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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Another idea that  just came to me. How about nivi arguing with siddharth and defending viren, thus making viren realise that nivi loves him.   
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Sana brilliant scenes. 👏👏👏. look forward to see how this story moves forward. Very very touching.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
wow ... just loved it  pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Sana read all your scenes at a stretch, Really loved it..  You are also a very good writer honey.. Please continue and if i get any ideas will surely share it with u....
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Beautiful scene Sana. I loved the scene when Nivi was thinking about Yash, it's very emotional. 
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
                                                       Part-6
 
 
Nivi standing on the terrace and looking at the sky....she is sad to see there is no stars in the sky......she whispered......
 
ye aasman ki tarah meri zindagi bhi uski roshni ko doond rahi hai....mera chaand bhi is chaand ki tarah baadalon ke peeche chupi huyi hain.....Mera chand kab nafrat ki baadalon se bahar aayega.....
 
She remember the night when viren and she saw the moon together....she said to herself....
 
Us din mein sirf aasman ki chaand ko dekthi rahi...mera dil mein chupi huyi chaand ko dekh nahi paayi...abh dekhna chahti to us chaand baadalon ke peeche chup gayi...
tears started to flawn through her cheeks.....she closed her eyes and unknowingly started to sing.....
           
 
                Pal Pal duniya lag rahi hasi tum jo saath hai
                Ye din raathe hein nayi nayi tu jo saath hai
                ho raha he kuch azar keh rahi ye ik nazar
                ye dosti....dosti se ye he thadke kahi..
                vo ek pal..pyar ka...bas yahi he kahi.....
                tu hi saathi...tu hi yaara...tu farishtha...kudaaya...
                meri saathi...meri yaara...tu farishta kudaaya...
 
She can see all the moments she spent with viren while singing...................
 
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Viren still standing in his room lost in thoughts.....suddenly he hear the cute voice of his chaand........unknowingly he started to move with the song.........he feels something dragging him to some other world........he reached the terrace and saw nivi standing there.........her face is covered with strands of hair..........Viren looks at nivi intensly and start to move towards her.........
 
Now he can only see nivi's face....he just forget abt his revenge,aim,hatredness,anger and everything...now he is in his dreamland........he can see only two people there..viren and nivi............
 
Nivi looks at viren and she can feel the warmth of her body.....viren stands close to her..and he started to removes the strands of hair blocking him to see his chaand's face....he kissed on her forhead.....he noticed the tears flawn through nivi's eyes.....he vipened away them with his lips............
 
Nivi completely lost in his eyes and hugs him tightly............hours passed away.............Viren and nivedita still stands there as they r not ready to allow even a breeze to come between them.......
 
Then suddenly the rain started...and nivi and viren just came back to their senses with the music of raindrops.........Viren suddenly moves away from nivi and turned back so that he can hide his face from her.....
 
nivi asked.....kya hua viren............?
 
viren replies to her in an angry tone..........Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karna hai........mujhe nahi pata mein yaha kaise aaya hoon...........
 
nivi said....lekin mujhe pata hai ...........tumara pyaar tumhe yahaan keech kar le aaya hoom...
 
viren shouts at her.......backwas band karo........mujhse baat mat karo..........
 
Nivi suddenly replied back.........lekin mujhe tumse baat karna hai...aaj tumko meri savaalon ka jawab dana hi hoga...........
 
Viren screamed at her....mujhe sawaal pasand nahi hai..........and left from there...........
 
A smile appeared on nivi's face..........................
             
Edited by sana4kinha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
i got the idea of nivi singing and viren dragged towards her from asma.........so thanx to her.............
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
a blissful romantic night on valentines day ...thanks for it sana
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
sooooo cute....😍 perfect for d valentine's day....
thanx 4 d scene.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
sooooooooooooo sweet.
I love reading it and like your style of writing. I look forward to more.