D.K a.k.a "Mr. Perfect"

hey guys i am starting another fanfic.

~Part 1~

Disha Bhosle is in her room getting ready for the guests that are coming over.

Disha is a simple innocent girl(who will eventually love dk).

Suhas: beta, jaldi karo! guests will be here any minute

Disha: i am coming relax!

Rano comes behind her.

RAno: hey di! arent you excited?

Disha: about what?

RAno: no one told you?

Disha: told me wht?

Rano: ab toh maza ah yehga.

Disha: wht are you talking about?

RAno: you just take your time getting pretty.

RAno leaves and smiles to herself.

The guests arrive.

RAno and Suhas greets them.

Disha is taking her precious time getting ready.

Suhas and the mother talk for a while.

M: where is your other daughter?

S: rano, bring disha down plz.

RAno: ji, mamma.

Rano pops in the room.

Rano: they are here.

DIsha: okay give me 2 secs.

She is putting her earings on.

Disha: by the way, why are you so happy?

Rano: come downstairs first and i will tell you.

Disha: infront of everyone?

Rano: well, i think everyone knows by now.

They both go down stairs.

Guess who the guests are?

Mahika, Vas, and GArgi!!!!!!

JUST KIDDING! I WOULDNT PUT YOU THROUGH THAT KIND OF MENTAL TORTURE!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

It's VEdant, Dk, and Sumitra!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk looks at disha and is like "wow"!!!!!!!!


Edited by Kajal741 - 18 years ago

yeah it was great.....
plz cont

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what a great intro
kajal you almost gave me a heart attack by saying that the guess are vas, mehika, and gargi 😆
plz write soon

oh man!!!!!!.....

cant wait to read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........


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Sum: come here, beti.

Disha comes over and touches Sum's feet.

Sum: these are my sons Dk and VEdant.

She says hi to them.

They are all talking and Rano and Disha look at each other.

Vedant and Dk look at each other too.

Suhas: let me show you my home.

Disha and Dk and Vedant and Rano get up.

Sum: disha where are you going?

Disha: but i thought...

Sum: sunny, sit down and relax.

Suhas: come on, rano and vedant.

RAno: have fun di!

She closes the door.

THere is this awkward silence.

Dk:umm...hi my name is dk.

Disha: hi...my name is disha.

DK: look i think we have been setup.

Disha: took you this long to realize that.

Dk: well i didnt hear you say anything.

Disha: you are so....

DK: so wht?

it goes back and fourth until they hate each other.

DK: u shouldnt be talking.

sum, suhas, rano, and vedant come in.

Sum: do you like each other.

Dk and Disha stand up and the same time.

Dk/Disha: WHAT????????

Suhas: i knew it! congratulations everyone.

Rano: i am getting a jiju!

Vedant: i am getting a bhabi.

Dk: lekin ma....

Disha: aai yeh....

Suhas: i dunt want to hear anything.

Sum: sunny i cant tell you how happy i am.

Dk and Disha look at each other and are like....oh brother!!!!!!!!

Rano and vEdant were listening to their convo the whole time before.

They heard everything but no one knows that.

loooooooool.............hahahahahahahaa!!!!!!!

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kajal this is a fab fanfic!!!!

looooooooooooooooooooool.......

vedant aur rano bhi na!!!!!....maza aagaya!!! 😆 😆

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how kajal this was excllent
wow so in ur ff rano and vedant are setting there older siblings up 😆
keep up the great work 😉

They all talk for a while.

Dk and Disha are awkward toward each other.

Sum: so tomorrow i will set the wedding date?

Suhas: yes plz!

Sum: i am so happy today.

Suhas: me too!!!!!!

Sum: we should leave now.

Suhas: sure... but plz do take care.

Sum: tik hai.

They leave.

Disha and rAno go upstairs.

Disha seems upset.

Rano knows why but asks anyway.

Rano: wht happened?

Disha: wht do you mean>

Rano: di...i am ur sis...i know when u are upset.

