words are sharper than swords... silence??? - Page 4

Originally posted by: chalhov

Devika Radha Tazzi Radhika lovely thoughts When Would Dev be like this?????

SILENT LOVE

Author: Reden Magpantay Jobli

Have you ever been silently in love
With someone you can never have?
So close you can touch her hand
Yet, so far to feel her heart?

Have you ever lived in pretense
Quietly loving without any condition?
A feeling of love that's unknown
Hiding it, not knowing for how long.

Have you ever fallen deeply
Loving the person unconditionally?
So afraid to say what you feel
Acting normal, keeping things still.

Have you ever been hurt unintentionally
But put on a smile, pretended to be happy?
Deep inside you're in pain and suffering
But outside you're jolly and laughing.

Why does holding her hand feel so right?
Your heart smiles everytime she's at sight
Hearing her sweet voice makes your day
Hope you can hug her in a special way.

but now it is

Silent Tears

by Heather Loughton

A thunderous silence breaks through my thoughts. What was once many great ideas is now a triumph, lost. Baffling words tumble through my mind. Reflections of darkness hover. A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me, and inside myself, I take cover. What would it be like to stay there forever? To be lost in all my cares? From the inside, looking out - I cry silent tears.

Another one by Tagore I think

The furthest distance in the world

Is not between life and death

But when I stand in front of you

Yet you don't know that

I love you

The furthest distance in the world

Is not when i stand in font of you

Yet you can't see my love

But when undoubtedly knowing the love from both

Yet cannot

Be together

The furthest distance in the world

Is not being apart while being in love

But when plainly can not resist the yearning

Yet pretending

You have never been in my heart

The furthest distance in the world

Is not

But using one's indifferent heart

To dig an uncrossable river

For the one who loves you

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Devika,very beautiful post.you have described Dev's feelings  very aptly. Felt very sad for both Dev & Radhika.Dev's inner turmoil to be with his family & the lover in him to support Radhika was portrayed very well. Though Dev said that he hates Radhika at the spur of the moment ,but his heart will never allow him to do that. She was the only one whom he could show his feelings. And Radhika's inner strenght & her Kanha will help Dev to be courageous & help him to stand by Radhika & accept her wholeheartedly as his wife in front of everyone.

Originally posted by: devina22

ya but how long will it be for dev to be remorsefull it looks like he is glad all the bad stuff that is happennig to radhika sorry guys ok he does not want any one to know what he is really feeling --but they can show his thought  process how heis struggling between radhika and the pb family

sorry dont want my male lead to look inhuman and bad at least inwardly

but every one is welcome to their own interpertation

 

Originally posted by: devina22

devika i agree with everything you say but iam so mad at the writers when they make dev look the way they are showing

dont know about others but i want my dev to be lovable huggable

like the dev of cb1( i know dont want to compare)

maybe should have called dev something else (ram)

but again it is because of radev that cb2 is back so no name changing

(wish i could post like some of you guys  do just add to somebodies original post)

 

and one more thing it is good to have diff. opnions may be the writers will

pay attention and improve the tracks

Originally posted by: ashna26

Wow Devika, you write so well. Thanks love reading it and thanks to others love reading everyone posts! 👏😊

Originally posted by: Devika.

Cb-1 Dev was an ideal charactor, who was a dream of every woman. I totlaly agree with you, and we loved it because AVi portrayed it so well.

if he portrayed as lovable and huggable , then how many will say this is just CB-1.

 

and I totally agree with you the writers need to work on their dialogues , and the eidtors need to know  the continuity between scenes, before cuting or joining it together.  that is the problem, and tehe final product is giving mixed message to the viewers, and then the silence is not getting its space.

 

yes, it is good to have diff opinions and that will make the story also more interesting.  I love healthy discussions...  and i am so glad you verbalized your view and I totally respect it.  The good point is, then it help me also to keep a tie on my tunnel vision, and let me pause and think for a second, and if that thinking makes sense to me, then i will surely stop by to think about it more, or else, I just walk by only...

 

if you want to post somebodies original post, just click on "quote'  right above the post, instead of post reply, and then type below your point of view, or you can edit within the quoted message.

 

wow thanks devika

watch me go bezerk with all this (may be)you are a great gal

thats true if dev becomes lovable he will be just like cb1  but pls writers show his thought process about him not wanting to be rude to rads---only to us  but then maybe not i think now peaple want to watch cb2 more to see what dev is going to say or do cb2 keep rocking

thanks again devika

Originally posted by: liveforever

WOW! Devika Di you are just Brilliant! Loove your post! 

You explained Devs emotions so very well! True that he did not many lines, but actions speak louder than words. In this case expressions speak louder than words! You portrayed what Dev was feeling exactly and for you to do so, it is based on how good the actors expression are.. And our dear Avi is veery good at expressions! But really you read them very carefully and exactly. This also shows that you are a brilliant writer ad many of us already know by reading your FF DreamGirl. 

I throughly loved this post very much! 🤗