FF-Love is blind(kehte hai na pyar andha hota hai)

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All fanfics and oneshots  which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission 

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Part 1

He hears thunder in the background, and thinks there is a big storm coming tonight with more rain from the sounds of the wind blowing outside. He hears Gopi coming. She brings his food and places it in front of him and says "you should eat first and then take the medicine, call if you need anything", "I will come and get the dishes later" and she leaves. He thinks she must be really scared now, she is probably thinking he was going to yell at her again. She looked like she was running instead of just walking her slow walk. He decided to make an effort to be little more calmer as Nani is not going to believe there is nothing wrong in his marriage. He eats the food and takes the medicine and lays down on the bed. The medicine had started working immediately, also he was tired so he fell asleep right away, still with all the confusing thought in his head.

It all became true, there was thunder in the background, with a big storm tonight, with more rain from the sound from the wind blowing outside. The rain started to pour heavily, and started to come inside. Gopi comes in and sees he had ate and taken medicine already. She closes the window and shuts the blinds, picks up the dishes and takes it downstairs. She puts it in the sink, all in pain. She doesn't even know whats going on with her. She has started to feel dizzy, and whenever she eats she feels like vomiting. " Vomiting" she thought, something sure was going on with her.

Upstairs, he was thinking in his sleep. So to the doctor and check whats wrong with her. He thought" she better not be pregnant, as I haven't touched her once". He started to feel sleepless, bechain, and more. He sat up, and saw she was sleeping perfectly on the floor. He drinks water, and texts his doctor friend, for a appointment for Thursday at 5pm for Gopi. It was only Monday.

The sun rose up, everyone was still in the same position as they were last night. Gopi wakes up, with a heavy head, she sees everything all blurry and dizzy as before. She doesn't she doesn't care for her health. He sees her holding her head. He was right, there was something wrong with her. He got up, got ready and started to button his shirt while, she cleaned the room, and wore her sari. She came out of the washroom and started to feel dizzy again. She started to feel sick. He was looking at her from the mirror. She runs to the washroom and vomits badly. Her eyes were slightly black. She cleans the sink, and comes up. She sees him goes out. She cleans the room and goes downstairs.

There he was telling his mother about what he saw in the past couple of days, and whats going on with her. Koki was getting worried for sure. Hetal looked confused and whispered in koki ear: what if she is pregnant, but we need to get her checked, look at her eyes, its all black around her eye lid. Gopi starts to cook. Rashi, Kinjal was getting suspicious. There was something wrong with her. Raunak comes home after 2 years with his wife Damini. Raunak was Aehem younger brother just a 1 year difference. They both started to feel suspicious as well. The men leave for office while Koki and Hetal was upstairs cleaning baa room.

Kinjal, Rashi, Damini and Gopi cleaning the dining table, there Gopi faints. Gopi drops the glass and falls down. Rashi, Damini and Kinjal runs towards her, trying to wake her up and sprinkling water on her but it didn't work. Mani runs upstairs and tells Koki, Hetal, Nani and Baa about Gopi. They run down and calls the ambulance. They take her to the hospital and stood outside the ICU, while Mani and Kamla was at home.

The men return home and sees no one was at home. Mani says to them, Gopi had fainted, she has been taken to the hospital and is in a severe condition. They all leave too. Umang and Anita comes too, They were worried, Why not, they was Gopi brother and sister. They stood by Rashi all hugging tightly, as what happened to her.

The doctor comes out and says, we have to get her checked out again meaning more tests. She definitely isn't pregnant. The Doctor knew what was wrong with her, The doctor did not speak until she was assured after she had done more tests on her.

The doctor kept Gopi at hospital for 2 weeks. The reports finally comes. She double checked it. She was looking all dejected and hurt. Another patient she thought, Another patient with a terrible disease, which will make the patient not survive, and it won't even last long at all.

She closes her eyes. She thinks : 'Oh god, not another patient with brain tumor. She won't even survive at ll. One and a half month she got until she dies. Oh God protect her and make her survive.'

She calls everyone in, Rashi, Damini, Raunak, Kinjal, Jigar, Aehem, Dhawaal, Anita and Umang all stood there facing the doctor. She speaks up.:' One and a half months, 1 months she got. She has got brain tumor, After a 1 months she won't survive, she will die.They all looked at her all dejected, tears in their eyes and sad.

She speaks: you all have to keep her happy, and make sure, she doesn't go in depression at all.

They collect the report and take her home. They take her upstairs and damini sat beside her while everyone is in the main hall. Aehem told Chirag and Koki about the report.

She has brain tumor. 1 months to go until she won't survive at all. They also heard that there will be a rebirth of Gopi in a 18 old with the same face etc etc as they found out from Guruma, and guru. As we all know Aehem is only 24 right now. He has to wait 2 more years for her to come back in the rebirth of some other girl. They all were dejected. They did not even eat a single morsel. Koki, Hetal. Parag, Baa and Nani tried to find out but the men kept it a secret and did not tell them as if they did, they will not bear it at all. They all prayed 24 hours praying for her to survive, but it was all in Gods hand, as whatever happens is under his will.

They did not go to sleep for about a month until a major thing happened. After a month, there was only 2 weeks left for her survival only if she survives. She was sleeping until sever blood clots starts to come out from her mouth and ears. She was coughing badly and was taken to the hospital. They were worried if everyone come to know about her tumor. She started to fight her life. She was fighting between life and death. The doctors told the public to pray for a girl with tumor that she survives.

