Hey guys I'm thinking of writing a fan fiction on Our dakshna story. Someone has already done this (sorry) but this is my version. What you think? (Sorry excuse my lame hindi speaking. I'll start writing mix LOL)
DAKSHNA Part 1:
After the accident in Karjat, Naina, Abhi and Daksh all reach home where Ayi is ecstatic to meet Abhi.
Ayi: Abhi? What are you doing here? Mumbai kab aiyah?
Abhi: Of ho ayi, I just came and I'm so hungry. Feed me food from your
finest hands?
Ayi: Lo yeh larka bi na. Acha tikeh liken mujhe bathana, kab aiyah?
Abhi: When I came across a girl.
Ayi: Kyah?
Abhi: *Looks at Naina*
Daksh: *Sees Abhi looking at Naina but before he can react, he gets engrossed
in Naina's thoughts*
Abhi: Nothing aai. Thing is I met Daksh and Naina in Karjat and so they
decided to drop me to mumbai as well.
Ayi: Daksh aur naina together in karjat? *turns to daksh* Chintu, you
never answered my question. What were you doing in karjat?
Daksh: *still thinking about naina*
Naina: *clicks her fingers at Daksh* Daksh?
Daksh: *looks at naina* HM? did you say anything?
Naina: Not me, ayi. She was asking you what were you doing in Karjat?
Daksh: Yeh kya hai? Police case? I was in karjat for a case. Thats all.
Abhi: That's all? But Chintz tell me one thing, what was thsi case
about?
Daksh: Case? Kaise case? *looks lost*
Abhi: Areh. You just said you were there for some case?
Daksh: ha ha I did say that. *his eyes accidently looks at naina* Erm
erm. That case?
Abhi: Yeh. Woh case. What happened?
Daksh: Erm. Same story. Larka biwi ko divorce chata hai. Aur kya?
Abhi: HMM. Acha. Tik heh. I'll accept this white lie.
Daksh: hm? Did you say anything?
Abhi: no no. I was just thinking naina must be feeling hungry na?
Daksh: ha...*turns to naina* naina, come lets eat.
Naina: *looks confused at the two cousins* *she thinks: Whats happening
between yeh bhais? What ever it is, i'lll think later. I'm so hungry.*
DAKSHNA PART 2:
Everyone is sitting down eating on the table. Daksh and Naina sit opposite each other and Abhi is sitting next to Daksh. Aai is sitting by Naina aur baba is sitting at the front head side. Rohini and Sanket aren't there (because I don't like their characters for now :LL)
Abhi: Aai, this food is awesome! Kya bath heh? Offth.
Naina: Hah...Aai ki khana bohat acha heh.
Aai: tum duno bi na. *shy*
Baba: *smiles* (I swear when this guy is just in the scene not doing
much, he smiles a lot? LOL)
Abhi: What you say daksh? I'm right aren't I?
Daksh: Yes yes. Mera aai cooks the most amazing food ever!
Abhi: Areh, she's my aai as well.
Daksh: whatever you say, but she's my aai. I'm her most darling son!
Abhi: No no. Areh chintz yarr, im her laadla.
Daksh: No me.
Abhi: No me!
Aai: no one is. Except naina. She's my laadli. Tum duno pagol ho. Naina
mera laadli.
Naina: *smiles*
Abhi: That's not fair aai. Me and daksh are your relatives and your
giving your love to naina? Not fair aai.
Aai: Dhur pagol. So what if naina isn't my daughter, niece or bahu. I'll
still love her.
Naina: *looks at Daksh when aai says bahu*
Daksh: *looks at Naina when aai says bahu*
Naina: aai. Aap bi na. *smiles*
Daksh: *thinks about all the moments he spent with naina as her fake
husband*
Naina: *glances at Daksh*
Abhi: *notices them* Tell me one thing Aai, if naina was married what
would happen?
Aai: What will happen? The husband she has will be happy of having such
a darling wife and her sasurals? Proud of her.
Daksh and naina are still staring at each other. *tere naina naina tere song comes up*
Abhi: Then in that case, why don't you make her your bahu?
