……………

At the night

Geet felt some one at the window

She afraid and found maan is smiling at him

His face expressions changed.

I came for mygift

Gift

Yes………………..

Even pari and rohan gave not by u

I will not go……………….until I give my gift

He winked a thim.

No.

He turned…………………

And just then he felt something cold……………………….geet bend over and brushed her lips a tteh cheek…..

He smiled.and put his hand…….on the cheek……………….

He enter the hall with hand o nhis cheek………………………

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!how come i never saw this f before!!
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Geet is feeling happy

She looked at the sky……………………………

On the other side

Sasha got worried………….

She gave a look

And dialed the number

Mr mehra u need to come here other wise u loose everything.

On listening to this……..

He got scared

Maan singh khurana engaged to geet handa

Love of his life

He is not a normal person

He is a business tycoon

And he holds lot of business………………………….

And person with powerful.

But he need to get geet.

On the other side

Geet is very happy

And she is looking a the sky

Di samaj mein nahii araha hay ke yeh sach yaa sapna

Just then he feel two hands encircled her.

He turned to find the owner

M aan

So what my misty is doing today

Misty

She surprised

Yes misty u are my misthy……………………………

She smiled

And at they are at the moment

Adi came in

Sir.

He gave a angry glare

Adi gulped

If it is not urgent they he never dare to disturb the private moment of his angry boss…………………..

Sir it is business

He stressed the word business

He raised his eyes brow

And he came out…………………….

Sir..sasha called him.,

Don't worry next move

He looked at him,

In a few minutes he called him.

Ready.

Yes sir

A s dev open the door to find people in police .and his client..

He looked a thin

Mr mehra u are underarrest.

Arrest for what…..

He took to the police station.

Charge 1.he did n't finish the work in time a

Charge 2.his cheques bounce a the bank.

Charge3;use un parliamentary……….lanuguage to his employuees.

So go on…………………………..

Maan smiled ……………………….

As the client andall set up done by him.

He had sent the person to dev's office a sclient

A nd created a problem in the site …due…………………..to union …people.

And due to tension.

He had given wrong signature

And immediately bank reported for bounce cheque

And the last one..

He scolde dh the employee………………………………………………………………………………….

Mr dev mehra this is the beginning ……………………

With in few………………………….days u r life is turning to hell.where I will make sure rfor that……………………………………….

And he called .

Hello mr rajiv.make sure he should not come for 15 days

Remaining

Akshay will take care

He saw pari comin g towards………………………………………..

He lifted herb

Koi problem nahii naa………………

Nahii bab y

And I nwill be there

Ok mf………………..

Ok sweet heart……………………………….

After some time he saw looking worried.

He smiled.

What happened sasha are u ok………………….

Mk.

Don't u congratualate me………for myengagement sasha

She fumed in anger

But gave a slight smile

Congrats ………………mk…………………….

I hope ur enjoying

In think ur not enjoying……………………………………..

No mk

I will come .

With that she ran away

Maan……………….don't worry.sashas I will m ake sure u will getwhat u had done……………………….

Rohan and pari gave kiss on his cheeks

He looked a t geet

Geet blushed…………………..showing dadimaa andvicky who are busy in chatting.

And anee and misha……………………..

She quickly took rohan and pari…………..to their rooms.

At the night geet felt some one presence ata the window

Surprisingly find maan standing there hands crossed his chest

Shirt les s only…………………..vests and trousers.

She looked.

And said aap yeha iss waqt………………………….

Kise ne kuch bhool gaye……yaad dilane aya tha

Bhool gayee kya

He pointed his cheeks.

She blushed.

Aap bhi naa.

Jab tak muje mahii milti mein yeha se nahii jaunga………………………..

Geet smiled and rushed…………………..

Where maan turned his face in anger

But suddenly he felt her warm lips on his cold cheek.

Before he turned……………….

She ran to her bed………………

He smiled……………………

Put his hand on the cheek

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow superb
dev is in jail
great

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