A few Modis were Shocked. Brain Tumor she got, Their faces dropped totally. Rashi, Kinjal went to the temple of Kali ma while Damini, Mani, Anita and Kamla went to the other temple. They found everyone praying for Gopi. They saw Singhanias with Naitak, Akshara, Varsha and Shaurya. They saw, Viren, Sidhaarth, Nivedita, and Divya at the kali ma temple. They saw the Viranis of Kyunki saas fame and more praying for the poor girls life. They went on for hours and hours, and still the Doctor never came out. What was happening.

Gopi Stops breathing and stays still. And then after 15 minutes she comes out of danger and starts to breath heavily and goes critical again. They stopped the operation for a while and started again. What was happening? The operation was again going forever. After an hour gopi was out of danger. She survives and the tumor was out finally. She can live properly again with no disease in her. Before the doctor comes out she calls the temple and the kali ma temple saying she has survived.

Thanks for praying. The doctor comes out and tells them the good news of her survival and the tumor has come out finally. They all goes and sees her inside except Aehem. He had realized her worth. He was upset. He can't see her in this state at all.

But what can he do, Love is blind. Everything is fair in love and war. He was gutted for sure, he knew she won't forgive him, he was responsible for her condition. If he hadn't treated her like dirt then she wouldn't be in this state at all. But one thing for the fact that he was shocked. Anita and Umang was her blooded sister and brother.

They had been separated since birth by Urmi. They Modi comes out seeing him in tears. He wipes them immediately and stood up. They all told him to go inside while they all will go home. They looked at him quietly and walked out the hospital.


Thats all for today, i don't know what you all thought of it, but i am so addicted to them which they made me come back to write them again.I had taken a break and now am back permanently.  Do comment.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ayesha hats of to u. wonderful ff. keep it up and please continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ayesha, you had me laughing the whole time truthfully, except when the whole brain tumor started internal bleeding coming out of orifices that was gross, but otherwise it was good, can't wait for the next part, don't keep me waiting for too long.

 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No way nafisa, u was laughing the whole time ? And what did u find gross the whole brain tumour thing ? Do u think it was large ? Will update the next part asap
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

No way nafisa, u was laughing the whole time ? And what did u find gross the whole brain tumour thing ? Do u think it was large ? Will update the next part asap


what I found gross was her having blood clots coming out of her nose and mouth, too graphic, I can't take the picture out of my mind now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you mean nose and ears?
😉 looks like u need more of these

Edited by ayesha_78 - 13 years ago
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Everyone left and went home while aehem was standing outside. His ego didn't let him go near her but for the sake of his love for her compelled him to go beside her and see what state she is in.

He slowly enters the ward and shuts the door behind. He stood there all shocked. She had a big bandage on her head, tiny one on her nose, and on her hand. She was sleeping calm. She had drips on as she had lost load of blood.

He sat beside her. It was midnight, he started to feel sleepy. He locks the ward from the inside and puts his head beside her and goes to sleep.

He wakes up 5am in the morning, He still sees her sleeping peacefully. There was kinjal outside. She comes in and he goes home. As he reaches home he goes straight into bed.

Gopi starts to have flashbacks of what happened between him and her. She wasn't ready to forgive him but only at one condition, if they start afresh otherwise she will leave.

Aehem does not say anything to her, as he still can't seem to think what's right what's wrong. But he had to think positive.

After a few days later


Gopi got permission to leave. She was once again on her feet. She got kinjals support and walks towards the door and comes out. She sees, ccbm, kyunki saas fame, sgp, and much more, they gave her blessings
and took her to the modi home and left.

Sorry its short.
Will aehem and gopi reunite ? Or will there be another storm or evil cast be fall on them? Do read to find out......
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ayesha it is really great....... keep writing.
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Now aehem was back to his old routine, except he knows he loved her. Gopi had got her answer, she had to leave home for sure now. She called up urmi and told her she was coming without listening to aehem wanted to say.
It has been 12 months since Gopi had left home. In the Modi house, there was not even a single noise, happiness or nothing. All it was was sorrow. Especially Aehem. He was hurt. He wasn't even sure of his feelings. All he knows was he loved Anita. Anita that girl who thinking is low cheap etc, and wnt be able to live in a house where there 2 families together, meaning chirag and parag.
However he started to recollect the memories he had with Gopi. Nap incident, cooker incident, holi/bhang incident how cute she looked his inner self spoke:
What! Cute ! Her! Aehem modi can't think like that, he doesn't want to fall in the trap of love and dhoka again, not with this unpar.
He ignored his inner thought and took it out as he well knows how he loved her.
He took out his car and drove of, somehow lead him to UM and he got out and went inside and saw how Gopi was getting beaten. Beaten like a slave in the olden days, omg he thought. He knew this woman is cheap and stupid. He couldn't see it anymore. He walked it, and stopped her, and brought Gopi towards him and hugged her. She was crying heavily. There was scars on her back, stomach etc, bruises on her face and bleeding from her nose and lips. He shouted out: how dare you treat her like that, are you a human, you hit her, shame on you, and u kinjal, you keep watching her getting hit, can't you stop her at all.
He calmed down and looked at kinjal carefully. Kinjal had got beaten as well as Gopi. He got so angry, he told kinjal to sit in the car and she did it. After all she couldn't refuse her brother.
He looked at urmi once again with a fit of rage, picked up Gopi and put her in the back seat with gopi and drove of.
He spoke to himself: I am ashamed, of getting married to a girl who's aunt is like that, am getting ashamed of getting my brother married to her daughter. What ghatiya thoughts they have, except Gopi who was innocent and doesn't even know what is good and bad for her. He went home. Everyone had woke up, and started to have breakfast. He walked in with holding Gopi as she couldn't walk at all, and at the side was kinjal crying, ran to her mother and hugged her. She told them everything as what has been happening in urmi house and koki was shocked as she didn't expect all this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the update.