Originally posted by: suhana19
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Edited 🤗Hey dear Hamiee🤗
Thanx a million for the wonderful and long update 🤗 loved it as always 👍🏼
Hain dutta is really excited about his trip to hospital and his meeting with Brig parekh regarding his future ...Awww he can't stop thinkin about "Nakusha " the one who takes his breath away ..trying to discipline himself :.. 😳
pagal hai..breathe ghatam ho gaye tu mar jaye ga..discipline my foot!
Naku also can't stop thinking about her Saab ...and admiring the ring feeling him 😍 every moment is precious for her ...love the outfit ..just beautiful simple yet beautiful 😉 But she dnt need to impress him ...he is already in love with his naku😉
yesss..but some times he check her clothes..but he loves her loads that's for sure
As always Naku went to dutta "s room with bed tea ..but our major is no where to be seen ..
😉 Haila she is screaming like she has some ghost ... 😆 Ab kya Kare pehli baar Jo Dekh rahi hai aapne Saab ko ..in new look 😍 hain mein marjawaa 😉 Dress to kill ..
Loved the honest answers naku gave when Dutta asked about his new look 😉
Awww he is checking her out and trying to control his feelings ..man of words indeed ⭐️
waise suhana why are you marien over major sahib..he belongs to Naku only...looks liked hs dress has killed you as well!! glad you liked Naku's simple yet sraight forward answers
Loved and enjoyed the breakfast table scene btwn all ..everyone suprised to see him in new look 😉
Baby you know I want to hold You in arms ..But now on he is mused ,I have to slowly retreat from u omg what a killer line .. 😳 Naku could feel it ... lageta hai you read the UD with full on intesity and concentration..all the bits to do with Major Dutta. haaa
Loved the Tasha interaction in the car ..and chori chori chupke chupke stealing glances 😉 Loved the song ..just perfect for Tasha
listened to your VM contest winner saniyhaan, almost chose that song,but then went for saibo...chaal pleased you liked this bit
He intro everyone Naku as his fiance . 😉 thank heaven's for that,waise GF tu nehi khe sakta
Gosh this Lauren is getting too chipku ..every now and then hugging him ...and naku not liking it ... haaa liked that word..sticky you mean...haaaha
Well happy to hear that dutta is all well ...
oh he's well! bas dil mein khar bhr hai...naku ki bemarri hai
Haila he is going to teach 😉 Well I hope kids behave 😆 Well if they dnt then dutta surely does know how to knock some senses into them ..well can't wait to see him teaching ..
loved that remark! but sadly he can't touch them,he 'll be booked for assualt..
Aww they went to meet Baaji and our baaji happy to see them ..full on nautanki 😆 But was to know they will be leaving soon ..
loved writing this scene..sigh!
God dutta is mad at her for not listening and coming in ..gadha kabhi toh baat sun liye kar ..that sergeant invited her ...but he said sorry ..awww can't see tears in Naku "s eyes ...
as we all know when he's enraged his listening skills don't work..
Loved the Convo btwn AS and dutta as always brillantly written ⭐️
me too,loved penning it down
Omg last scene was a killer 😭 Got me all emotional ...no words ...They hugged and she cries ...I know he must be crying as well :.just dnt wanna show it ...
hainn.so you are along with being emoti queen ,vm queen ,ab drama queen bhi hai...ye le here's a box of tissues ..be sure to blow your nosie!!
The precap is once again going to be sad ...roops and dutta went to drop naku ...
afraid soo.lambhi juadaaaii!!
Once again thanx alot for the brillant and breathless update .. ⭐️ Loved and enjoyed every bit of it ...👏👍🏼thank you suhana for a lovely long feed back along with the bits and pieces you have attached with it... yeahhh hammie loves it ...xxhammie
The precap is once again going to be sad ...roops and dutta went to drop naku ...😳Hamiee
Love and hugssuhana🤗
Dear Hammie,🤗 please accept my apologies for such a late post. But I wanted to take time out savor each moment and write comments for each of the updates missed. Please bear with my ramblings. Thank you for your for your fantastic comments ivy,Iam so bleesed to have such an avid and faithful reader as your self ..I am truly humbled by your graciousness xxxhammie
Chapter18: Part I
The engagement episode is just awesome'captured it so beautifully in your inimitable style. So beautifully detailed that I could visual each scene.
