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my TIME UP break!!! Sr Ins DAYA...

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SENIOR INSPECTOR DAYA

 

ACP entered at bearue..........  all team present there.......... ABHIJEET says.......

ABHIJEET: Sir aap kay liyey aik PARCEL aaya hay.........

ACP: check kiya???..

ABHIJEET: jee Sir......... kuch nahi hay....... bus LADDO hain..........

ACP: phir!! LADDO dekhy???

ABHIJEET(wink to DAYA): Sir DAYA laddho kha kha kay dekh raha hay.........

ACP smiles........ DAYA embarrass.........  he said............

DAYA: Sir 6 LADDO hain........ aur 6 kay 6.......

ACP(interrupts): tum nay kha liyey......... array DAYA kuch tou hamaray liyey chor detay....... ab bechara FREDDIE kya karay ga...... haan!!!

Everyone smiles a lot..... DAYA was very much embarrassing..... sumtime ACP Sir really created such situations with him..... but these situations are the STRESS BUSTER for all of them...... they all busy in their schedules..... ABHIJEET moved inside while DAYA outside of bearue......

On NEXT Morning..........

When DAYA entered..... everyone welcum him with clapping..... DAYA confused.... he saw everyone is looking happy..... he again reminds may be his BIRTHDAY!!! But his BIRTHDAY is on DECEMBER so WHY!!! he asked......

DAYA: kya hua???

ABHIJEET hugged him........ DAYA shocked......... while hugged........ he thinks.........

DAYA(thinking): kal tou itna daant raha tha..... kay apna khayal nahi rakhtay ho........ aur aaj..... kuch garbar lag rahi hay boss.......

ABHIJEET: bhae DAYA..... ab tou PARTY banti hee hay!!!.

DAYA still in confusion state..... Suddenly ACP came out from his cabin and come forward towards DAYA...... there is a beautiful smile on his face......

ACP: CONGRATULATION.... Sr Inspector DAYA..... (gives him) ye raha tumhara NEW BATCH......

DAYA was shocked'. Everyone feel that the news is unexpected for DAYA that's why his behavior was like this'. But ABHIJEET clearly felt that this shock is not pleasant or surprised'. even a simple smile was not there on his lips' he does not grab the BATCH as well' he saw ABHIJEET and instantly moved out'. everyone was confused'. ACP looked towards ABHIJEET' he moved out behind DAYA but DAYA got his quillas and rushed away'. he be back at bearue'.

ACP: isay kya hua???

ABHIJEET: pata nahi Sir'.

FREDDIE: lagta hay DAYA Sir ko yaqeen hee nahi aa raha hay' 13 saal bhi tou ho gayey hain'.

ABHIJEET: nahi FREDDIE'. baat kuch aur hee hay'.

At night ABHIJEET went to his house' the house was locked' he called him and asked'

ABHIJEET: kahan ho tum???

DAYA: Sea Side'.

ABHIJEET: wahein raho' main aa raha hun'.

After 25 minutes'. he be on spot' saw DAYA sat on a bench'. he also sits beside him'.

ABHIJEET: kya hua DAYA??? tum ko khushi nahi hui???

DAYA(very low tone): pata nahi'.

ABHIJEET: ye kya baat hui!!! sub ko itna intaizaar hota hay' PROMOTION ka' aur tum!!!

DAYA: mujhay koi intaizaar nahi tha'.

Suddenly FREDDIE called ABHIJEET and tells him about a culprit' who was at bearue' said ACP ordered DUO to be at bearue rite now'. they moved on their way'.. when entered'.

SACHIN(in smily tone): Sir' Sr. Ins ABHIJEET aur Sr. Ins DAYA ko ACP Sir nay apnay cabin mein bulaya hay'.

DAYA(in anger): SACHIN'. mujhay ye sub pasand nahi'. Dunt cross ur limits'.

