Originally posted by: peacefulblossom
This unusual tale started many years ago with soul...A soul Nivi looking for her body and her journey far across the realms of the 13 lost worlds. Unknown to her the Pin man & his gang of holy hunters are following her. This gang using their unique style and magical piercings to capture and destroy their victims, have become known throughout the 13 world as the most fierce and deadly bounty hunters that ever lived. Tthey were following her for her mysterious powers that she is yet to know of.
In her lonely quest of body searching she gets trapped between the blades of the wolverine of the gang and to her luck...and ninja wearing black comes to her rescue.
With a few ninja kicks the gang member is thrown through several walls (true 70/80/90s style Indian action) He was covered in dark top to toe. The only thing you could see is his piercing wild brown eyes. If one looked deeply inside them eyes you would see a wounded and lonely soul.
"Are you ok? Ninja guy ask
"You can see me?" Nivi back
"Did you hit your head...ofcourse I can see you"
"I'm ok thanks" She replies in shock and confusion to why he can see her. The gang member had special weapons to catch souls but he seems normal why can he see her.
She decides to keep it to herself and doesnt want to enclose her weakness to a stranger even if the stranger helped her. After some talking Nivi decides to ask the ninija to become her bodyguard...because she is worried that attacks on her were increasing... Ninja disagree first but when he finds out about her ability to cross realms, he readily agree.
Because he too has a secret curse he wants to get rid of...and travelling the realms could help him.
On the corner of the screen a pair of red eyes flash...someone or something is closly following the ninija.
The red eyes focus on the direction of the Nivi and Ninja and then the eyes fade into the shadows.
As Nivi and the Ninja slowly walk towards the direction of the Sun knowing it would lead them to where the Ocean, Earth and Sky meets... where this world ends and the 1st lost world known as Shahkaj (Short for shahruck & Kajol ) begins.
The Ninja, confused as to how Nivi gained her ability to cross in to the lost worlds decided to ask her questions, hoping she would reveal her secrets...
"Ermm" said the Ninja
Nivi looks towards the Ninja.
"Did you say something?" ask's Nivi
"Yeah... I did... how did you exactly lose your body? ... I mean how does that happen?" replied the Ninja
Nivi looks at the Ninja...staring deeply into his eyes wondering... thinking... should she trust him?... a man who saved her life, a man whose helping her still, a man who she's mysteriously drawn to. As she continued to stare hypnotically into his eyes, the Ninja cheekily said "i only asked because your body might have run away and if that's what happened I'd like to be warned in case it happens to me"
Nivi smiled back saying "no that's not what happened"
"I lost my body because I thought I was doing a good deed and it all went wrong. A forth night ago I went to sleep and dreamt the strangest dream. In this dream there was a man named Jawahal who asked me if I was willing to sacrifice a small unimportant part of me that I wouldn't miss in exchange for eternal happiness. Although I didn't need it for myself I thought that my sister whose sad face I can never see could do with some happiness so I said ok. He took me to a room where in front of him was a tattered book, he started reading and I heard him chant that to gain eternal happiness my soul would be traded... I shouted my body needs my soul and so do i... how do I live without my soul?... he smiled and then I knew I was never going to leave this place... I prayed I woke up, I screamed, I shouted but nothing!... no one came to help me... I knew then that I was alone... I ran up to him hitting him with all my power he shouted your ruining my chant, if its broken now I don't know what will happen but it won't be good I promise you!... suddenly I woke up, panting, shivering I felt a little better thinking it was all a dream... only to find out my dream wasn't a dream it was a nightmare and now my nightmare had become real... I had no body and nobody could help me."
The ninja looked at her with a slight sadness in his eyes like he knew what it was like to have his life ruined
Whilst, the ninja and the lost soul made their way through Shahkaj, Jawahal sat in his basement with the furnace on full blast. He stared deeply at his reflection where he saw a old discoloured face it seemed the layer of skin has melted away leaving a face will patches of skin and muscle. His eyes shifted to his right hand where three claws gushed out of his knuckles. He started to get lost in his thought and he wondered how a normal man turned into a dream demon who is after innocent souls and all this in the name of love?He was flooded with memories of how his life was once normal and how he thought he was in love with the woman whom had the key to his heart. He would have done anything for her, he would have given his life for her but little did he know at the time that, that's what his lover was after. Her name was Chanchal, it was love at first sight for him and he wanted to settle down and start a family with his beloved but she had other motives in mind. She was like Cinderella always mistreated by her step-mother and step sister. Jawahal thought he was going to be the prince charming whom Chanchal was waiting for but In reality, he discovered she never loved him, she was just using him for his soul, she had in fact compelled him many times. She wanted to acquire his soul in order to'.well he had no idea why she stole his soul, she had already booted him out, he was now just a useless corpse wondering the Underworlds.
