Heya Chicaaa!
Firstly I apologize for not commenting- you know how school was like!? arghhh I am drowning in assignments! anywho back to your FF...
Oh Emmm Geee sush! You are one amazing out-of the-world- writer! My absoulate fave on IF! Seriously you dont need me to tell you how of much of an awesome writer you are BUT I am going to anywho hehe ;) I said this before and I shall say it again; Write a Book and give me a call when you do lmaaaooo!
Your story is just progressing amazingly, like always! I dont how to praise you when it comes to your writing, i fear my words wont do enough justice. Everything is just simply P.E.R.F.E.C.T! nothing less. Sushmita, hun, I just love the simplcity of your writing, it leaves a great impact in my heart and my concious. I seriously remember everything clearly even if we get update after 13633684 years lmaoo, every word is like sketched in my memory lmaoo I think that should show how much I love your FF! hehee ;)
YAY! Armaan and Ridhimma are getting married, although its hurried they seem to share a deep relationship even though they havent conversed much. I like the way they show how much they "love" eachother ( think its a tad little early to say love) with the smallest of gestures from both of them. Love the part where Armaan accidently slipped that he likes her in Sari's and she who doesn't like them for his sake wanted to get it. That's just sweet!
Everything is shown in perfect percesion. I like the way whole scenes are shown with everyone having a part to play. The story is sooo realistic and I just loved that about it- always have! Right from the beginning your writing grips me and leaves me wanting more!
I love Padma ahaha the way she teased armaan after that little moment AR had ( which by the way was sooo cute!) was hilirious! I imagined everything perfectly, Ridhimma running away, Armaan;s face, Padma and Anaya's goofy smiles- imagined everything! hehe
Also adore armaan and anaya's relationship but i have feeling that will cause a certain tension to AR's relationship in the future as in if she dies, that will cause alot of problems- i dont know, I am sure u got something planned based on this relationship thats why you focus on it but Idk i could be wrong. hope so lmaoo =/
UPDATEEE SOOON! love priyanka.
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