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Posted: 14 years ago
loved loved it........................
oh gosh geet won msk....................i am so happy.............poor msk tch tch cudnt open the locker..............but loving their cute fights..................thanks or the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey!!!!!amazing concept....
loving their cute fights.....
plz add me to ur pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hats off to both of ur updates
Jus loved the way both were with each other
Geet is awesum
Jus love her
Wanna c sum more awesums parts lik this
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update............really liked the convo between maan and geet.................felt happy to see that geet is not intimated by maan...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi....
awesome concept.....
a very refreshing ff.....
wud luv 2 read more....
m sending u a buddy request, plz accept it n plz dnt 4rget 2 pm me....
thnx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it....geet is so smart....maan so arrogant as usual....plz pm me..update soon and all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls continue....its very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago

I am at my cousin's place and got the opportunity to update

so if anyone want's an update plzz let me know😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

chapter-2

CANTEEN:-

Hey guys...whats up...!!!...geet said sitting beside pari

So

So what...??

How did you manage to hide the key from the hawk eyes of our head boy...??...yash asked

Well it was not that difficult you know...after all I am Geet Handa...she said raising the collar of her shirt

All were waiting impatiently for geet to break the ice and she was just adding salt to freeze it more...

Ok ok don't devour me with all your big eyes...you all want to know then here goes the story and she started narrating the incident...how maan followed her and snatched the keys from her(hiding the embarrasing stuffs ofcourse)

FLASHBACK...

Geet was running like anything as she knew once maan reached her...he would definitely get the keys no matter what...and then suddenly it strike her that why not hide the key before he reach her as he has not seen the key he would never be able to find out that the actual key is missing from the ring...

So she took out the key of the cupboard and hide it in the inner pocket of her skirt just below the belt and zipped it...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

So by the time maan reached the locker room the key was removed from the ring and thats why none of the keys fit into the lock...geet said triumphantly...

Exactly how many pockets do you have in your dress...??...vicky asked looking incredulously at her

Shut up Vicky

But really geet...you are amazing girl...only you can fool bro like this

Stop buttering me vicky...don't think by doing this I'll spare you for bringing mobile to school

Plzzz geet this was the last time...I promise I'll never bring it again...it was just that I wanted to talk to ria once

You are kidding me right...I m not buying that crap of yours...and what was so important to talk that you could not wait till school hours were over...??

Actually I wanted to break up with her and after school I had a cricket match so just thought of utilising the recess time...!!

WHAT...??

Whole group looked at him like he was some alien...

You are such an ass...!!...you call it utilising time...breaking up with your gf over phone...you could have done that tomorrow in school itself...!!

Geet yaar...don't get hyper...!!...if she would have seen me with neha before our break up then the problem would have doubled you know...!!

WHAT??

Geet was totally mad now

You are cheating on her...!!!

No yaar...I am dating neha from today only and so decided to break up with ria...thats not cheating...!!

You know what...forget it vicky...you all three khurana brothers are useless...!!

Hey that's not fair...I said I am sorry and will not bring the ph again...stop fussing over my brothers...!!

You better do...otherwise next time I myself would handover your precious phone to your devil brother...!!

Ok guys peace now...yash and others were kind of fed up with their fight

But really Vicky by the speed you are progressing you'll leave the university guys behind...and if you don't mind can I have ria's number

YASH...!!

What?...I was thinking of consoling ria after her break up

All you boys are jerks...!!

BTW geet if you had removed the key on your way to locker room...then why were you so reluctant in handing over the keys to him there wasting your time and energy...!!

Not my time NT but that of the devil khurana...

I didn't get it...

Well let me explain...even after I removed the key from the ring there was a spare with mishra sir which khurana could have easily got and I knew that mishra sir was to leave after the 4th period so...

So you killed maan's time by making him run after you...yash completed

Exactly...!!

You are actually awesome girl...!!!...all her friends shouted in unison

BTW guys... where is meera??

As usual at her favourite place...

LIBRARY...!!

Come on pari...why do you hate library so much??...its not that bad

Oh please geet...I just can't understand how can you guys sit in that creepy place for so long alongwith the ogling librarian

You are sounding as if you are talking about a graveyard...!!...she said laughing at her friends description of library

But she said she will directly come to the canteen after her work...vicky added

But I m starving from the morning activities...let me see whats taking her so long...then we can have lunch together...

