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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

OMG Aditee u just made this one up at Taz's request in span of 5 mins!!! Sach mein pls teri charan kahan hai??!!! Its poetry in prose! I can read & re-read over & over again!

This is so my type of romance! Its mushy for a guy to mouth all these & yet I can see Shaan saying it. The way he observes & notices every little movement of hers, how he perceives her every little move, makes a note of her likes & dislikes, how he kind of perks up when she is around, feels the life within him stir into action when he sees her going around on her usual chores without pampering or hovering over him, the way she makes her moves on him, likes his features & tells him about it, the way she kisses him back yet holding back initially, the way she relies on him & won't show it, the way she takes time to dress up for him & yet won't admit it, the way she sulks when he chooses work over her or when he doesn't compliment her...I can see him voicing these words when it comes to her, every little bit, anything related to her!!

Seriously Sunday afternoon I was almost sliding slowly on to my couch for a power nap & like habit checked in to ur story & bam sleep is now miles & miles away! Now I will be doing my favorite pass time & dream about these two.

So this episode was when, on Sunday evening or the last time when they were standing near the window?

Seriously I got goosebumps reading it. And believe it or not my eyes r moist. It was so touching & romantic & passionate! If I were Khanak I would have hugged him tight & wouldn't let him go!! So so beautiful! Is there really a guy like him in this world??? Seems almost impossible!

Kudos to u re!! I am HAPPY, ecstatic actually!

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purvimeh

@purvimeh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Captivating... Addictive... & just simply Irresistible...Aditeee👍🏼.. Yeh Dil maange More... (Did he ended it with a fierce passionate kiss ... am sure he would have.😛I guess am out of words now for your FF and the Char so well laid out and written...that no one will ever forget.. U just define love... FYI am gonna print this and preswerve it for mu older days to re read it again ! !Take a bow girl.. 👏What a way to unwind myself after a hectic & crazy weekend... I am a mass of chunk right now ! & I Ditto every word Lana has mouthed..! She has said it and spoken my mind as well... These two abs impossible on how they keep throwing bomb shells on each other... Shaan must be left baffled when she opened up to him in such great manner...! something he never expcetd out of her .. not this soon atleast...! & he just wipes of her dilemma... Seriosly she threw me in fist of laughter of all the possible thot she had... & Here Shaan just send u crying away..with his declartion... I guess this was their very First open intimate verbal conver..😳😃

Aditee questions...?

Did Shaan go on sunday with her for Shoping with him mom to ease her nervousness...

did they meet or managed to speak in this span of 3 weeks..?

I wanna Know Shaan POV.. Did he ponder on her turmoil? what was on his mind..& did he act on it. in some way or they other...?

@Lana... its the Friday continuation... followed by the Sunday Lunch...when they came to see her off 2 days before her departure..

Sach Main yeh banda fictional bhi hai kiya ? Darn !

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601153

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Oye-Hoye!!!!

Thanks!!!!!

Was thinking how to express my feelings that just flowed after reading this update ... he is just so natural, remembering every detail of hers, every movement of hers, the touch, her smile, her stiffening, her eyes searching for him ...

Observing each detail ... just shows how much he admires her throughout the day though he does not speak much to her as such when in office ... just observes and loves her all the more!!!

Haaye!!!!! kash ... I wish there was this kind of person in my life too ... u have started making me dream and expect ...

Haayila !!!!! Ab main kya karungi !!!!! I am so doomed ...

Chal koi gal nahi ... tu inke details tho de de ... main apne dil ko smbhal lungi ... as all have mentioned pls give these details 😉

What happened after this convo?.. How did the shopping with Mads go? ...
Lunch with his family minus him???? how did she even spend her time in his house?
He did come to drop her to the train ... what happened there? She was supposed to buy clothes for him, did she, with him or without him?
What about the visa? PA date is 2nd June na ... Woh tho wedding ke baad hi pata chalega shayad. .. but keep it in the list

So many questions ... hope u answer them all!!!!😊

Waiting as usual for the next update ... just that today I will not be able to work at all ... thanks to Shaan's compliments to her!... 😳

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 13 years ago

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

@ Purvi - Ab toh tujhe yeh Shaan milne se raha! For this guy I am going to fight tooth & nail with u! 😆 Waise bhi tujhe line mein aana chahiye, madam I told u about him & now u want to simply kidnap him from me, no way, not a chance!! 😃 Peechhe aake khadi ho ja! 😆 And yes I keep wondering is there any like him out in this world? I guess not! Very few will overlook her previous marriage & will go forward like this guy pursuing her to the end of the world. I am talking about Indian men! Maybe there is but must be a limited few!!