Daksh: *coughs*
Naina: Areh daksh. Have water. *gives him water*
Daksh: *takes water of naina* *gets angry* (or is he pretending? ;) )
ABHI! What do you think of yourself. I told you I don't want to get married. So
that's it.
Aai: Areh. Chintu. He just said it like that. Finish your food atleast.
Daksh: No aai. I'm not hungry. *goes off*
Abhi: What did I say wrong? I wasn't saying daksh should marry naina. I
just said it like that
Naina: Yeh KP bi na. So silly.
Aai: *pulls abhis ear* I told you before. You need to stop pranking or
or you cannot eat my food.
Abhi: *Shocked* oh no. Aai. Sorry. But what can I do, this chintz has to
get married one day whoever she is *looks at naina*
Naina: Ermm aai. I'll send food up to daksh. He'll be hungry won't he?
Aai: hah...thank you naina.
Naina: It's okay.
Naina leaves and Abhi. Baba and aai are in the table.
Aai: I like naina a lot. I wish she was my bahu
Baba: Hah...naina acha larki heh..
Abhi: Of course. Let's do one thing daksh aur naina ki shaadhi. *laughs*
Baba: Abhi, if you want there to be a storm then its okay, otherwise...
*smiles* daksh wont agree nor would naina.
Abhi: I was kidding baba. For chintz we need to find a serious, boring
type girl for him. Naina is not his cup of tea.
Aai: Pagol. *thinking*
What's going to happen between daksh and naina ? aur does aai too want daksh to marry naina aur sirf naina? Read on. J
DAKSHNA PART 3:
Whilst Baba, aai and Abhi are downstairs, Daksh is in his room thinking about someone. (ofcourse it has to be naina! ;) ) Naina comes into the room with khana for hamara KP saab :P
Naina: *thinking - What does this
boy think of himself? Left the table from a tantrum? And now he's looking at
thin air without a care in the world.*
Daksh: *Thinking ' Naina is completely mad. And now she has made me mad
from thinking about her*
Naina: *knocks on the door*
Daksh: *still thinking*
Naina: *Comes in and sits on the bed, daksh still hasn't noticed her*
Daksh: *thinking about naina*
Naina: *clears her throat* Daksh...Daksh?
Daksh: Kya hai? Don't you see I'm thinking? *still not realising its
naina*
Naina: thinking? Thinking about what?
Daksh: Tum...
Naina: Kya?
Daksh: *realises what he said* Ermmm... no not you. Ermm. *looks at the
plate* voh khana. I was thinking about food.
Naina: Acha?
Daksh: Hmmm... I'm hungry so I'm thinking about food right?
Naina: KP sometimes you are going to eat my head. *goes out of the room*
Daksh: *smiles*
It's now night time and Daksh and Abhi are in Daksh's room. Everyone else is asleep in their rooms.
Abhi: When did you meet Naina?
Daksh: And why do you wanna know?
Abhi: Aisi, just like that. Tell me yaar.
Daksh: Train mer.
Abhi: Train? Kaise train?
Daksh: Voh Train *smiles*
Abhi: OHHH Voh Train *signals his finger in a direction*
Daksh: Hah...
Abhi: I knew it was that train... But tell me what happened on that train?
Daksh: *still in nainas thoughts* A lot.happened/
Abhi:hahhh... I know that as well...but elaborate on that chintz.
Daksh: *gets out of the thinkign* Kyu? Mind your business.
Abhi: Areh. I was only saying it like that. Naina acha larki heh...
Daksh: I know... She's a very nice girl.
Abhi: Anyways forget about Naina...Lets play a game.
Daksh: Is this the time to play games?
Abhi: Chal nah daksh...please?
Daksh: Kaiseh game?
Abhi: You have to say the first thing that comes to your mind when I say something okay?
Daksh: Acha...
Abhi: *thinks* Aai
Daksh: The best aai in the world :)
Abhi: Khana *laughs*
Daksh: Tum... *smiles*
Abhi: Obviously! acha errm... Annoying.
Daksh: Rohini :L
Abhi: *laughs* beauty.
Daksh: *in thoughts* Naina.
Abhi: *smiles* Brains.
Daksh: Naina..