Disha: it's just that i kinda dunt like dk.

Rano: kinda of?

Disha: okay! i hate him.

RAno is like "i will get u guys to fall in love pretty soon"

RAno: then say no to the marriage.

Disha: but aai is so happy.

Rano: yeah that is true....you shouldnt break her heart.

Meanwhile Segial HOuse:

Ved is in Dk's room.

Ved: cant wait till bhabi comes over.

Dk: why?

VEd: didnt you like her?

Dk: no!!!!!! i hated her.

Vedant: why? she is so nice.

Dk: that's wht u think.

So the current situation is that Dk and Disha hate each other.

Vedant and Rano are good friends.

Ved: then just say no to the marriage.

Dk: but ma is so happy today.

VEd:exactly! so dunt break her dil today!

Dk: i guess.

Sum enters.

Sum: i just talked to the pandit. He said a good time is two weeks from now.

DK: Wht?

Ved: that far.

Dk just looks at VEdant.

Sum calls Suhas and tells her.

Suhas: Disha beta....shaadi doh weeks mein hai.

Disha: kya?

RAno: that far?

Disha just looks at RAno.

NO engagment!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha and Dk are sad that they have to live together!!!!

Dk calls Disha to the park.

Dk: look both us dunt want to get married.

Disha: atleast you got something right!

Dk: yeah well atleast i am doing something about it.

Disha: dancing and jumping for joy doesnt count.

Dk: being rude and annoying doesnt either.

They both roll their eyes.

Dk: look the only reason i am doing this wedding is becuz of my mother's happiness.

Disha: so am i!

Dk: let's atleast pretend to get along.

Disha: fine by me.

Dk: i hope you got the key word.

Disha: wht was that?

Dk: "pretend"

Disha just leaves and Dk does too.

Next Day:

It's da sangeet.

Disha is in her room getting ready.

Rano: ladka wala aya!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: so? big deal.

Dk, Vedant, and their friends are downstairs.

ONe of his friends: come on bhabi!!!!!!!!

Ved: how long are you gonna make dk wait>

Disha rolls her eyes.

HEr and Rano come running downstairs.

Naach gaana starts.

Dk and Disha avoid each other.

Ved and Rano are up to planning again.

Wait til next time to find out.....plz comment on it...

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Vedant: let's put it in action.

They both go in the middle of the crowd.

Ved: attention ladies and gentleman......today is a special day.

Rano: so on this special day plz we have a surprise performance.

Dk and Disha are like wht the hell!!!!!!!!

Rano goes behind Disha and VEd goes behind Dk.

RAno and VEd push both of them in the middle!!!!!!!

THe song "Maahvi Ve" from Kal Ho Naa Ho starts playing.

EVeryone claps.

Dk and Disha just look at each other.

Neither doesnt know wht to do!!!!!!!

Then VEdant and Rano come and dance next to them.

*note: i skipped a few days and then the sangeet took place...the wedding day is in 3 days.

Next Day:

It's da mendhi ceremony!

Disha and RAno are downstairs getting their mendhi put on.

IN disha's hand there is a heart with Dk's name in it.

Disha ka blood pressure ab to zaada high hogaya hai.

They finally get their mendhi put on.

Rano: look di!

She points outside.

It's raining really hard.

They both run outside and spin around.

Disha is is soo happy cuz she loves da rain.

RAno is jumping up and down.

All of a sudden Disha bumps into someone!

So does RAno!

Rano bumps into VEd!

Disha bumps into Dk!

They all look at each other.

VEdant joins RAno and plays in the rain.

Disha: i thought we were getting married tom.

Dk: believe me, i am not in any hurry either.

Disha: then go!!!!!

Dk: unfortunately i cant cuz i gotta deliever something to your aai!

Disha: w/e

He leaves and Disha continues to play in the rain like a lil child.

PLEASE TELL ME WHT YOU THINK!!!!!!!!!!