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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Dear,

very nice. update soon.can't wait.

thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very intriguing storyline...so what happens with the cell phone? Is Ahem now snooping thru Gopi's phone? What's he hoping to find...

Let's see more jealous Ahem...
Edited by sunshine33 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: archanadamania

Hi Dear,

very nice. update soon.can't wait.

thanks


thanks dear, i hopu liked it...
i will update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunshine33

very intriguing storyline...so what happens with the cell phone? Is Ahem now snooping thru Gopi's phone? What's he hoping to find...

Let's see more jealous Ahem...


we cant say its intruguing because all the things are cleared...
and ahem can never distrust gopi 
because he know that gopi loves him
but anyways thanks dear for the comment.
Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85


thanks dear for the comment..
i hope you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pihu
me waiting

update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks simi i have update a new part for you and all friends and i would like to say the love and support you have showed to me that was awsome... just wanna say

Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks radika so much dear...i loved your comment





Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-8, page-12

 

Ahem is standing on balcony talking on phone. gopi take a breath. she comes to ahem...and hugs him from back and kiss him on his shoulder. ahem holds a call and smile and turn and hugs her... he continues talking on phone. gopi sees ahem...she kisses him on shoulder. ahem stop talking and looks at gopi. a person on phone is saying hello hellahem.. ahem is just looking at gopi and gopi ahem...

 

ahem: i will talk with you later.. {he takes closer gopi to him, only a inch difference there}

after few min

ahem phone rings again back to his senses...

ahem: i told you na i will call you later.

gopi: who is calling ?

ahem: no one is there... {he thinks about phone and feels hesitate} he makes a excuse and goes for taking shower.

 

after 3 min...

ahem comes after taking shower. kokila calls ahem..ahem picks up the call

ahem: yes mom

kokila:ahem where were you from last night.

ahem: i was with my frnd {gopi is shocked and confused}

kokila: okay when you are coming?

ahem: i will be there soon mom and dont worry...

kokila: okay jai shri krishna.

ahem: jai shri krishna mom..

 

ahem goes to wardrobe and gives her a packet...gopi takes packet and see ahem.gopi sees ahem is lost.

ahem: take this and wear it...

gopi:ahem ji what is this?

ahem: your saree? i just love you to see you in saree.. okay...

gopi smiles...

ahem: wear it now...

gopi: but ahem ji...

ahem: what?

gopi: last night, {she is not able to speak} you really remember na, what was happened between us?

ahem: yes i know... so...

gopi: so u dont want to say anything...

ahem: what do you want to say me...

gopi looks at ahem: nothing go...

 

SCENE SHIFT:

jigar is checking files...rashi comes with a cup of tea... she sits beside jigar...

jigar looks at rashi...rashi smiles...

 

jigar: what happened rashi? why are you smiling? am i looking you joker as you think really about me?

rashi: no jigar ji i never thought that why are you saying this?

jigar: hmm i dont trust you...

rashi says nothing...after a min...

rashi: jigar ji can i go to see my mom...

jigar: sure you can go...

rashi smiles...

jigar: but i will also come with you.. {rashi stops smiling}

rashi: but jigar ji you got a work na...

jigar: that i will see my self comeon get ready...

rashi: its okay jigar ji we will go someother day, you do your work...

jigar:looks at rashi...: are you sure.

rashi: yes yes jigar ji...

jigar: okay

rashi sees jigar and gives a fake smile...

 

Scene shift:

ahem gets ready for and gopi also... he holds gopi hand and take her out from room. he pays money for one night stay...

ahem: so gopi where you will go?

gopi: home?

ahem: which home?

gopi: my home?

ahem: okay where?

gopi: i will go myself.. i will take bus.

ahem: no i will drop you...

gopi: please sir...

ahem: gopi why are you saying me sir now...

gopi: yes you are my sir only... {she takes a bus and leaves ahem shocking mode}

 

ahem comes home thinking about yesterday night...kokila sees ahem...

kokila: ahem where were you dikra..

ahem: mom i was with my friend my cellphone batterey was dead.. i am sorry

kokila: its okay ahem...

ahem: i am going to my room... please mom dont send anyone in my room.. as i am taling rest...

kokila: okay ahem dikra...

 

rashi is there and thinks "ahem bhai never done this that he didnt come back to home, there must be something, but what should i do to find out..oh god please tell me..." suddenly she gets a call on landline...she smiles...

Scene shifts:

Gopi reaches her home, she is looking so tired, she goes to her room to take rest. she thinks to herself

"why ahem is behaving so strange, may be he is regreting what had he done last night.. No this cannnot be happen, he loves me...but how to know? should i tell maaji about this? no no ahemji will get angry. okay i will talk to him in office tommorrow..." 

Scene shifts:

rashi is waiting in resturant and she is seeing here and there.. a car stops their and a girl comes out from there. she is very modern and she is covered with all branded stuffs like purse. watch. dress and all...rashi mouth is open... she comes ans sits in front of rashi. she opens her gogs,...she is anita {😲} rashi makes faces..

rashi: yes why you have called me here?

anita: hmm i will tell you have some patience, tell me what you will have?

rashi: i will have orange juice... {anita orders waiter for drink}.. now tell me why you called me here?

anita: look rashi i need your help?

rashi: what help?

anita: i want ahem...

rashi is shocked and stands up...

rashi: what...

anita: yes and you can only help me. i know gopi is out of house...and i want him any cost...

rashi: no no i cant help you, there is so much risk in this?

anita: sit darling, think if i will come to that house, kokila will not say you anything. we both can have a full control on house...

 

rashi goes into dream: {her background is playing "dhimm dhimm"}

" she is sitting on sofa putting with all jewelleries and costly saree. kokila is bringing juice and hetal is putting nailpolish on her nails.." {car horn brings rashi back" 

rashi: but anita,,,see if someone came to know about this we will be die...

anita: no one will going to know about this, you just have to be careful...

rashi {smiles}: okay... what's the plan

 

anita told something rashi and she listens it {no voice...}

 

here i end this part frnds...hope you will like it...




Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really  amazing.. part  yaar  u are a good writer