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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 14 :

heer di ab tu sab kuch teekh hogaya hai plzz aap wapis aapne ghar aajaye,uss ghar ko aapki buhat zarorat hai,aapke jaane keh baad woh ghar ghar nahi raha says meher.gaya3 tries to persuade heer but she did not say anything.gaya3 told prem dekh naa beta ab tu hi heer ko samjha sakta hai,sirf tu hi hai joh usse mana kar us ghar mein la sakta hai .prem didnot say anything instead both prem heer stared at each other.heer broke the silence and says maa aisa nahi hai keh mujhe ghar nahi aana,par joh kuch bhi che saal phele hua uske baad mein ghar nahi aasakti,mujhe todhe waqt ki zarorat hai.prem moved forward and takes heer's hand in his and kissed her hands and says heer tumhe jitna waqt lena hai tum le sakti ho,kyunke mujhe pata hai keh aik na aik din tum us ghar mein wapis zaroor aayogi.heer sat with juneja's and had dinner with them.whenever noone was looking at them,heer fed prem and prem fed her.both were staring at each other when heer's hand touched at hot bowl.ouchhh says heer wincing in prem.as soon a sprem listened heer's ouchh he felt that his heart has stopped beating for a min.he saw heer and quickly took her inside her room so that he could dress her wound.he made her sit on the bed and takes out the first aid kit from the drawer.heer was not uttering a single word as she was lost in staring prem.she did not noticed anything else until prem shook her.heer tum teekh ho naa says prem.haan prem mein teekh hoon says heer.heer quickly hugged prem and prem hugged her back.prem plz mujhe maaf kardena says heer.heer yeh tum kya keh rahi ho,tum ne koi galti nahi ki hai phir bhi tum mujhse maafi kyun maang rahi ho.says prem.par meine ghar aane se to mana kardiya na,meri wajahse tumhare dil ko kitni takleef poonchi hogi,meher kitni dukhi hogayi thi prem par sach mano mein kisi ko takleef nahi paunchana chahti thi,mujhe bas todha sa waqt chahiye.says heer.kisne tumse kaha heer keh mein dukhi hoon,haan jab pheli baar tumne mujhse kaha tha keh tumhe todha sa waqt chahiye tab mein todha sa dukhi hua tha magar aaj mujhe koi dukh nahi hai kyunke mujhe meri heer wapis mil gayi hai.sach heer mujhe tumse koi shikayat nahi hai.says prem and slowly her kissed heer forehead ,then her eyes,slowly he moved towards heer cheeks and one by one he kissed them.prem;s eyes fell on heer'r lips,he thought that he missed the taste of heer's lip very badly and slowly prem moved towards heer's lips and kissed her very passionatly on her lips.heer was shocked for a moment but she felt that she was in heaven,she kissed him back .they kissed each other with full of passion and luv for each other.they both broke and heer blushed and was unable to gather courage to see prem,to hide her shyness she burried her face in prem's chest and both hugged each other.heer thought yehi sahi samay hai mujhe prem ko hamare bachon keh bare mein batana hi hoga.prem buhat khush hoga unke barey mein sun kar.both broke up from hug and heer says prem mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai.prem says haan heer bolo.but before she could continue preet came and says that they r going back home and ask if prem would come with them or he would come after wards.prem goes towards preet and slightly pulls his ears and says preet tujhe bhi yehi waqt mila tha aane keliye,mein aur heer acha kasa romance karrahe the magar tune aakar sab abrbad kardiya.ouch pb dard horaha hai chordo naa ,acha teekh hei mein jaata hoon ap baad mein aajaye ga ,aur haan ab aap aaram se romance karo aapko koi disturb nahi karega.says preet.preet goes away and prem locked the door from inside and came back to heer and  says tum kuch batane wali thi mujhe

Precap:heer tells him abouth their children and prem is very happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear
loved it
awsum blossom
wai8ting fr next part...
want 2 see wht will happen whn heer will tell 2 prem 

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a very sweet Update

I feel sorry for meher, how she missed her sister and now was pleading her to come back...good that heer said she'll go back, hope she doesn't take too long!

It was so cute how premeer fed each other whenever no one was looking and their whole scene in the bedroom was very sweet😳 their PHiss☺️

and Prem holding preet's ear and scolding him for ruining his and heer's romance 🤣 awww that was funny

Precap is nice...so finally prem will know about his kids yay!

Thankx for the Pm
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update... so heer is going to tell him about their children... waiting to rea what will be prem,s reaction..

Thanks for the PM

DO CONTINIUE SOON...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
its so good...
good to know that prem will come to know about chahat and adi...
loved their KISS...
thanks for the pm...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum! u did it heer! it was a big update!!!
luved the update!
 
Prem n Heer romance was awsum! rockin! the kiss was beautiful!
preet! hehehe! as always!
Precap awsum! update soon d nxt part plz!! thx for d pm dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 15

prem woh mein tumhe yeh batana cha rahi thi keh...suddenly prem phone rang and it irritated both prem and heer.prem switched off his phone and says haan heer ab bolo tum kya kehna chahti thi mujhse.heer says prem mein tumhe yeh batana chahti thi keh hamare do bache hain.i mean humare twins hain.there was a complete silence filled up in the room but prem decided to broke that silence and says tum sach keh rahi ho heer,hamre do bache hain,mujhe to vishwas hi nahi horaha hai keh mein papa banchuka hoon.aaj mein buhat khush hon heer aur yeh khushi mujhe sirf tumhari wajhase mili hai,i love u heer saying this prem picked up heer in his arms and started to twist heer.prem kissed heer all over her face when heer stopped him and says prem tum to bilkul pagal ho chuke ho.prem haan heer mein paagal ho gaya hoon sirf tumhare pyaar mein aur aaj to mujhe yeh bhi pata chal gaya hai keh is duniya mein hamari do do pyaar ki nishaniyan hai heer.sach mein heer mein aaj ka din kabhi nahi bhulonga.thanks for giving me this wonderful gift and quickly he kissed her on her cheeks.heer blushed and hugged prem.heer says ab chodho mujhe prem aur tum ghar jaao,buhat der hogai hai ,ghar pe sab tumhara intezaar karrahe honge.prem chodho bhi but prem been naughty was not letting heer go.prem says heer kya yaar aaj mein kitne ache mood mein tha phele us preet ne hamare romance ko barbad kiya aur ab tum bhi.not fair.says prem making cute faces.awww prem tum kitne cute lag rahe ho i love u prem says heer and kissed him on his nose.prem says ok ab mein chalta hoon tum apna khayal rakhna mein kal tumse milne aaonga teekh hai says prem ok says heer.both hugged each other dearly and prem kissed heer on her forehead.prem goes away and heer slept

precap:premeer romancing and preet interrupts their romance
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Posted: 12 years ago
again another super update
gr8 yar twins
so cute...
2 little angels in their loife..
so sweet
premeer romance in the precap.. 
sounds cool
very excited to read
cool precap
and cool update 2222222222222222222222
super duper
premeer the best
thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
so prem came to know about their children...
loved their romance...
awesome update...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum! luved it!!
 
finally!! wa8in for precap!!! update soon! wanna c more prem n heer romance! thx for d pm!