Saying so geet went towards the library to look for meera

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LIBRARY:-

Meera was taking out a book from the upper rack when some books along with it fell on ground...she bend down to pic it when...

Hey let me help

She looked up and found a guy picking up the books

Thanks

When he heard her soft voice dev looked up

Hey beautiful...mention not...he said handing the books back to her

On seeing dev again meera as usual got nervous and got up instantly

Relax...meera...right...!!

Ye...yeah

Tell me something...why do you get so nervous on seeing me...??...I'll not eat you

She didn't answer but just kept staring the ground

Seems like you don't talk much

Vo...I need to go...saying so she rushed out of the library

Dev smiled looking at her retreating form and left to get his books

A girl was standing behind the rack watching the whole scene when her friend said...

Sasha...don't you think dev is giving unnecessary attention to this behenji

Sasha shot an angry glare to tasha and said...

Dev is not giving her attention but she is trying to gain some... attention seeker behenji...but don't worry I know how to handle these middle-calss behenjis...sasha said with an evil smirk

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11TH A:-

Hey maan...what happened...??...you didn't got the key

No adi...That handa girl is much smarter than I guessed...maan said with a chuckle...though she irritated him to the core...her antics were still quite an amusement for him...

But don't worry...I'll handle her

BTW maan...have you done the numerical...I was having some problem in it

Don't tell me the mathematics genius is having problem in a numerical...

Actually I couldn't read the chapter myself and also missed those classes due to illness so was having some problem

Hey relax adi...I know everything...I was just kidding

Just then Rahul alongwith ketan came there

So our head boy lost to geet...rahul said in a mocking tone

Shut up rahul

Oh come on adi...I understand its not maan's fault afterall who would not lose infront of that hot chic...usse nazar hategi tab to koi kam karega na...she is so fu*...

Maan gave a hard punch on his face not letting him complete his sentence

Don't you dare utter rubbish about geet...maan said furiously

Adi stopped maan from hitting rahul more separating the two

Maan what are you doing...??...you are the head boy...you cannot go on hitting anyone in school premises

Just leave me adi...I am fine...and you...he said holding rahul's collar... if you ever speak nonsense regarding geet then you will have it from me...!!...saying so maan left the classroom

Adi was stunned by maan's behaviour...though he knew maan respects girls but he never hit anyone in the school premises for insulting a girl and today himself breaking rule that too for geet was something new

Luckily there was no one in the class except the four of them as it was recess time

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Maan came out of the classroom and went towards the canteen...he was on the way passing the corridor when someone banged into him and lost her balance...he instinctively wrapped his arm round her waist inorder to save her from falling down...and then he saw her face...

Geet opened her eyes which she had shut tightly fearing the fall...to find the last person she would ever want to see but to her utter dismay she was not only in front of him but was literally in his arms which were holding her from her waist...

For a second both were lost in each other's eyes oblivious to their surrounding...but they suddenly came back to their senses when the sound of giggling of some girls hit their ear drums...maan straightens her up and withdrew his hands from her waist immediately...

Can't you use your eyes while walking handa...he blasted her for her recklessness

Aankhen to tumhare pass bhi hai na or have you donated it to someone...you should have been more careful...she said not giving a damn to his accusation

But you...

She again began in her sherni mode cutting him in...

And how dare you touch me..??...you pervert...!!

He lost his cool at her sudden remark and grabbed her wrist twisting it behind her back...

What did you called me...haan...handa...??...he said in a dangerous tone

Geet felt goosebumps due to his deadly glare and intimidating tone

Vo...vo...mai...she stuttered meekly

Vo mai kya...??...he hissed twisting her hand more

Finding no escape she chose her best weapon against maan...

Aaahhh...!!!!

Shut up handa..!!...I know its not hurting that much so stop your rubbish act

How do you know its not hurting..??...you heartless beast

Handa...he warned her twisting her hand even more

Aaahhh...mummy...aaahhh...leave me...!!!

Maan was quite aquainted with her drama queen status but soon her act started grabing attention of the passer by leaving maan with no choice but to free her...

She rubbed her hand giving maan accusatory looks to which he just rolled his eyes and left towards canteen...

