pappa,jaldi aa jaana (for "KASH" fan)

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             PAPPA JALDI  AA JAANA
 
hey friends,again i came with a different short story on "AR'
as i am poor in english,so i have written most of the parts in hindi,hope you like it..plz.do a comment...
 
 
BBC NEWS.
 
" 11 March 2011 : Japan earthquake: Tsunami hits north-east"

"Japan's most powerful earthquake since records began has struck the north-east coast, triggering a massive tsunami."
Cars, ships and buildings were swept away by a wall of water after the 8.9-magnitude tremor, which struck about 400km (250 miles) north-east of Tokyo.

In one ward alone in Sendai, a port city in Miyagi prefecture, 200 to 300 bodies were found.
Officials say 350 people are dead and about 500 missing, but it is feared the final death toll will be much higher.The quake was the fifth-largest in the world since 1900 and nearly 8,000 times stronger than the one which devastated Christchurch, New Zealand, last month, said scientists"

 

 
 

SEGMENT --- 1


ARMA-A-A-N!!! ARMA-A-A-N!! ARMA-A-AN!"...ARMA---AA'AN!!...

riddhima's voice was scattered all around and she fell unconcious!!...all were stood quietly!! Totally speechless!!..what was happened !!...anjali aur ma ne riddhima ko sambhalne ki koshjish ki,jo behosh padi thi...dr.sashank ko atul ne sambhal rakha tha...sab kuch khatam ho chuka tha!!arman ja chuka tha!! riddhima ka pyar kho chuka tha!!...uski jindagi usse cheen gayi thi!!...


dr.sashank khud ko blame kar rahe they,unhone hi arman ko force kiya tha conference attend karne ko'.dr.sashank jante they,ab riddhima unse kabhi bhi baat nahi karegi'.shayad kabhi 'papa' hi na bulaye!!.aur shayad wo ji hi na paaye.!!..jiski jindagi hi cheen jaaye,wo bhala kaise jinda rah payegi!!


abhi 1 week pahle ki hi to baat hai,aisi hi ek subah thi,jab riddhima ne phone kiya tha...wo bahut naraj thi,apne papa se...

riddhima :"papa,mai aapse bahut naraj hun...
dr.sashank : " keun riddhima?.ab aapke papa ne kya kiya?
riddhima :" aap jante ho meri aisi haalat hai aur aapne arman ko conference mein bhejne ki baat kaise sochi?"

dr.sashank : "beta,wo bahut intelligent hai,aagey usey hi to mera new sanjiwani sambhalna hai na...ye conference attend karna uske liye bahut important hai...na jaane kitne famous doctors wahan honge!...wo jayega toh unhe follow up kar payega na...aur saath mein rahul bhi toh rahega na'.

arman took mobile from riddhima.."papa,aapki beti ki baaton ka bura mat manna..and believe me papa,maine kuch nahi kaha...

dr.sashank(smiled) : " i know beta...riddhima beti apne papa ko hi daant rahi hai,aap humare beech mein mat aao...

tears rolled down dr.sashank's eyes..."ab toh uski beti ussey sada ke liye naraj ho jayegi...usne papa hokar apni beti ki jindagi cheen li!!!!...

arman aaj hi toh wapus aane wala tha...but sirf rahul aaya tha...injured!! shocked!!...riddhima janti thi,arman muskil mein hai,par usey biswas tha,arman ko kuch nahi ho sakta...unhone apni life mein kitni muskilen paar ki thi...par har baar dono saath hote...arman ne usey kaha tha ki ab bhagwanji kabhi bhi unhe alag nahi karenge'.but rahul ko akela dekhte hi wo samajh gayi...uski jindagi cheen gayi thi!!...uska aasman kho chuka tha!!...



after 10 days

now riddhima was admitted in sanjiwani...she was unconcious!!kabhi kabhi hosh aata toh bash ek hi baat kahti.."arman!! wapus aao!!..arman!! arman!!...

doctors were scared to see her condition...they were monitering her continously...

dr.kirti came in dr.sashank's cabin..." sir,mujhe aapse kuch kahna hai..
dr.sashank : " kahiye dr.kirti..
dr.kirti : " we doctors decided to do surgery of riddhima...
dr.sashank : " abhi toh 15 -20 days baaki hain na...
dr.kirti : " sir,wo toh hai...but usey aaj 10 din se thik se hosh bhi nahi hai...waise bhi wo anemic patient hai,weakness bahut jyada,hosh mein aate hi wo sirf aur sirf arman ko dhundhti hai...dimag par asar na parey isliye need ka injection diya ja raha hai...ab bachche mein koi problem aa jaye,usse achcha ham uski surgery kar den...

dr.sashank(sighed) : "ab aap sab jo thik lage,kijiye..maine toh jindagi mein ek decision lekar apni bachchi ki jindagi hi barbaad kar di...

dr.kirti : "sir,please apne ko blame mat dijiye...ok..mai chalti hun ,aaj hi riddhima ki surgery ho jayegi...
dr.sashank : "please ,dr.kirti ..meri bachchi ka dhyan rakhiyega aur arman ke bachche ko kuch na hone paye...ab wahi riddhima ki life hai...

dr.kirti : "i know sir...hum un dono ko kuch nahi hone denge...



in the mid night-(flashback)

arman was caressing riddhima's hair softly ..." abhi bhi mujhse naraj hai,meri basket?...
riddhima (pouted) : "apna hath hatao aur mujhse baat mat karo,arman mallick..
arman( making more closed) : " bash 1 week ki toh baat hai, mai jald hi wapus aa jaunga...humara baby aane se pahle..aur feer agli baar jab japan jaunga ,toh apni basket ko bhi le jaunga..promise..

riddhima buried her face in arman's chest and smelled his fragrance : "toh agli baar dono saath chalenge...ish baar papa ko kahkar cancel kar do na arman...aisi haalat mein tum saath na raho toh mujhe dar lagta hai...

arman kissed her hairs.." papa ko bahut dukh hoga basket...aur mere aane tak tum apne ghar rahogi..i mean apne ma,nani ke paas...aur feer humara pyara sa baby aayega...