Aditee even I wanna know Shaan's POV about this whole thing for a long time now. How did he feel after he left her apartment choosing work over her knowing she was sulking? What did he feel about her in the rec room when she was suffering from cold & how she welcomed him when he made the move on her? In general how does he feel when he sees she enjoys his attention, touches & company? What did he feel when she called him up & on pretence of the file asked if she could see him? What did he feel when he was watching her controlling her saree & hair on the beach? Later in her apartment near the window when she told him she is scared about them? All the minute possible details, I want to know everything about & from him. No surprises there! 😃

Oh Purvi I am sure Shaan wouldn't go to the shopping with his mom & Khanak. He would purposely give the two sometime to know & understand each other instead of hovering over them. He knows this is an important relationship which needs work. At Least I think so if I understand this Shaan but Aditee will obviously clarify. But he will call later to casually check if everything is ok though he won't ask anything directly about the shopping spree. And Khanak too wouldn't give him any details but maybe inadvertently will throw in a line or two & then change the subject again. Most probably whatever Shaan will hear he will do so from his mom.

Lets see what Aditee have in mind.

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purvimeh

@purvimeh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

[QUOTE=lghosh]@ Purvi - Ab toh tujhe yeh Shaan milne se raha! For this guy I am going to fight tooth & nail with u! 😆 Waise bhi tujhe line mein aana chahiye, madam I told u about him & now u want to simply kidnap him from me, no way, not a chance!! 😃 Peechhe aake khadi ho ja! 😆 And yes I keep wondering is there any like him out in this world? I guess not! Very few will overlook her previous marriage & will go forward like this guy pursuing her to the end of the world. I am talking about Indian men! Maybe there is but must be a limited few!!

Lana...🤗.. Seriously.. Thank you girl.. for That... ! But that does not mean i will let u have this Shaan..I will find ways Lana... He is a Keeper... ! U do want to take it outside.. Don't you ? Am all set.. lets Go ! 😆 😆.. Line wahin se shuru hoti ...hai jahan hum khade hote Hain... Lana !😛 So go try ur luck...now..!

True Lana... must be like 1 in thousands i guess... .. Arranged to phir bhi ho jata hai... but to to pursue her a rare combination...

Aditeee I Bingo & second Lana... Hope u can put up at some time ... In fact I even want to add...how he feels when she does not even bother calling him back for days... or so? These are minute details from his POV..Oh ! Will be worried thinking what if she does another engagement fiasco kinda thing? knowing she is in turmoil?

Lets see what Aditee have in mind

Lana... even i am pretty confident that he wld not have gone... & Wld let them work on it ...But then again...for Khank...He wld do it .. if required...

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601153

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: purvimeh

Oye ...

Tum jaise shadi-shuda log iss Shaan ko lekar jane ki baatein karenge tho hum jaise Singles ka kya hoga 😭

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 13 years ago

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

OMG ...

I am dreamy ...I am wobbly ... imagining KT saying those lines huskily ... DAMN ... I should stop blushing in office ...

GOD ... Attention to Detail .. I am wondering how Khanak reacted to THAT !

Aditeee ... Like I said previously ... Addiction to CASA !!!! Good One Gurl

Thanks for Everything !!!!

PS: I have to read 56 yet ... Missed that one ... Will read soon

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Shanaksansar

@Shanaksansar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Sigh...you have me drooling again...kaash aisa koi Shaan sach much mein hota...

This weekend has been a real treat reading all your updates...hats off to you for doing that for all of us.

Finally we got to hear Shaan's side as well...his thoughts are of course all mushy none of the fears that Khanak has...truly romantic. She had imagined him answering something else but his revelation am sure shook her whole being. Without being explicit he in his own way told her how much she means to him.

Pure bliss...awesome and eagerly waiting to read more.

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

OMG!!! The list that shan gives to her , I dnt knw abt khanak. but I have melted 😆

wo kaam bhi karta hai ya sifr khanak ko hi dekhta hai 😆

and why didnt u give khanak's reaction after this ? reader ko torture karna achchi baat nahi hai😛 but I knw ,no matter wat micro detailing u give us , it wll fall short in frnt the ocean size quench we have for ur ff.

Loved it !!

thanks !

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Ujjwala

@Ujjwala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Hey Aditi,

Was busy over the weekend .. so read 56 and 57 together...
I should say, by the time i finished reading 57A, I was dead...😊 believe me ...

I took almost half an hour to gather myself and here I am thanking you for the wonderful update...
I have already told you that I am a big fan of your writing... Story telling is a beautiful art, you should know where to tell what, how to keep the readers gripped ... and I should tell you, you are blessed with that... what an amazing piece of writing...
Your setting your bar high with every update...
I really feel you should start full-time writing, I mean as a professional... I promise you I shall buy all your books 😃
For starters, you can begin with articles for magazines ... later you can write a full fledged novel 😃 ... Just a thought of your humble fan ...

All the lines in blue were so warming and endearing... I am so glad you wrote about their interaction after the dinner.. ... The moment she told it is your turn, I was so damn sure that something superb was coming... But when I saw 57 Marriage preview, i was kinda let down.. but deep down I was very sure that you wud bring it up somewhere in the future track and amuse us... But as I started reading 57A, there were no bounds for my happiness ... but I was spellbound fro sure ...You really made my day .. may be even week..😊 that doesn mean you can delay the next update 😉

Pls update soon... it's my humble request 😊

Cheers,
Ujjwala

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