Everyone stunned'. nobody expect such rash tone from DAYA to any member'. SACHIN felt insult' DAYA calmed himself and say SORRY to him that due to sum personal matter he was harsh with SACHIN'. ABHIJEET was really in tension' he still does not understand why DAYA did not accept that position'.

DAYA tried to talk to ACP about that'.. he said'.

ACP: DAYA'. ye BATCH tou lay lo''

DAYA: Sir aap meri PROMOTION rukwa dein'..

ACP shocked'.. he saw DAYA strangely'.. he thought DAYA mind is not in working condition'.

ACP(in anger): DAYA tumhara dimagh tou theek hay' ye kya ulti seedhi baatein bolay ja rahy ho'. Kitna intaizaar hota hay' PROMOTION ka sub ko'.

DAYA(in irritation): Sir' magar mujhay PROMOTION nahi chahyey'.

ACP(straight tone): tum ja ker kisi achay DR say apny dimagh ka ilaj karwao DAYA'. samjahy' aur ab mujhay tumhari koi fazul baat nahi sunni hay'. jao'.

DAYA came out without any hope'. He irritated on himself that nobody takes him serious or understands his opinion'. Although ABHIJEET also does not take his view serious' he was angry' now what he do!!!!

On next day' he came to pick ABHIJEET from his house'. ABHIJEET looked very very sad'. DAYA shocked to see him'.

DAYA: meray dukhi honay ki wajah tou samjh aati hay'. tumhein kya hua??? Kya TAREEKA say larai ho gayii???

ABHIJEET (sad voice): DAYA TAREEKA ja rahi hay'

DAYA: kahan!!!

ABHIJEET: BANGLORE' us kay TRANSFER ORDERS aa gayey hain'.

DAYA feet pressed the break'. His quillas stopped with extreme scratch'  he relaxed that the road was empty otherwise he was in tension'. he saw ABHIJEET and said in anger'.

DAYA: aur tum kuch karo gay nahi' bus yunhi bethay raho gay'.

ABHIJEET: tou kya karun!!!

DAYA(in xtra anger): kuch nahi karo' bus mujhay pagal banao' (with himself) ek tou apni tension hee khatam nahi ho rahi' aur ooper say tumhari!!!

ABHIJEET did not say anything' he looks very gloomy and sad'. DAYA was really in double trouble' he came early and now at ACP cabin'.

DAYA: Sir' wo

ACP(interrupts): DAYA mujhay tumhari bewakoofi ki koi baat nahi sunni hay'.

DAYA: nahi Sir' wo baat nahi hay'.

ACP: tou phir kya baat hay???

DAYA: Sir aap ko malum hay kay TAREEKA ka TRANSFER ho gaya hay'.

ACP: haan'. malum hay'.

DAYA: Sir aap rukwa nahi saktay???

ACP: us nay kaha hay!!!

DAYA:  Sir wo kabhi kahay ga'. magar agar hum hee nahi samajh payey tou faida!!!???

DAYA saw ABHIJEET reflection on ACP's cabin glass door'. ABHIJEET jus entered in bearue'. ACP did not see him'.'

ACP: ab us kay kuch kehnay ka koi faida bhi nahi hay DAYA'.(DAYA instantly added) haan Sir' mujhay malum hay kay TAREEKA kay uncle nay us ki shadi fix ker di hay'..  wahein BANGLORE mein'.

ACP shocked and saw DAYA in confusion'.  Suddenly he heard a voice of something falling at floor' he turned back and saw ABHIJEET  backed step by step with stunned face and watery eyes' his cell was fallen at the floor'.while DAYA starred him in whole'.

ACP: DAYA ye tum kya bol rahay ho???

DAYA: nahi Sir wo bus'. aap ORDER nahi rukwa saktay???

ACP:  DAYA main FORENSIC kay liyey kuch nahi ker sakta' ye SALUNKHY ka department hay'. wohi kuch ker sakta hay'. us say baat karo'.. aur haan DAYA ye tumhara BATCH!!!