Abhi: Pyaar.
Daksh: Naina... *realises what he just said* NOOO! I mean... Tum. I love you. :) Where did naina come from? Abhi are you playing mind games? *embarrased*
Abhi: HMMM... Now I understand...
What does Abhi understand? What's going to happen next? Read on :)
DAKSHNA PART 4:
Daksh: Ermm...Kya? kya samjah?
Abhi: Naina has brainwashed you! I knew that girl was a witch.
Daksh: Kya? Witch?
Abhi: Obviously aur kya? That's why you keep saying her name... Am I right?
Daksh: *confused* erm... hah... you're right! Naina is a witch..
Abhi: I told you! Abhi is NEVER wrong :) You know what they say about witches
Daksh: Kya?
Abhi: Ugly on the inside and ugly on the outside... So sad...Girls like Naina are proper witches yaar. look how she brainwashed you so sad.
Daksh: Haah...?
Abhi: I know right? Naina is too clever yaar. We have to get rid of this witch...
Daksh: KYA!? *shocked*
Abhi: *tries to contain his laughter* I am telling the truth...The sooner this witch is gone, the sooner I can get my boring, annoying, no fun daksh.
Daksh: *looks at abhi* ABHI!
Abhi: I'm joking yaar.
Daksh: You better me...I don't want to hear anything bad about Naina..
Abhi: Areh Kyui?
Daksh: Voh...Voh...She's a witch na? That's why, she'll...brainwash you! *thinks about the time Naina told him she'll brainwash him* Like she brainwashed me *smiles* Anyways Sojha...Goodnight
Abhi: Dal mein kuch khala heh... *looks at Daksh sleeping* Anyways, Good night mera chintu... Sweet dreams..
The next morning Daksh has woken up quite early, he looks at Abhi sleeping and snoring and just sighs and smiles at his silly cousin. He gets out of the room and is minding his own business when he bumps into naina who has also come out of her room (BTW HAVE YOU GUYS NOTICED THEIR ROOM ARE NEXT TO EACH OTHER AND IN THE CORNER? LOL ;))
Naina: Daksh? You woke up quite early...
Daksh: Hah...Voh my sleep went so I thought might as well get up and tum?
Naina: Same problem as yours *smiles* Aur i thought I'll get to office early
Daksh: Kyui?
Naina: Voh Abhi-neh insisted...
Daksh: Wha?
Naina: He wanted to take me out somewhere...No idea where. Tumhare cousin is VERY stubborn... Just like you..
Daksh: *upset* Abhi...Okay.. I'm going..
Naina: Daksh?
Daksh: *slightly annoyed* kya?
Naina: Are you okay?
Daksh: Yes...I'm good. Why?
Naina: Nothing.. Are you seriously going to Office this early?
Daksh: *looks at time - 7:00* Oh god..It's too early..
Naina: *laughs* do me a favour?
Daksh: Kya?
Naina: Have breakfast with me ? *smiles*
Daksh: *smiles* why not?
So what do you think will happen next? Sorry its so short :S
DAKSHNA Part 5:
After breakfast everyone is doing their own stuff. Abhi has gone out and Daksh aur Naina are getting ready to go to their own office.
Naina: Daksh?
Daksh: HM?
Naina: Voh mera meeting heh...I was wondering if you could drop me off?
Daksh: Why not? I was just going to ask you the same thing..
Naina: Are you sure? If you're too busy -
Daksh: - Nai...I'm not busy.
Naina: *smiles* acha chalo?
Daksh: Hah...
Both get into Daksh's car and is on the road whilst Naina's phone rings...
Naina: Kya? Acha tikeh... No matter...*sighs*
Daksh: What's wrong?
Naina: Meeting has cancelled. Looks like you don't need to drop me off.
*Daksh's phone starts ringing*
Daksh: Hello? Kya? Simran hasn't come? But why? Acha. Tum log cam koro. I'm coming.
Naina: Kya bath heh daksh?
Daksh: Voh simran nehi aya. Now what do I do? Everything has gone wrong. I got loads of work to do aur this simran bi nah...
Naina: *thinks* daksh? Why don't I come to your office and help you?
