MN - The JOURNEY towards MAGIC. - Page 13

ahh... What happened to nupur? Did that raj left her or was he a cheat??
I hope she wasn't cheated...
feeling so bad for her.. but no worries, mayank is there to keep the things right...
he is a sweet heart and loves nups a lot...
hope she tells him everything...

And BTW i am first today😃 and so sorry for not editing the comment on previous part
I didn't get time to but trust me that was the part which made my eyes to shed tears...
felt so bad for mayank... 😭
Hope everything becomes alright between them
Edited by mayurg2010 - 12 years ago

a poignant update Kinza.
i am spell bound & speech less.
both are hurt by the circumstances.
loved Mayu's one liners very much.
all in all i loved the update very much.🤗
first to comment again😆
ps- don't go by what some random individual has to say. we all love you & your stories very much.
so just shrug off the irritating comments . be happy & keep writing such magical stories.🤗 Edited by shubhie - 12 years ago

Beautifull written Kinza...i could almost feel the whole scenario Mayur were in n i can feel how the love in Mayank's heart is getting hurt but is still drawing him to help her in every way he can...love is always like that naa...😍Edited by Payal-15 - 12 years ago

commented on pg 17😆😉
Edited by shubhie - 12 years ago

 

"you are right Sharma, wishes don't come true, I so wish you wouldn't have left me alone that day"

     seeems this line is very important for the story to proceed further...

 

eagerly waiting to read more

amazing update as usual...loving the way its proceeding...

wow!!!...

 

thanks for the PM...

"Relationships don't have statuses",

👏i liked this line...

nice update kinza😊

awesome update...
luvd it...
specially lst line
"you are right Sharma, wishes
don't come true, I so wish you
wouldn't have left me alone that
day"
luvd it...
hope dat sadu is out of mayur's lyf..
n plz update soon...

did nupur get married to him? did that man broke her heart?
and now nupur wishes that mayank never left her that day? i bet mayank wishes that day never came when she walked on with her fiance and broke him to pieces.

OMG!!! the story is progressing amazingly and i don't find it typical as its MAGICAL...!! 

Amazing update Kinza...but compare to the previous one it seemed a promo...please give a bit long update from next sorry if seemed demanding but can't help as ur stories r too addictive to resist...loved their one liner convo...so simple yet intense...true magical girl ur...ur magic never cease to increase...!!!

Well abt u as writer...jo jante hai unhe explanation ki jarurat nahi aur jo nahi jante unhe kya explain karna 😊...!!!