DAYA: Sir' wo ye main baad mein lay lunga'. abhi main SALUNKHY Sir say baat karta hun'.

ACP(in anger): DAYAA'..

DAYA took the BATCH'. placed it in his desk drawer and moves out' ACP still don't understand his attitude'.

ACP(with himself): ye DAYA chahta kya hay??? kuch samajh nahi aa raha hay'.

DAYA came at FORENSIC'. Dr. SALUNKHY was alone here' doing some test'.

DAYA: Sir aap masroof hain??? TAREEKA nazar nahi aa rahi hain??

SALUNKHY: bhae abhi tak tou koi case aaya nahi hay' tou tum kesay aa gayey???

DAYA: Sir' wo TAREEKA'.

SALUNKHY: us ka TRASFER ho gaya hay DAYA'. BANGLORE mein''.

DAYA: Sir aap ORDER rukwa nahi saktay???

SALUNKHY: haan rukwa sakta hun' magar TAREEKA ye nahi chahti' aur wo kyun nahi chahti' ye tum meray bajayey apnay us dost say pocho tou acha hoga'..

DAYA: Sir aap ORDER rukwayein'. main kuch karta hun'.

At NIGHT' he met with ABHIJEET'. ABHIJEET was very quiet' even did not say or ask anything' DAYA felt bad' he be there to say some strong to ABHIJEET' but after watching his condition' he suppressed his idea to inoculate anything right now'.. he moved out'. he had a plan'.. and now it's the time to act on that plan' he knew the PLAN was so stupid... but he also knew very well that when HE or TAREEKA will be there'. ABHIJEET jus used his HEART' NOT BRAIN!!! a DAREDEVIL SMILE comes on his lips'. he called TAREEKA'.

On next day'. he be with ABHIJEET in a CITY Hospital to watch about a patient case' in few minutes' he got a call from FREDDIE who gave him ACP order to be at bearue now'..he said'

DAYA: boss' mujhay jana hoga' ACP Sir nay bulaya hay'.

ABHIJEET: acha theek hay' main DR say is ki saari medical report lay ker bearue hee aata hun'.

 He vanishes from the scene' when ABHIJEET get out from the DR cabin'. He saw TAREEKA in crying moving here and there in search of someone'. ABHIJEET rushed towards her'.

ABHIJEET(in tension): TAREEKA tum' yahan' kiya hua???

TAREEKA: ABHIJEET'. tum theek ho'. Tum!!!

ABHIJEET: haan' magar!!!

He took her aside' sat her on bench' even hold her hand'. she was in tensed condition'

ABHIJEET: tum kahan chali gayii thi???

TAREEKA: tum nay roka hee nahi' kuch kaha hee nahi'.

ABHIJEET: tou kya kehna zaruri tha'.

She did not say more'. wiped her tears'. ABHIJEET asked'

ABHIJEET(in hesitation): tumharay uncle ko bura tou nahi laga hoga'. kay tum is tarah!!!!

TAREEKA(strangely): kya is tarah???!!!

ABHIJEET(again in low tone): yehi kay tum nay un ki marzi say shadi say inkaar ker diya???

TAREEKA: shadi??? kis ki ???

After that reply he easily felt something going wrong'. He excused for a minute and then calls someone' while calling he is watching here n there'.

ABHIJEET: FREDDIE, DAYA kahan hay???

FREDDIE: Sir yahan ACP Sir kay cabin mein' baat karwaon aap ki'

ABHIJEET: nahi theek hay'.

He dropped the call'. FREDDIE and DAYA smiles at the same moment but at different places'  DAYA moved towards quillas which was parked far away from the Hospital'. ABHIJEET be backed on the main spot where TAREEKA waiting for him'.

On next day'. DCP was there without any prior information'.. ACP and all team were amazed on his unexpected arrival'. Suddenly DAYA and FREDDIE came with a culprit'. The culprit was a THEIF and be here on a case of DECOIT in a BANK two days back'..