Daksh: No naina...No need. You've already got your own work to do..
Naina: Daksh, I insist. Now look, my meeting has been cancelled and I don't have any other big jobs to do and you need me.
Daksh: Likin..Naina...
Naina: No ifs and buts. Daksh let's go to your office. Don't worry I'll call Akruti and tell her the situation.
Daksh: Thank You Naina.
Naina: Ofcourse, I'm your friend. Friend are supposed to help others.
Daksh. *to himself* Friends. *smiles*
Daksh and Naina reach his office and their the receptionist (what was her name? I'll just call her receptionist? unless you reply with her name please? lOL) Anyways. The receptionist is shocked to see Naina back and that too with KP saab! When Daksh has gone into his office, Naina is in the main room talking to Chotu (the guy who serves tea LMAO) and the receptionist.
Chotu: Areh Naina-ji aap yaha?
Naina: Voh Daksh...Nehi. Sir ... needed some help. Voh, simran isn't here, that's why.
Receptionist: Acha? How did you know simran wasn't here?
Naina: Sir told me. I mean...Simran is my family friend...she isn't here and so I have to come and help right?
Chotu: Naina-ji you are exactly right! We have missed you.
Naina: Me too! Aur apka darjeeling wala chay. Can I get one?
Chotu: Bil kul - Now you're here we'll have so much to talk about! Darjeeling topics *Daksh cuts him off*
Daksh: CHOTU!
Chotu: Sorry saab. *guilty look* Voh...I'll go...
Naina: *confused look at Daksh*
Daksh: Ek minute Chotu...Voh...I was saying...that..get me tea? Darjeeling wala..
Naina: *looks at Daksh*
Daksh: *looks at Naina*
Receptionist: *looks at Daksh looking at Naina*
Chotu: *coughs* Ach...I'll get it..
Daksh: Ek minute...
Chotu: Aur kuch??
Daksh: Hah...ermm... you had to go home right?
Chotu: hah... mera biwi is ill...
Daksh: Hah... you go home...
Chotu: Likin chay?
Daksh: Voh I'll make it...
Everyone is shocked. DAKSH PATWARDAN IS MAKING CHAY?!
What's going to happen next? EXCITED? ;)
DAKSHNA PART 6.
Whats this? Two updates at once? I'm excited! Anyways. KP IS MAKING TEA. CONTINUING ON. BTW I don't know if Daksh makes his own tea in the serial but to make it more spicy let's just pretend he doesn't ;)
Naina: Daksh? Tum aur chay?
Daksh: You wanted tea right?
Naina: yeh but tum?
Daksh: Tum?
Naina: Sorry, aap aur chay?
Daksh: So what? You wanted tea. And Chotu's gone. So I'll make it.
Naina: Likin chay? Do you even know how to make it?
Daksh: How hard can it be? Come let's go to the kitchen...
Naina: Acha...*follows him*
In the Kitchen...daksh is boiling water in the stove and Naina is getting the cups ready.
Naina: You're putting too much water in.
Daksh: *Daksh looks in the pot* *thinks: oh crap* Erm... no matter. We'll make tea for everyone else.
Naina: *laughs*
Daksh: What's so funny?
Naina: What has happened to you? You, tea and others?
Daksh: Toh?
Naina: I like this new Daksh. *smiles*
Daksh: Really? But I don't like this Naina...
Naina: *shocked* Kya?
Daksh: Because your hand is near the cooker! What if you get hurt?
Naina: Sorry Chintu
Daksh: Chintu?
Naina: Or shall I say Chintz?
Daksh: Naina? Or shall I say Nainu...
Naina: Nainu? What name is that?
Daksh: Tumhare pet name. Nainu-ji.
Naina: *gasp* Chintu-ji!
Daksh: Nainu.
naina: Chintu!
Daksh: NAINU!
Naina: CHINTU!
Just then the water boils and some of the water falls onto Daksh's hand.
Naina: DAKSH! Omg. Are you okay?
Daksh: yeh i'm good. Don't worry it was only a bit of water.
Naina: But your hand has burnt...
Daksh: So what?
Naina: Shut up. And sit on that seat.
Daksh: But...