Thank God Baaji is back.dhinchak dhinchak
Maj. Dutta+ red towel + wet hair = 😳 need I say more.
Dutta praising himself in the mirror😆' doesn't he know that is the most perfect Male specimen 😍 But I guess that what love does to you.
The Dhoti episode was so funny. And D not willing to eat anything other than maybe by his N.😃
Waiting for their engagement and ahem'. Ahem..AHEM. Kitni besharm hoon mein.😳
Naku looks like a princess who has captured the Kings heart. So much passion and longing between them '.which only they are aware..Some of the best romantic moments can be in a crowd where the two lovers are in their own world and no one is wiser.
Chapter18: Part II
Tasha so much in love that they cannot bear to be way from each other. But their relationship is not based on physical attraction or eternal love alone'.It is also their desire to serve the county and its citizens that brings them closer.
Loved the dance sequence where Naku was jealous of the female guest who tried to flirt with Major Dutta. But Dutta reassuring Naku and thanking her for choosing him to be her life partner took my breath away..what a sensitive and caring man.❤️
Dutta kept his promise to mamaji and approached the Mamaji-Brig. Parekh issue with a lot of responsibility, sensitivity and appropriateness. 👍🏼
Duji moments are satisfying as always. Duji vs Tasha? Like I have said so many times earlier' can never chose.. for me both are very important relationships in Dutta's journey of life.
Thanks once again for the wonderful epi's👏
loved your fantastic comments ivy..gosh have you been buy at work? but still am touched tht you made the time to read and comment on the UDS..LOVE YOU LOADS..MATE.xxhaammie
Chapter19 have to say this was such a respite to write after he sagaai UD that I let myself go and had a whale of a time ..threw in a baby..and made his phulwari the hit of the UD.the phulwari bit came about before i joined in but zuby and your self briefed me roughly to the extent of Dutta lovers imagination with regards to his hairy chest..have to say cannot think of him without the growth...haahaaa.
The Baby scene is really cute and I loved the bonding between the two couples. It has also helped to bring Naku-Dutta relationship one more step closer.
It's great when men realize that their wives also have an identity of their own and dreams that need to be fulfilled. The first step to a healthy, long lasting relationship.. "two halves don't make a whole! two complete persons make a whole!" very well said Hammie.👏
Dutta and Phulwari have a long connection'No thoughts of shaving please Dutta'.otherwise before dealing with Naku ..you'll have to deal with the 200🤣
His one line for the day was hilarious and potent with meaning at the same time "haan insane se janawar tune hi to mujhe banya hai Naku!" D taking full advantage of N during the telephone conversation'how gleefully wicked ho aap Dutta Shreeram Patil! Ahem Amem'☺️
Just curious: what special sandwiches does Naku make for Dutta'any special filling?
Another amazing episode Hamlet.👍🏼
ivy never really thought about what she puts in but i guess lots of love drizzled with loads of shy looks ,and lowering of eyes...i.e subtle love potion/nectar... waise he'll eat any thing she gives him ..such a baby he is. thanks for the feed back mate...xxhammie
Chapter20
Another brilliant episode, Hammie👍🏼. Thanks for the pm and update.🤗
Tasha is like One soul and one heart beating in two people. Naku is dutta's Need and not just his want'excellent way of putting it Hammie.
Naku choosing her outfit and dressing up for Dutta and he power dressing for her. Sigh. So beautifully written that it's easy to imagine Mishal and Mahi in these scenes.