DAYA interrogated him in INTERROGATION room' DCP talked to ACP'. Suddenly the DAYA slapping and culprit scream was coming at its high peak'. DCP quite distracted' he came out from the cabin' here ABHIJEET and ACP also felt unusual'. DCP called DAYA immediately'. FREDDIE came out behind him with the culprit'. Lots of wounds'. Blood' scars was at culprit face'. His hand and leg was injured' while lots of blood also present at DAYA's hand'.

DCP(in anger): ACP ye kya ho raha hay??? tumhara ye OFFICER pagal tou nahi ho gaya hay' pooch taach ka ye maqsad tou nahi kay mujrim ko is tarah maara jayey' aur tum is OFFICER ki PROMOTION ko lay ker khush ho'.

ACP(bit irritate): DAYA kya hay ye sub!!! Tum nay is ko'.

DAYA: Sir ye munh kholnay ko tayyar hee nahi tha' tou main nay thora halka sa hath'.

DCP(interrupts): ye tumhara halka hath hay'. Ins DAYA tum Sr Ins bannay kay laiq hee nahi ho'

DAYA(relaxed tone): jee Sir'.

ACP: magar Sir'. kuch'.

DCP(interrupts): mujhay tumhari koi baat nahi sunni hay ACP' main sub apni aankhun say dekh chukka hun'. Sr Ins DAYA tum wapis Ins ki position per DEMOTE kiyey jaatay ho'. BATCH kahan hay tumhara???

DAYA instantly gave back his BATCH which was in his desk drawer' DCP left in anger'. While ACP saw DAYA'. all clearly feel that DAYA did that intentionally'. ACP scolded him a lot' he looked downward in whole' ACP ordered him to leave the place rite now' DAYA moved out'. after few time'. ABHIJEET'.

ABHIJEET: Sir'.. DAYA'.

ACP: haan DAYA ko ye PROMOTION pasand nahi aayii thi' us nay mujh say bhi isay rukwanay ka kaha tha' magar mujhay nahi malum tha kay wo ye sub ker jayey ga'..

ABHIJEET: magar DAYA nay aisa kyun kiya!!!

ACP: ye tou wo tum ko hee batayey ga' (after few sec) agar batana chahy tou!!!

ABHIJEET again meet DAYA at Sea Side'. DAYA sat on a bench'. He also sits beside him'. DAYA looks much better and happy' while on the other side' ABHIJEET was so angry with him and his act'. after a big lecture to DAYA'. DAYA unexpectedly asked'

DAYA: boss ek baat poochun'. Sach batana' apnay dil say pooch ker'.

ABHIJEET: pocho'.

DAYA: kya tum kabhi pasand karo gay kay tum ACP Sir kay barabar ya un ki jagah per aa jao''. Sach batana'..

ABHIJEET(after few sec in low voice): nahi'.

DAYA: bus mujhay bhi nahi acha laga'..

ABHIJEET: magar DAYA!!!

DAYA: ABHI' acha aik lamhay kay liyey socho'. Agar kal ACP Sir DCP ban jayein aur DELHI chalein jayey' tum un ki jagah ACP ban jao' main tumhari jagah SR.INS DAYA aur FREDDIE meri jagah aa jayey' tou kya hum koi case solve ker payein gay'. Haan!!!

ABHIJEET: nahi' balkay bilkul nahi' hum ACP Sir kay bina ek qadam nahi utha saktay tou case solve karna' aur main ye kabhi pasand nahi karunga kay tum mujhy "Sir" kehnay ki koshish mein pareshan hotay raho' phir mujhay ABHI kaun kahay ga' aur main jhanper kisay maarun ga'. DAYA!!!

DAYA(smile): aur kya humara SHARP SHOOTER cabin mein band ho ker reh payey ga'..

ABHIJEET: kabhi nahi'.