Jawahal shed a slight tear, he was appalled with himself for tricking an innocent girl in her sleep and he still couldn't do the job right, maybe Chanchal was correct when she labeled him as 'useless'. Jawahal was trying so hard to recite the spell correctly but the girl kept shouting and shouting, which confused him and angered him further for his actions, he chanted a few incorrect words which led to another lost soul wondering the world. Still in his thoughts, he continued to think that there was no way in hell, he was going to attempt to steal another soul, it felt downright wrong BUT he needed a soul in order to take his revenge with the woman that betrayed him.Jawahal now had two options, he could either track down the lost soul and have it for himself or find another victim, he continued thinking which option to opt for.
Chanchal, a tall, thin and long frizzy haired woman sat in her tower admiring herself in the lit up mirror. She looked out the window eagerly waiting to see the love of her life, he was everything she wanted, he was tall, bald with a few white hairs, he had a tanned skin tone, and what she loved most about him was the unique piercings he had. It made him look dangerous, wild and she was one to love the thrill, the experience. Chanchal tried directly asking and indirectly leaving him hints many times to trap her Pin man into her web of love but nothing worked but she knew he was worth the wait. After all, her Pin man and the holy hunters, were attending to some work for her. And then all of a sudden, a wicked smile crept up on her lips as she thought of a brilliant idea, which would finally bring Pin Man and her closer together.
The sun was shining furiously behind Nivi and the ninja has they entered the first lost world. They were in a green field, with long geen plants with yellow flowers. In the distance a cow could be seen and the sound of the cow's bell could be heard. (trying to describe DDLJ song scene from memory, doing a bad job lol) If one listen carefully a soft song was playing in air "tujhe dekha to yeh". This world had a soft and loving atmosphere to it.
"Looks like we have entered ShahKaj world, its more lovely then I imagined" Nivi exclaimed has she read a old script in her hand.
Ninja was suddenly very quiet and only managed to nod in reply. He wanted to ask about the strange script but decided to ask later. Something was wrong in this world and he just couldn't pin point the cause of his worry. Or maybe it was just restless on his own feelings. It been so many years that he enjoyed the sun and the open air and having the feeling of love around him. Maybe after years of living in the dark he has forgotten how it is to actually live.
In a split second of wonderment his eyes shifted around looking for any shadows. Having found one he looked deeply into it...it was like any normal shadow...but before a smile could reach his mouth...there it was a flash of red. And automatically his one second joy was destroyed. He thought to himself in anger..."What was I expecting...a little sunshine and all my worries are gone?"
They started to walk towards the cow. After few minutes of silence Nivi decided to break the awkwardness.
" You know I was thinking...since we are travelling together...we should get to know eachother name. Hi I am Nivi..."
Nivi's voice broke ninja's deep thought and he managed a quick reply "Viren" (Haha he has a name now can stop calling him ninja)
"Oh Viren is a nice..." Suddenly Nivi tripped over a rock on the ground but was saved by ninjas quick movement,
"Tha..." Nivi looked up and came eye to eye with Viren. And suddenly it was like everything stopped as a unexplainable feeling washed over both of them.
Nivi in her dream state reached out for the mask covering Viren's face...
"Its really hot here...dont you want to take that off...?". The second Nivi's fingers touched the mask Viren snapped out of his state and jumped back in shock.
"DONT TOUCH THAT!"
Nivi also snapped out of her state and in her confusion could only say "Sorry"
"No sorry I should be the one saying sorry, it just shocked me that all..." There was a long silence has both of them were lost in their thoughts about what just happened. And they both came to the conclusion that it was just the strange atmosphere of this world.
Nivi started running around in circle in wonder.