Naina: I told you... shut up...
Daksh sits down and Naina applies medicine on his hand...Like always their theme song comes up and they stare mindlessly into each others eyes. After the tea has been made and Daksh has put cream on his hand, they go into the main room..
Daksh: *to the receptionist* Tumhare chay...
Receptionist: *shocked* Mera Chay? But I never asked for any...
Daksh: So what? I made it so I made it... Now have it...
Receptionist: *to herself*did you mix poison in this kp? *takes a sip*
Daksh: Did you say anything?
Receptionist: no no... I was just saying this tea is good! Really good!
Naina: Ofcourse it is...Daksh made it so obviously it will be...Sorry i mean Sir..
Daksh: No worries. You call me Daksh.. *smiles and goes off to his room*
Naina: Tikeh..
Receptionist: What happened to our Kp saab? He's changed into Sweet Patwardhan.. Voh Meeta Patwardhan... How did KP change to MP?
Naina: *laughs* I don't know...But I like it...
AND SORRY IT ENDS HERE. WHAT YOU THINK? ;)
Dakshna Part 7!
(I'm way to excited to stop writing for today. so here it is the third update today. part 7!)
Naina is in the PA's chair in Daksh's cabin. Both are doing their own work and Naina is touching her stomach
Daksh: What's wrong Naina? Are you alright? Are you ill?
Naina: Nehi Daksh... I'm fine. It's 2o'clock right? I'm feeling hungry
Daksh: Acha? Hah... it's 2oclock. acha tum kao...
Naina: Aren't you going to eat?
Daksh: Abhi?
Naina: hah... chal we'll all eat together. Aai made extra food today so thought why not..
Daksh: Tik heh...I'm hungry too mein aur tum saath saath khana kay...
Naina: Just us two?
Daksh: Problem?
Naina: Nehi Daksh what problem can there be? But What if people thinks that somethings going on between us two?
Daksh: Meaning?
Naina: tumhare secretary aur receptionist? what if they think between us there is a relationship? thats why we're eating together?
Daksh: *thinks* so what? I'm having lunch with my PA so what will happen?
Naina: liken daksh...*mischevious smile* do you have lunch with simran?
Daksh: No..
Naina: then thats it! you dont have lunch with her but me? it wont take long for them to put 1 and 1 together
Daksh: so what? we'll have lunch with them too.
naina: Kya?
Daksh: aur kya?
Naina: Daksh you have really changed! Where has my KP gone? *laughs*
Daksh: Tumhara KP?
Naina: Hah...Mera KP. Shall I bring up that achrekar situation again? *laughs*
Daksh: *laughs* seriously, you're crazy.
naina: And you are. But what a sweet husband you are.
Daksh: Naina?
naina: Hm?
Daksh: I think you meant to say what a sweet husband I will be. Not I am...*laughs*
Naina: *embarrased* That's what I said...
Daksh: Whatever..
Everyone is in the main room having lunch, by now Chotu has come back and is eating lunch as well. (R = receptionist/T= typer/ C= chotu are whispering to each other)
Receptionist: *to the typer person* What's going on here?
T: what do you mean R?
R: How has KP changed so much? and that too with Naina here?
C: Madam I think Naina's magic has fallen on him.
T: meaning...Sir is..
R: in love with Naina?
T: *loud* Naina aur sir?
Daksh: Kya?
T: Nothing Nothing.
D: Something must have happened. Why are you sweating so much? aur why did you call us?
R: nothing sir...The food is quite chilly isn't it thats whythis girl is sweating and nam? What name?
N: Daksh...Leave it. Pass me that curry?
D: Tik eh.. Loh I'll serve you *He himself serves curry to naina*
EVERYONE ELSE IS SMILING AT THIS.
N: that's it daksh. how much are you giving me?
D: Sorry...I wasn't thinking..
N: This is your favourite dish as well and you gave me most of it? Not fair.
D: so what? If you eat or I eat - same sitauation right?
N: *smiles right*
Daksh tries to eat but jumps because of his burnt hand (remember? ;) ahaha )
N: What happened?
D: My hand.
N: Oh no. How will you eat now?
D: No matter. I'll finish off.