DAYA: yaar kuch cheezein hamesha apnay DIAMETER' apnay DISTANCE aur DIRECTION mein hee achi lagteen hain'.. bus'. Wo agar un say hut jayein tou sub mushkil mein aa jayein gay'. Mujhay laga agar main "Sr Ins" ban gaya tou tum say door ho jaonga' aur mujhay ye kisi bhi haal mein qabul nahi tha'  yaar mujhay acha lagta hay main tum say peechay hun' aik qadam hee saheh' aur sirf RANK mein'(wink him) warna tum jaantay ho main tum say kitna hoshyaar aur sharp hun'.

ABHIJEET (smiles): haan malum hay'. lekin DAYA log wait kartay hain' kya aagay barhna achi baat nahi hay'

DAYA: kyun nahi' magar ABHI mujhay buhat acha lagta hay kay meray aagay aur peechay dono taraf mera khayal rakhnay walay' mujhay sanbhalnay walay aur mujh say piyaar karnay waly hain'. main tumharay liyey sirf DAYA hun aur tum meray liyey ABHI' is say koi faraq nahi parta kay main "Ins" hun aur tum "Sr Ins"'. Bus tum chahyey isay ghalat samjho ya saheh' magar main comfortable nahi tha' mujhay sun ker hee itna aajeeb laga'.

ABHIJEET: hmmmm' aur DCP ko wo sub dikhana'..

DAYA(smile): boss'. bus thori masti'. koi samjh hee nahi raha tha meri baat' na TUM na ACP Sir' tou main nay FREDDIE kay sath sub plan kiya' wo apna INFORMER hay' CHINTOO' wo tou FREDDIE itna bura laal rung laaya tha' dekho abhi bhi meray hath RED hain' rang utra hee nahi'.

He showed his hand to ABHIJEET' ABHIJEET laugh'.

DAYA(got up): mujhay malum hay tum agree nahi ho meri baat say'. magar bus samjho' meray dil ko ye acha nahi laga'.

ABHIJEET: main bus ek baat kehna chahta hun'.

DAYA: haan bolo'.

ABHIJEET got up and hugged him' while hugged'

DAYA: tum mujh say abhi bhi khafa ho???

ABHIJEET: nahi khush hun' kyunki tum khush aur relax ho' magar mujhay ab bhi shak hay kay tumharay dimagh (point his finger on DAYA's forehead) ko ilaj ki buhat zarurat hay'.

ABHIJEET(again): wesay DAYA tum ko nahi lagta tum mazeed smart hotay ja rahay ho???

DAYA(smiles): acha wo kesay???

ABHIJEET(pointing towards shore): dekho saari MACHLIYAAN tum ko kitnay ghor say dekh rahi hain'.

DAYA: hahaha'. Boss'.. tum bhi na!!!

ABHIJEET: wesay DAYA tum nay acha nahi kiya'. wo sub TAREEKA kay baaray mein keh kay'. sharam nahi aati'. Bhai say mazak kartay huay'.

DAYA(in laugh): boss'. yunhi thora tumhara DIL check ker raha tha'.

ABHIJEET easily grab his neck'.

DAYA: arry log dekh rahy hain'. kya sochein gay' itna ATYACHAAR!!!!!!!!!!!! Uff'.. sub ko pata chal jayey ga kay CID ka Sr Ins kita ZALIM hay'..

ABHIJEET(lose his neck): FREDDIE bata raha tha kay tum kal PARTY day rahay ho???

DAYA: haan' boss'. zabardast sii'.

ABHIJEET(strangely): ain'.. magar PROMOTION tou hui nahi'.

DAYA: tou kya hua boss' DEMOTION tou ho gayii na'.

ABHIJEET: log PROMOTION mein party detay hain' sahab DEMOTION mein day rahy hain' aur DAYA' kal koi fazul kaam nahi' pichli TREAT mein bhi TU nay yehi kiya tha' BILL detay huay   mujhay phanswa diya tha' is baar main BILL bilkul nahi dunga'.

DAYA: hahahah' acha baba'. Is baar bill main hee dunga' pakka'.

ABHIJEET: tum apna valet mujhay abhi day do'.