"This world is really strange...looks like I turn more and more solid as we walk deeper into this world...I havent had these sensation in what seems like centuries" Nivi exclaimed trying to understand how a soul could trip of a rock and be saved by a normal human even if the human was a ninja. She enjoyed the feeling of the heat, air and flowers around her.
A tiny sparkle appeared in Viren's eye looking at Nivi enjoyment...then there was a sudden change in the air and Viren noticed movement around them.
"Nivi come close to me...theres something out there"
Nivi moved close to Viren and both of them looked around. Nivi noticed three scarecrows facing eachother.
"Oh I don't remember seeing those three scarecrows before and in such strange arrangement" She said looking at Viren, She looked back and there was four scarecrows...
"Where did the other one just come from?...OMG do I see a knife in the scarecrows hands?"
"Stay here!" Viren said has he ran towards the scarecrows. When he got there he saw two people on the ground deep asleep in a hug and the scarecrows surrounding them. There was a female dressed in Asian white dress and a man dressed a jacket with a guitar next to them ((SRK and Karjol 😉)
"WAKE UP!" Viren shouted...
Nivi was too busy watching Viren to notice the movement behind her...there was a scarecrow slowing making its way towards her...
.
Nivi
turned to see the scarecrow behind her, which looked like a giant hovering over her
little soul. Scared she tightly closed her eyes hoping when she opened them it
would all be a silly figment of her imagination. As the scarecrow lifted his hand to touch
Nivi, She opened her eyes, knowing this was not a dream she started walking backwards
trying frantically to get away, she screamed "Help."
Hearing Nivi's plea for help, Viren turned to find that Nivi had moved away from him. The scarecrow was next to her,
pulling his Katana (Ninja sword) out his back sleeve, he ran towards Nivi.
The scarecrows hand moved closer to her as she watched in tears fearing the aftermath, when
Swoosh, a knife appeared and hit the scarecrows arm.
"Stand
back Nivi, I got this" Viren shouted as he pointed his sword towards the one
armed Scarecrow, who seemed confused as to the whereabouts of his other arm.
The scarecrow with sadness showing in his eyes slowly moved back, the other scarecrows followed. Suddenly, a musical noise was heard. Viren and Nivi turned to see that
the unconscious man was unconscious no more; he was standing with his guitar.
"Hello senorita I'm Raj" the man said as he smiled at Nivi.
The
woman also rose to stand next to the man. The man lifted his guitar and started
playing, funky drum sounds started to echo around the field. Nivi and Viren
looked at each other confused as to where the drumming sound was coming from. The man started to sing...
It's close to midnight
and something evil's lurking in the dark
Under the moonlight, you see a sight that almost
stops your heart
You try to scream but terror takes the sound
before you make it
You start to freeze as horror looks you right
between the eyes
You're paralyzed
'Cause this is thriller, thriller night
And no one's gonna save you from the beast about
strike
You know it's thriller, thriller night
You're fighting for your life inside a killer,
thriller tonight
The scarecrows walked up to
the man and woman and they all started to dance by bobbing there head to the
side and then walking side to side with their arms up like zombies. The man
continues singing and then the woman joining in
You hear the door slam and realize there's nowhere
left to run
You feel the cold hand and wonder if you'll ever
see the sun
You close your eyes and hope that this is just
imagination, girl!
But all the while you hear the creature creeping
up behind
You're out of time
'Cause this is thriller, thriller night
There ain't no second chance against the thing
with forty eyes, girl
Thriller, thriller night
You're fighting for your life inside a killer,
thriller tonight
Viren and Nivi started enjoying
what they were seeing. They sat down to watch the rest of the performance. They
started bobbing their heads to the music and also sang along, unable to take their
eyes off what was happening when all off a sudden a chappal flew from the sky and
cracking the man straight in the forehead, he fell to the ground. The lady
looked up. 3 more chappals followed hitting the lady knock her unconscious.
(Superdadi Tune - click on the link it shall open a new music tab (youtube), click back on this story tab & then continue reading after reading the next paragraph close the music tab) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X69if5C3i9o
Viren and Nivi quickly turned to see an old lady fly past them, her hair tied in a bun wearing a blue fitted suit, whic showed her toned biceps. The letter 'S' was engraved on front just above her six pac. Her bright red cape was fluttering with the wind and chappals were flying out from under her cape. Some strange music followed behind her. (close music tab when video reaches 25 seconds)
Chappals were flying in
every direction, red ones, black ones, rubber ones. The scarecrows were running around. The man was furiously trying to
play his guitar, but after a string broke decided to cut his losses, he threw
the woman on his shoulder and started running.
