A Serendipitous Wedlock (AR ff) Prologue 03/27/11

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AMMY12
Nice start.
Do pm me.

Thank You for the support! And sure I'll add you to the pm list!

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ankitajain94
sounds interesting
awesome start
plz add me 2 ur pm's list

Thanks a lot Ankita...I know there's not much to talk about when it comes to prologue but thanks nonetheless! And about the PM list...I believe it'd be a little more convenient to have you as a buddy...pls accept my request kindly!😊

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: zephyrr
nicely written. would love to read more..
and i must say you've got a very interesting id name too.. :)

Thanks a lot, dear! Didn't leave much room for comments on the prologue, but I hope I'd fare well with your expectations! And My-My...a couple of months ago, when I first saw your posts,your username had made me a little intrigued too...more like pulled me lol! Cheers!😊

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice start
continue soon

love
Riddss

Thanks a ton! Glad you liked it! The next part would be up in a bit!

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: iceprincess101
Hey...nice start would love to read more...do add me to ur pm list...

Thanks a lot for the encouragement, dear! Putting you on the PM list is more of a pleasure for em...so no worried on that part! 😆

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -poornima-
very nice start
loved it
continue soon
add me to ur pm list

Thanks, Poornima. I believe the prolooue didn't reveal much, netiher did it deliver much thrill but fingers crossed for the next couple of parts lol! The next part would be up in a bit and about the PM list...it'd be a pleasure!

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: qt4ever
Hey
nice start
pls pm me too

Thanks a lot, dear! Glad you like it! And Sure...I'll add you to the PM list!😊

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: cute.arsh
nice start
continue soon

Thanks a lot, dear! The next part would be up soon!😊

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Nina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Nice start
Do continue
N pm me please

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rhapsodic_muse

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Mrs.ArmanMallik
wow that sounds really good

but cud u do some english parts cos i cant understand hindi properly and lol i reaLLy cant imagine shashank talkin punjabi

lol

i keep imagin a fat guy

lol

plz pm me wen u update

k

fnxxxxxxxx

Hmmm...now that seems like a comment to me...and glad you were honest with the criticisms.

First things first (total cliche), I'd be only glad to use more English. Infact at a lot more ease than I'm at the moment. But I possibly can't turn all of their conversations to English in order to keep the flavor in...maybe ya getting rid of Punjabi seems like a good idea. And don't worry...the descriptions and the narration would be in Engligh, no matter what!

Sorry for the inconvenience you had to deal with! But I'd definitely consider your suggestions and thanks a lot for the encouragement! Have a nice day!

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