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Originally posted by: preethia
loved the update................
u always comp the ff within 20-25 parts i love that bcoz u dont try to drag the story much more than needed...............u always keep it simple and even the mu is something that happens to ppl in normal life..........intially i was so angry with maan to let her go and marry his bro then when things changed and he accepted his love for her and confessed i felt happy but still felt that he made a mistake and he has to repent...........u made him repent and suffer for all the sufferings he put geet thro.......it was not a easy task for him.........but i just loved maan after he came to shimla......................from then on maan was the only element i can remember now he never gave up his love, he trusted her, he believed in his and her love............the way he was facing her anger and wrath was awesome...........yeah he did the mistake for which he had to go thro that but not many men will do that.............they wud try couple of times and they wud give up saying if she doesnt care for me then y shud i beg.................finally they got married and maan was right no chances to b taken with geet wat if she changes her mind..........and also geet ek jung se bhi zyada hain.........uske dimag ka koi barosa nahin..................finally maan conquered his love.................hey when r u going to start the new ff.............do pm me
You have very nicely summarized it......I try to put logically one block after another...that;s why you feel the story is holding you...
Thanks for loving it.....I will come up with something soon....
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