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Posted: 14 years ago
continuation of my Previous scene .....
Viren breaks d hugg . n says " tumein yaad tha ? " , Nivi says " Kise yaad nahi hota mere shajahan ke janamdin " She gives d rose 2 him . She picks up d gift n then gives it 2 him . Viren was overwhelmed by her gesture . Tears comes out frm his eyes . She rubs it frm her hands n asks him 2 open d gift n see . He opens it n sees a beautiful Photo frame written I LOVE U on it . She says hum yahan apni shaadi ki pic lagayenge taaki hamein hamara sabse khobbsurat din yaad rahein . Viren says " meri zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat pal vo tha jab main tumse pehli baar mila " Nivi gives him smile n then 2 make his mood light She says " toh phir kya irada hai ? kahan jaana hai batao ? " Viren says " kahin nahin , mera Bday yahin celebrate ho gaya " .She says " No no no aisa nahi chalega , aaj meri taraf se treat . bolo kahan chalna hai " She continues " okk Theek hai Hum dono shaam ko bahar chalte hai kahin bhi jahan tum chaho theek hai " .
In Eveng They both gets ready n goes out on d bike . Nivi asks Viren " hum kahan ja rahe hai Viren ? " He answers " tumne hi kaha na jahan main chahoon Toh bas dekhti jao " . While riding It almost got dark So Nivi gets tensed n aska him again " Viren , kitne der se hum bike pe hi hai , aisi kaun si jagah hai itni door ? " Viren says " tum chinta kyon kar rahi ho ? koi gadbad nahi hogi " Suddenly bikes Stop in a lonelyy place where neither any Vehicle nor any person could b seen . Nivi starts getting scared n asks him d reason . Viren says " mechanic ke bina yeh theek nahi hogi " . Viren says " nivi tum yahin ruko Main aata hun " Nivi refuses 2 stay there alone . But Viren relaxes her n goes . Viren while walking almost 1 km Sees one Bicycle whch was unlocked .n no1 was there near it . He takes d bicycle n sits on it n comes 2 Nivi . Nivi gets surprised n asks abt d bicycle . Viren replies "Arre huzur jab hum shahajahan maujood hai toh phir aapko padeshaan kaise hone de " He says her 2 sit on d bicycle . She sits infront of him n Viren starst riding it .
After riding for long time , Nivi sudenly asks him 2 stop . Viren gets confused n stops . He sees some few chat thelas on d road . She says 2 him 2 eat chat frm there . Viren refuses it sayng " Nivi tum pagal ho gayi ho ? Mera janamdin hai aaj Aur aaj ke din tum mujhe swargwasi bana dena chahti ho aur khud vidhwa banna chahti ho ? " Nivi shooks her head in NO n She drgas him 2 one of d thela of chat by hoding his hands . She asks d theewala 2 give 1 plate Spicy Golgappa , He gives it . She take 1 n feeds 2 Viren . Viren feels spicy n starts beeging for Water .But He doesn't gets it . Nivi eats 1 n She wipes his face frm her pallu whch was sweating due 2 spice . She again tries 2 feed 1 more but Viren refuses it sayng " Nivi yeh golgappa hai ya mirchi ka gola ? " (Reminded me of ragvir awwww ) . Nivi then complets d plate n after paying 2 d thelewaala They leaves .
they reaches 2 1 garden whch was open in night also . They sits on d grass holding hands . They starts staring eacch other's loving eyes . Viren takes 1 hand of her n kisses it n says " Thank u Nivi , Mere is din ko itna khoobsurat banane ke liye " Nivi replies " Viren meri zindagi mein jo sabse khoobsurat cheeez hai ,uske liye kuch khoobsurat karna toh zarrori hai naa " Viren gives smile 2 her havng tears in his eyes n then NivRen hug each other .
I hope U all liked it . I know It is veryy bad comparing 2 others . But just thought came n I wrote it .
Edited by sushmitadutta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice scene moni
loved it good thinkin
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Posted: 14 years ago

Aah moni i loved ur 2nd scene too jaan and it's not bad at all silly!! It was so sweet and romantic aww, hai i havent come out of nivrenland all day today and you helped keep me there!! Love you jaan🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u my Asma, Anisha , Aneesha , Jafrina n diya Di swweties . It reallyy means a lott for me .🤗
Thank u . awwww I m nt at all a writter yaar . Just tried . I know It is nt at all gd comparing 2 All of ur's scenes especiallyy Asma , diya Di , jafrina n sana . they were beautiful . I m nothng infront of tht . U all r so kind 2 me . 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaani07

Aah moni i loved ur 2nd scene too jaan and it's not bad at all silly!! It was so sweet and romantic aww, hai i havent come out of nivrenland all day today and you helped keep me there!! Love you jaan🤗

Oh Asma jaan I lovee u 2 🤗🤗 n Jaan Plzz mujhe chane ke jhaad pe mat chada 😆 . I know my status . lol . Dear defiatelyy I will cooment on it . n I lovedd lovedd lovedd ur scenes dear . U r awsome writter . 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Moni, no jaan, ur a very good writer, don't ever think u aren't!!🤗

We all just do what comes to our minds and hope everyone likes it! And i LOVED ur scenes sweetie, mwah!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wiked job monica!!!!!!!!!
who say tht ur scnes arnt as good as tha others
they r as good n aweosme!!!!!!!!!!!
u rock man
Posted: 14 years ago
Just finished reading the second scene MONI ITS AWESOME!!! seriously i love it soo much!!! you all write sooo amazingly!!! Well done Moni x x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anisha_91

Just finished reading the second scene MONI ITS AWESOME!!! seriously i love it soo much!!! you all write sooo amazingly!!! Well done Moni x x

awwww My naisa sis , 🤗 Oh u liked it awww Thatzz so sweet 🤗 . I don't know yaar wheather it was awosome or nt but Yaa Ur comments r definatelyy awosoe . lovee u my sis 🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
@asma Awww so sweet of u my jaan , thankk u thank u 🤗I don't know yaar , I never considered myself as writter . I only enjoy reeading . lol . but Thank u dear . 🤗
@Aneehs Oh aneesha dear Thanxxx for liking it dear . Thank u veryy much 🤗

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