After maan left she made a wide grinning face which amazed the students present in the corridor who were thinking she was actually in pain...

She flung her pony backwards and went towards the library...

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Just as geet reached the library she collided with meera who was hastily coming out of the library...

Oops..!!!...here I go again

Hey geet are you ok...I am sorry I didn't see you

Its ok yaar...aaj ka din hi takrane ka hai...anyways I was searching you only...what took you you so long...??

Aah...vo..actually...library me kuch kaam tha...

Relax yaar...chal lunch break khatam hojayega...and I am starving

Sorry...you were waiting for me

Kitna sorry bolegi...aur kabhi maine bina apne doston ke lunch kiya hai kya...aur aaj to mama ne specially tere liye paratha bheja hai...ab jaldi kar...aur haan ab plzz senti mat ho jana...plzzz

Ok ok...chal...meera felt so elated to have a wonderful friend like geet... she hail from a middle class family and geet was the only daughter of Mohinder handa the owner of Handa group of industries still she was so down to earth and caring friend... !!

All the friends shared their lunch and had a wonderful time...all were different in thinking...ideologies...backgrounds but still they were inseparable...!!

Finally after their lunch they get back to their class and soon back to their respective homes...

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HANDA MANSION

Geet puttar atleast keep your bag in your room

Anything you say mama...I am so very happy today

That's good...but what happened that you are happy beta

Are mama...aaj maine us khurana ki chutti kar di

Geet how many time have I told you not to address maan by his surname

Kitna achcha aur suljha hua bachcha hai aur ek tu hai jo usse kuch sikhne k bajae use paresan karti rehti hai...!!

Oh chill mama...use apne naam pe kuch jyada hi maan hai...thats why I don't like calling him maan...aur plzz stop compring me to that monkey...maan ye maan vo...ugh...!!

Jane de...tum dono ki mahabharat me mujhe nahi parna...

KHURANA MANSION

What happen maan...you look tired

Nothing mom...you know na that chipkali handa...always upto something or the other...

Oh ho...tum to uske piche hi par gaye ho...kitni pyari hai...so joyful and lively...ab sab tumhari tarah serious to nahi reh sakte na

Plzz mom aap uski side lena band kar do

Vo aur vicky bas rules torna jante hai...

Maan they are in school not in a military camp...don't you think you are a little too strict

Forget it mom...I know you'll not listen anything against your darling geet...

anyways where are you going now...??...

to vicky's room mom...have something important to talk to him...he said with a stern look on his face...

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Next day morning...

Geet woke up stretching her arms feeling the beauty of the morning...she usually woke up early for her morning yoga exercises...

She got ready and went to her balcony which was much like an extended varanda...and spread the mat to do the surya namaskar(a kind of exercise as well as worship of sun)

She closed her eyes and inhaled the fresh morning air and slowly exhaled along with opening her eyes...and then all her calmness evaporated the moment she saw him...

YOU...!!!

Oh no...!!...now my whole day would be horrible...subah subah kis monkey ki sakal dekha di apne babaji...she said her usual dramatic way

The feeling is mutual...maan replied back

their balconies were opposite each other and the railings were so close that one can jump from one side to the other...😉

Don't you have any other place in the whole world to do your stupid workouts which hardly benefits you...

Well handa...this is my home...my balcony...and my workout sessions...so I don't need your permission or opinion regarding anything...

And as far as the benefits of workouts are concerned...I think its high time you concentrate on your workouts rather than wasting time in fighting as despite of your regular yoga regime you are hardly loosing any weight of which I can assure you from yesterday's locker room episode'...

I AM NOT FAT...!!!...so shut up you moron...!!!

Maan simply smirked and calmly replied lifting up his dumbbells...

I understand handa that you feel bad about your weight but its completely ok...as I told you just concentrate on your yoga and soon you'll loose some weight

I hate you khurana...!!...she said angrily trying to control her tears and ran inside her room

Oh man...!!...how much I love to see her this much irritated...but hope this news would not reach mom or else another lecture for teasing her darling geet...maan thought while continuing his exercise

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so frnds this was a totally unexpected update

I just got some free time...so enjoy and plzz leave comments they r so lovely...and helps me to write more😃
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Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago

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