N: Shut up Daksh. Aai always says never leave the table without finishing.. Don't worry I'll feed you.
D: But Naina..
N: Shut up Karela. You talk to much.
R: *laughs*
D: *gives her a look*
R: *stops laughing*
N: *takes food from her own plate and feeds Daksh*
Everyone else just awwws (obv in their mind or Karela is gonna get angry haha!) Foods over and everyone else is back to their own workplaces. Dakshna are in their cabin ;)
Daksh: Naina what meetings do I have tomorrow?
Naina: Let me check...Daksh, you have no meetings tomorrow.
Daksh: Really? acha tikeh..
Naina: Daksh? Abhi told me about this funfair tomorrow I was thinking of taking everyone with me. What fun we'll have! Everyone will feel happy right?
Daksh: Abhi told you?
Naina: forget that...i was thinking... Why don't you come?
Daksh: Main? Aur funfair? I don't do fairs.
Naina: So you don't do fun? *laughs*
daksh: *rolls his eyes*
Naina: Please Daksh. Look Abhi will do some mischief I'm sure. I'll need you to keep everyone sane! Otherwise this Abhi will make everyone mental. *laughs* But if you don't want to go...then fine...
Daksh: No. I'll go.
Naina: *Big grin and runs towards Daksh* thank you thank you thank you so much! *in her excitement she holds Daksh's hand* *tere Naina song comes up :P*
Daksh: *laughs* Let go off my hand at least?
Naina: No. I won't.
Daksh: Kya?
Naina: Are you scared of me?
Daksh: Nehi. I'm not scared of you. Hold my hand as long as you like. I have no objection.
Naina: Then listen. I'll only let go off your hand if you promise to come on the rides.
Daksh: And If I don't?
Naina: Then i'll hold onto your hand for the rest of your life *holds tighter*
Daksh: Ouch! *because she held tight on his burn*
Naina: Omg. So sorry *she blows softly on his hand*
Daksh: *smiles and looks at her*
naina: See this is your fault.
Daksh: How is it mine? You were the one holding my hand.
Naina: So? You have to come on the rides.
Daksh: No. In fact. *holds nainas other hand* I'm holding you hand now and I'll only let go if you promise to come on the rides with me.
Naina: And if I don't?
Daksh: Then simple, I'll hold onto your hand every second of my life.I won't let go.
Naina: Chintu.
Daksh: Nainu *mischevious smile*
Naina: Tik heh...I'll come if you come?
Daksh: Promise?
Naina: Promise.
Both let go of each others hand laughing. After work they go home and find Abhi in the front room alone.
Naina: Areh Abhi, what are you doing here?
Abhi: Everything is ruined.
Daksh: What happened?
Abhi: What had to happen. *sighs*
Naina: Kya?
Abhi: Zindagi is ruined. Finished. Ended.
Daksh: Kya kya? *shocked*
Naina: *shocked* Is everyone alright? Tell us Abhi!
Abhi: No. Nothing is alright. Before anything could happen, it all went wrong. WHY? WHYY!!!?
Daksh: But what happened?
Abhi: Areh chintz...voh...voh..
Daksh: Kya? Kya?
Abhi: Arjun aur Arohi ki prem kahani!
Daksh & Naina together: KYA?
Abhi: So sad.
Daksh: You mean...you're upset over some serial?
Naina: *laughs*
Abhi: Not just any serial! It's a lovestory. Kya lovestory. Vah! Kitani Mohabbat hai.
Naina: *confused* what happened?
Abhi: Arjun aur arohi. Two different people. Get married out of hatred. And now when they are falling in love they are seperated! WHY!?
Daksh: *laughs*
Abhi: Areh chintz. why are you laughing?
Daksh: you were sitting here...watching one of Aai's favourite serials?
Abhi: So? You two were out together. I was bored.
Naina: Abhi, its only a serial. They'll be together at the end. Love always wins.
Abhi: *fake cries* promise me both of you. I'll stop breathing but promise you. When you both fall in love please acknowledge it before everything ends.
Daksh aur naina together: Kya?
Abhi: No no. Not you too. I mean, both of you both with your significant others. That's what I meant.