...


IN THE HOSPITAL

riddhima heard..someone says..'congratulaion,ridhz...beta hua hai...arman ka beta...


riddhima uttered in a weak voice.."ar-ma-an...ar-m-a-an!!...wapus aao...arman!!..."..and she became unconcious again ...

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Muskan was sleeping near rahul'.rahul's eyes were closed'.,but muskan knew that he was not sleeping'


Muskan touched rahul's forehead'."rahul,so jao'.bahut raat ho gayi hai'
Rahul (sighed) : "riddhima aur uska beta kaisa hai muskan?...
Muskan : " thik hai dono'riddhima ko hosh bhi aa gaya hai,par kisi se baat hi nahi kar rahi hai'pata nahi, baba ji ne har baar uske saath hi ye koun sa khel khelte hain!...kitni baar arman ko khoi,par har baar unke pyar ki jeet hui,but ab '.(her chocked voice made the word incomplete)'

Tears were flowing from rahul's eyes'.."mai 'mere kaaran hi aisa hua'.mai agar arman ko jaane nahi deta, toh ''

He sat up with excitement and caught muskan's hand'."plz.muski,mera biswas kar ..maine usey roka tha'meri tabiyat thik nahi thi aur 2 deen baad second conference start hone wala tha,toh usne kaha ki wo sea beach ja raha hai'.agli baar riddhima ko lekar jayega na'isliye koun sa sea beach sabse beautiful hai,wo dekhkar aayega'.

Muskan caressed his hand'

Rahul : "aur feer earthquake aaya,tab mai so raha tha'.mujhe kuch yaad nahi..2 din baad hosh aaya,toh pata chala rescue team ne mujhe nikala tha'.feer maine arman ko kitni jagah search kiya,per wo nahi mila'.muski ,I was helpless!!'.maine arman ko bahut dhundha muski'.each and every place'wo log jaane nahi de rahe they'feer bhi maine request kar usey paane ki bahut koshish ki...'..par wo nahi mila muski,mera dost nahi mila...

Muskan pressed rahul's hand to console him.."hum sab ko pata hai rahul'tumhari koi mistake nahi''(trying to change the topic)'riddhima aur uske bete se milne jayega.?...
Rahul(sighly) : " kaise jaun muski?'.mai ab kabhi bhi riddhima ke saamne nahi ja sakta'.mai jinda wapus keun aaya muski?..

muskan kept her hand quickly on rahul's mouth'"chup!! Chup!! Aisi baaten bola toh!!..humari raima ki kasam,kabhi hum dono ko chodkar jaane ki baat kahi toh!!...

dono ke aansoo ek dusre ko bheego rahi thi...koun kisko sambhaley!! rahul muskan se lipta hua kahta ja raha tha...'" mera dost mujhe chodkar chala gaya hai muski, I have lost my friend muski!!'.maine apna yaar kho diya!'.arman apni riddhima aur apne bacche ko chodkar chala gaya hai!!!!...

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PUNAM



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\oye punam...........agar is fff ka happy ending na diya tor mein teri itni tukre karoongi na ki tu ginna bhul jayegi...already tune meri heartbeat baada di..aur upar se itni ghusum kahani..agar jaldi se update nahin ki or happy ending na di toh mere se bhaagne ki jaaga dhoondna shuru kaar de...i am gonnna kill u..............
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hey punam,

i hv already read the segment on DMG blog.
its awesome.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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punam...yeh ff happy toh hai na??????? :(
such a sad part yaar :(
but continue soon... ;D
tht tsunami was soo bad :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭😭 oh god yaar yeh kya ho gaya
i hope ridzy becomes fine
continue soon
n thx 4 d pm
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nice part....
Continue soooonnnnnn
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nice update....continue soon n add me to ur pm list
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hey such a sad part😭
hope this will have a happy ending
continue soon
thanx for the pm

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Originally posted by: sacred shrine

\oye punam...........agar is fff ka happy ending na diya tor mein teri itni tukre karoongi na ki tu ginna bhul jayegi...already tune meri heartbeat baada di..aur upar se itni ghusum kahani..agar jaldi se update nahin ki or happy ending na di toh mere se bhaagne ki jaaga dhoondna shuru kaar de...i am gonnna kill u..............

 
love u sonu...tumhare hath se mere tukre hon toh aur kya chahiye...meri to life ban jayegi...but usse pahle ek baar hug kar lena mujhe..hehehe....😃.😉🤗🤗
 
punam
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HEY DEAR...........A HUGE CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE NEW FF.......Love the concept......feeling really bad for Riddhima....do continue soon...thanks for the PM.....take care...

Lots of Love
GEET