Momma's Ode to Shravan

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay, I composed a little poem to put into words on how Shravan makes the ladies feel. It was very quickly put together but I hope it conveys the right emotion. I will put in one of my fave looks of his so you have a mental image (but really, who can forget). Hope you enjoy. Again this is only my pov.



Swagger

He is broad and built

His shoulders and each muscle

Begging to serve as a haven for your

Face, fingers and grip

 

His smile is crooked and innocent

Both at the same time

Just like him

Drawing you into his world

Of naughty and nice

You imagine how you would like to

Relish one taste

 

His voice sends tingles

Up your spine into your depths

The sound strums the music that

Awakens a volcano in you

 

And then he looks at you

Your heart erupts

The caramel drops of honey

Are molten

They stare and sear you through

He sees you and you see yourself

Becoming weak and waiting for the moment

When he will strike the match.

 

The jet black hair, the beckoning smile, chocolate skin and

Those piercing eyes

All together, he is radiating intense heat

You feel it to the bone.

The pit of your stomach is sparking

Pure electricity

You are melting within

It will only take his velvet voice

To drip with your name once

To ignite you completely.

 

He glides towards you and

You hold your breath.

You are shivering with sensation.

Oh yes, he will kill you and you

Will welcome the slaying.

He is closer, your hairs stand on end

He approaches with the swagger

Of a lady killer.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu,you said it perfectly.lovely lines!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ‘
and you have one good collections of shravan's pics.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy anu aunty!!!!!
I just read your poem on how "Shravan makes the ladies feel"πŸ˜†
The picture went very well with the lines.πŸ‘
it's a very true poem for the "ladies"πŸ˜‰
great job!πŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by shilparoxx - 13 years ago
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Edited.Edited by momma1128 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: momma1128

Uh oh, I tried to edit something from my phone and I think it messed up the format. Will adjust when I am in front of a lappy. Teaches me, never edit from the cell.

 
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 i couldnt control myself( you know the reason) ,sorry anu. 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ktms

 
🀣 i couldnt control myself( you know the reason) ,sorry anu. 


I was very aware of what I was writing. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: momma1128


I was very aware of what I was writing. πŸ˜‰



So all this now goes on out in the open, huh?πŸ˜†πŸ€ͺ

Anu - what a marvelous piece of writing. I could imagine myself feeling that way as if he was right here in front of me, while I was reading<< which I think was the point of it all. Brilliant work. Do come up with moreπŸ˜‰πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


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Posted: 13 years ago
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^^^
I recommend you drink some ice water. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hai! hai! hai !Yeh kya hua? Kahan se aaya ithna free flow Shravan ke baaren mein?
Anu your admiration and adoration for Shravan has come out brilliantly.
 
BTW can understand what your edited post was all aboutπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maris - thanks so much...but just look at him...the free flow overflows!

Oh my post was edited because I fixed the format which got ruined...just so you are aware, editing from your cell poses many hazards. πŸ˜‰