aehem a total mama boy - LOL

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Posted: 14 years ago
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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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Short story oneshot-

Kinjal and jigar was having an talk about aehem as how much a mamma boy he is. 'Mom do this, do that, get me this, make this' both smirked and laughed out loud. Jigar spoke: kinjal he so furious, so much tone, anger, ego, not enjoyable, kaki has spoilt him totally, look at him total idiot.
They didn't know everyone was listening to their talks while sitting on their conversation. Aehem had his ears wide opened listened and ignored them. He was smilling from inside but never wanted to break his pride.
They again spoke: look how he is eating, utter stupid, how dare he calls my bhabhi an unpar jahil, idiot, unpar to vo hai, sanskar bhool gya kinjal spoke. She laughed in between. Aehem got up quietly and sttod behind them and they never noticed. Jigar began and spoke: bewaqoof hai na, ma da laadla bekhar giya. Both giggled totally. Kinjal: ma da laadla, hmm ur right, but wait, why is he like that, stupid duffor he is, loi pirrirni aha, she smriked. Aehem who was behind them boiling, held kinjals ear and twisted it really hard that she couldn't forget the pain, what did you say, maa da laadla, acha, am spoilt, your more that me,
Aehem then burst out laughing, and spoke keep going on, I like it, 1st time you made me laugh, for sure. He goes up and went to sleep.

Well it was a dare which I had to write, so I wrote it lol, dnt take it serious
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's funny, i like it, you had me giggling with the saathiya cursing dialogue.

How come you didn't use the Chinese whispers thread for it, it's short enough?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Want people to comment on it aha, lol ill copy it and paste it there, I know its short, couldn't think of more idea so I shortened it nafisa.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ayesha, that's okay it's short, i kind of went overboard in length wise with mine, you didn't see Shoaib asked if it was a fan fic (by the length i'm thinking), I had to say sorry but it's only a short story one shot for the chinese whispers...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lol from now one me and you will post our short os in here promise, I dare u how did koki made him in this halat, too much fusty, anger, tone, ego, but the end he should turn into a macho man, go give it a try and post it here.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'm too tired now to write a nice story, i will do it tomorrow, what is there to do, it's saturday nah, will play fan fic writers tomorrow, at least i was entertained, though i did half the work myself.

lets go to the chat thread now...to use up some posts....lol.

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