Viren grabbed hold of Nivi's
hand thinking it's a war zone, I should get out her out of here. They started
running. After a while Nivi twisted her ankle and fell to the floor in pain.
Viren nervously said "get
up"
"I can't" said Nivi "my
ankle it hurts I can't walk. This always happens I start running"
Viren rolled his eyes
"fine" he said "I'm going to look around for somewhere we could both hide"
As
Viren started walking away. Nivi looked up; she saw a blue strip in the sky.
"Viren" said Nivi
as she pointed towards the sky. Viren looked up.
They both stared as the blue strip turned into a dot. It became bigger
and bigger until it turned into a figure and bam suddenly an old lady landed in
front of them.
Viren whilst looking afraid pulled out his sword and pointed it at the old lady, who
just stood there looking disgusted at his feeble action.
"Who are you?" asked Viren
"Why are you wearing that thing on you face? And what wrong with her?"
asked the old lady
"I'm a Ninja & she's" Viren hesitated to explain why Nivi looked
the way she did "She's not feeling well" he replied "you still haven't answered
my question who are you?" he shouted in an aggressive tone.
"Ungrateful man, I am the woman who saved you and your wife's live"
said the old lady.
Nivi feeling embarrassed looked away, Viren looked at Nivi "She not
my wife" he quietly replied.
"Then what are you both doing here together?" asked the old lady
"She's just a friend that I'm helping get better" replied Viren
Looking confused with a slight smile Superdadi replied "Huh...Friend? Is that what they
call it these days? I remember back in the days when I first saw my husband at
a karate tournament, we didn't meet or talk alone untill after the marriage and
these days boys and girls wonder in deserted places together. I can't keep up
with how times have changed. Her smile suddenly turned to sadness like she had remembered a painful memory. She shrugged it off. "Everyone knows me as Superdadi and I just
saved your lives, that's my job, it's what I do" replied the old lady.
Viren and Nivi looked at each other in confusion "You tried to kill
us" said Nivi
"With your chappal weapon, I have never seen a chappal being used
like that before" said Viren whilst still holding the sword to Superdadi's face.
Superdadi pulled out a chappal and flung it in the direction of the
sword, knocking it out Viren's grip and sending it straight to the ground.
"If I wanted to hurt you I would have already" said Superdadi in an
annoyed tone.
"Now listen do you want to know what happened. do you. Well listen
up. The man and woman who were in the field were not victims. Their names are
Raj & Simran, two well know human traders. They were trying to trap you, to sell you. They have done this many times before, every so often a train arrives and all the captured Humans are placed on board, no one knows where the trains heads off too, rumours are its goes to a land called Pardes, which is owned by Simran's father, It is said he has thousands of loyal pigeons which scout the land making sure any attempts to escape are foiled. No one has ever returned from Pardes which is why it is still a myth. The scarecrows that attacked you, they are innocent slaves, who
are forced to do the couples dirty deeds for them. They attacked you
because if they didn't they would have been severely punished & when Raj realised the
scarecrows were scared he decided to complete the job himself"
"They were singing" said Nivi "how could that have hurt us"
"They weren't singing they were hypnotising you, were you not
listening to the lyrics they were saying... It's
close to midnight and something evil's lurking in the dark, Under the moonlight, you see a sight that almost stops
your heart, You try to scream but terror
takes the sound before you make it, You
start to freeze as horror looks you right between the eyes, You're paralyzed...These words suck people in. Innocent humans comes to this world and they have
no idea that after listening to a song after a while a person's free will is taken from them. If I hadn't arrived you both would have
been trapped forever"
Viren and Nivi both looked down concerned that what Superdadi said may be true. They had both been gullible to
fall into a simple trap so easily. Nivi wondered what sort of world they had entered
where one minute they are being attacked and the next they are being sung to. How does such a world exist? and how would they know who to trust
as everything could be a trap including Superdadi herself.
I wrote it & its very long sorry!!... It's not my greatest work & im sure there are loads of errors 😆. & really long sentences. i had to read through it again because i had only put like 5 full stops in the whole thing... the rest were comma's 😆
ENJOY... Hope its not torture 😆
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