Lauren is turning out to be a big pain😡..hope she does not go and fall with our Leo Man. Won't be surprised'.hamare saab hain hee isse 😆
Loved the Tasha and Batasha moments.
"Gaya bhains pani me" 😆 Here i was waiting to see dutta donning the stalker role nd maybe even camping outside the hospital compund nd what not, but what do u get? he has decided to stay aloof with his fiancee🤢. haaahaa Sweeny Todd...undher ho jye ga for being a perv!
On one hand he is desperate to be with her but is firm to discipline his need, Nakku on the other hand is longing to be close with him for the little time left. Yeh kya locha hain? Both are thinking on opposite lines. I thought people would try nd spend as much time together as possible so that they can treasure these memories when seperated. But dutta will do his own thing. I pity nakku that when she needs[wants?] him the most he is backing off😔. I wonder what was the point in not allowing naku to accompany her parents after the sagai when he culd have sent her packing off, atleast she would have spent some time with her parents before her marriage nd he could have been successfully disciplining his needs. BTW, when r they tying the knot? any dates dear? gosh talk about having a moan! please let me know one deals with his moods..you know he does his own thing..he'll do what he pleases..do you now you are the third peron who wants them married..they haven't thought about it yet..so i guess when they have any ideas he'll probably talk aboutit wit his mum..
God!! nakku fails to recognize him in his new curt sharp look. 😃Haha! he is curious to hear from nakku for his new look, but our sherni is happy with his sher-e-pathani look, bechara! Oh! the whole of PN is fida over his looks nd he continues to ignore her at the dining area even thou' he is ready to smother her anytime, junglee man acting gentleman😛. lovvve that remark haaa me enjoying this read haaha.yesss she loves the sher the wild one!right choice Naku!
Atleast he takes naku with him for the hospital trip. Thank heavens! for small mercies. Naku still waitin for his attention but has to wait for this sweet song on the radio which melts him a bit, he atlast holds her hand, that is what he is supposed to be doing, gadha ka gadha he rahega. haaahaaabut of course ab tu filmi songs sun ke turn on hota hai,at least he has made some head way..be thankful Oh God! lauren doesnt let go of any opportunity from [wo]manhandling dutta nd in front of nakku. To top it now she advices her to be wary of the many women [like her i guess] who culd end up having an affair with dutta. Nakku needs no warning as her man is one of a kind, one woman's man, hope he lives up to this reputation.
yeah but she goody goody girl will ignore that advise .I guess she believes in trustWow! this will be fun, dutta a tutor to some rebellious youngsters of mixed gender. He has his hands full. This would be more formidable a job than the one in the frontline. Good for him! now he will be having young girls swooning for his attention😉.
oye bas ahjao one track mind!Naku is the sister baji didnt have, im sure. She is such a sweetheart never failing him, even with so much happening in her life. It was hilarious nd emotional. Baji too not failin to notice dutta's new look and wanting to wear his blazer for his date, gosh! he is ultimate drama master. Dutta's frock remark was too funny🤣, im imagining already. Baji will be missing the two dear friends during the hearing. Atleast roops would be there, that's not bad too. well Roops will get her chanceto do her bit for suporting Baji
Dutta nd his mother in sync with baji nd roops relationship, dutta's farsighted nd liberal thinking regarding educating women nd its reasons is praiseworthy. oh yes seems Naku threatened him well and proper when she spoke her mind about equality issues
Oh! nakku, unable to control her emotions, poor girl. Dutta also im sure trying to hide his emotions...nd the precap is equally glum, sigh! yesss sorry dear...kahani mein twist. wait for next UD
Apologies for the delay in commenting hammie, will wait for the next with bated breath, TC ., thankyou for your much awaited comments ..xxxhammie
Nice update👏 Good to see Datta cleared all his medical tests, teaching to students is always interesting, Left Right Left, on SAB was my favourite show, this incident reminded me that show. Naku & Datta both will go back to their respective jobs, what happens aftr that. Thanks for the PM, Waiting for the next part😊
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