Naina: Ohhh.. I promise.
Abhi: Thank you. Chintu?
Daksh: Kya? What rubbish.
Abhi: Chintu. Chintu. Chintu. Promise me yaar. if you fall in love tell me.
Daksh: I'm not falling in love with anyone so shut up.
Naina: That's not fair daksh. Look how sad abhi is. Promise him *winks at Daksh* Liken...What if our weddings have already taken place?
Abhi: Kya?
Daksh:hah...my wedding has happened *winks at naina*
AND END. AHAHA. Excited for more? MUAHAHHAHAHAHAH.
DAKSHNA Part 8 - (Sorry it took so long. Had school plus the royal wedding in England. Anyone watched it? Kate, the bride look amazing in her white dress. :) ) OOH btw. Rohini is not pregnant n this part, just to clarify.
Naina: hah...Abhi. Daksh is already married. Did't you know?
Abhi: That's not fair daksh. You never told me. Whose the bride. *seriously confused*
Naina: Why would he tell you? I was there at the wedding. Vah the bride looked beautiful!
Daksh: Hah...Mera dulhaan is very nice. That's why idont want to get married, i mean i keep rejecting proposals. The thing is I havent told aai and baba about my wedding yet. *sincere look*
Abhi: KYA? Chintu you lied?
Daksh: Hah...What too do though I love my wife so much.
Abhi: But who is she?
Naina: Areh voh.
Daksh: Hah...Voh..
Abhi: Kya voh voh, who is she?
Daksh: Kareena Kapoor. *laughs*
Naina: *laughs*
Abhi: *looks cross at the joke then laughs* kya bath heh chintz. Youve started lying and joking around? Kya bath heh...
Daksh: That's because the biggest idiot is in front of me, so I have to put up a show right?
Abhi: Biggest idiiot? You mean Naina right?
Naina: abhi!
Daksh: Naina aur idiot? Never.
Abhi: You seem confident of that bro.
Daksh: Areh, shut up.
The day ends and its now morning. Everyone is getting ready to go to the funfair. Naina comes into Daksh's room.
Naina: yuckk...daksh is that what you are wearing?
Daksh: *wearing a pale yellow shirt* yeahh, why?
Naina: It's so ugly. it doesn't suit you at all..
Daksh: Kya?
Naina: Look I'll find something for you to wear..*looks through his wardrobe*
Daksh: *just stands there admiring naina*
Naina: *finds a white t-shirt and black jeans* why don't you wear this?
Daksh:This? No its okay
Naina: But daksh, you'll look so cute. Please for me? *hands togeher*
Daksh: *thinks* tikeh. But only for you.
Naina: Thank you so much daksh!
Back in the living room, Daksh comes out and everyone is getting ready to go
Rohini: Areh, daksh...you're wearing these cloths?
Daksh: voh weni (what do they say in marathi for sister in law?) naina insisted.
Rohini: Hmmm...acha heh..
Aai: areh, mera chintu is looking cute today..
Baba: *smiles*
Daksh: *shys*
Abhi: Naina? Naina insisted? all this time ive been insisting to you to stop wearing ugly clothes, today just for naina?
Daksh: Are you done with your bakwas? shall we go?
Abhi: Where am I stopping you? Lets go.
Daksh: Come.
In the car park thingy...
Daksh: Naina, you come with me, aai and baba you also come. Weni aur dada aap log abhi ki gari jao.
Abhi: I don't mind. But, on one condition.
Daksh: Kya?
Abhi: Let's have a car race.
Naina: *laughs* kya? Car race?
Aai: Areh baba...are you mad?
Abhi: No aai, im not mad...We have to race. And I will win.
Naina: Never. Daksh wil win.
Abhi: Want to bet?
Naina: Betted. *puts hands onto abhis hand*
Daksh: Tikeh. Me, Naina, aai aur baba on one team. You, sanket dada and weni on the other. The one who lose has too...has to...
Abhi: Become Kaka's pet for one day.
*Everyone laughs*
Daksh: Kya?
Naina: Don't worry daksh. We will win for sure.
Daksh: if you say so naina. Chalo. Let's race!
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