DAYA(take out his valet): bharosa nahi hay'.

ABHIJEET (took it): bilkul nahi'.

DAYA: acha abhi tou mujhay kuch khila do'. Hmmm' chalo aaj koi new cheez khatay hain'.

Watchin here and there in FOOD BAR's'.

ABHIJEET(in excitement): haan bilkul'. Koi nai cheez khatay hain'.

DAYA: kiya!!!

ABHIJEET(in irritation): WHALE pakar kay kha leetay hain' kesa idea hay!!!

DAYA burst out his laugh'. grab his hand and take him towards FOOD CORNER with'

DAYA: boss' tum WHALE nahi pakar sako gay' wo buhat bari hoti hay'.

ABHIJEET grab his neck again'. While both laugh a lot'..    

At home'. ABHIJEET got a PARCEL'. he opened it and shocked to watch a PHOTO of his and TAREEKA in a beautiful frame'.'. his phone rings'.

DAYA: kesi lagi boss???

ABHIJEET: DAYA'.. tum bhi na' mujhay shak tha'.. tum thay na wahan???

DAYA: haan boss'. main nay socha'. dekh lun' ROMEO kahein khud na rona start ker day'.

ABHIJEET: hahah'' wesay kya karun is ka???

DAYA: bed room mein laga lo'.

ABHIJEET(bit irritate): abay wahan KAKI aati hay' safai karnay'.

DAYA(in smile): acha tou phir DIL mein laga lo'.. wahan tou KAKI nahi aati na' safai karnay'.

Both share the big'. Pure and naughty laugh'.

 

 

For READERS:  SORRY GALS/GUYS'. dis was an EARLIER STORY of mine'. before GAME OVER SERIES'. It's a TIMES UP break'. i dunt know but the CENTRAL POINT of dis STORY was my OWN OPINION'. either for  amoment' i asked myself '. If dis would happens'. wat will be my REACTION' really GALS/GUYS' my HEART loudly says to ME that it could not be acceptable by my HEART'.. may be sum READERS does not AGREE' its NOT necessary ppl'. da STORY has lots of LOOP HOLES'.. BUT'.. bear it' plz'. Its just a STRESS BUSTER for my READERS and MYSELF!!!  

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neeme thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Story.....But Ager koe fark nahen parta Frendshp ma tu PROMOTION Accept karna ma koe herj nahen tha.....But i like ur Story bcz it is base on DUO...And We all are missing duo On-Screen moments toghter badly..So, If we can't watch that atleast we can read that.....................Nice Attempt...πŸ‘πŸΌ
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hahahha.... DII i said.... its my PERSONAL OPINION....... i jus go through..... but after a long time... i want to write sum DUO FRNDSHIP.... cz really missin those alot.....
that TWO TEAMS initiation really burst my anger.... itna gussa aata hay kay.....
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YAH, we all r in anger bcz of that..and really missing that.....Try to write more stories and post it soon,,,,I really like ur Style...
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buhat buhat SHUKRIYA DII..... i m embarrassing now.....😳
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TRY to Blush  ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice story. Duo together can now be seen only in stories by members and old cases
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Posted: 13 years ago
a very cute story😊...........nicely written.πŸ˜ƒ............keep it up😊
daya was really cute in this story
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NANDANI DII.... POOJA.... SHREELA and NIMI...... buhat buhat SHUKRIYA......
i hope its a STRESS BUSTER for aal of us as welll after watchin CID now adays.....😑
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey very very very............... nice story lots of duo moments
and the last dialougue "DIl mein laga lo wahan toh kaki nahi aati safai karne" was just πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£

lots of wow moments FW should read ur story and they should learn what is real comedy
comedy is situational (as in ur story at many places) not what they show making freddie a comedian πŸ˜‘

but many of CIDians here will be jealous with lots of Abhi-tarika moments πŸ˜ˆ

bechari taarika will get lots of nightmares after everyone read ur story πŸ˜†