read all the parts... n read them twice... n realized I saw another layer while reading it the 2nd time... story ended on a happy note... n loved it that you made Geet take Maan on a rewind about her life with Anjali through old photo albums and Maan could see through her guilt of having separated a father from his child... the explanation about why Geet didnt inform Maan was also very heart-touching..she had got the shock of her mother wanting to harm the baby... n the child was soo unplanned that she had no clue about Maan's reaction...so she just acted out of self-preservation and an instinct of a mother... who wanted to protect her child at any cost n from everyone... she had to mature too soon for her child right from a young girl to a mother with no time to think like a rational woman...superb emotions... n then the way Maan tackled her reason of how her reality of a single mother would have ruined Maan was superb...the scene infront of the mirror was awesome...would love to see something similar enacted by drashti n gurmeet in the show!!!👏
you could have written a part or two more with how they caught up as mature adults about their teen love, but the ending was complete too in a way!
Superb writing!! Heres wishing you many more stories n much love n adulation for all your future work!!! Do think about taking this as a vocational or full time activity!!!
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