Originally posted by: ananya95
hey zeynab
wonderful as usual
geets heart and mind talk gave a realistic touch 2 ur ff.sometimes we do experience such kinds of conflicts in our real lyf.again journal was left out.hope maan reads it sometime else but ur titles r wonderful.no vicky or dadi?
thnx 4 d pm
awww thank you. what do you mean exactly the journal was left out...like left out on the floor or i didn't address it that much in the update?
the reason i don't think i want maan to find out geet's feelings for him through the journal....i want him to eventually feel it through the gestures of geet and her behavior. but we are not till that point yet. but don't worry i have some things planned. 😃
I brought the whole concept of the journal so that maan could feel a closer connection with geet. they both have had their hearts broken in the name of love. so he knows what she is going through. maan doesn't feel so alone in the world anymore...and that there is someone else who has tasted the poison of love. but he also doesn't want geet to feel that pain...( i don't want to spoil anything but maybe in the upcoming updates things will make more sense).
vicky and daadi are going to be in the next update. don't worry😊
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