Fate has it all set-MG #2 pt 73/ pg 137(14/12/11) - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update................
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd  the update..
poor geet what is she going to do nw..
thanxs fr pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just luvd ur FF...........itz damn good.......d most HOTTTTTTTTTTTT ff ever..........I JUST LOVD ITT...............plz update soon............ I M SAYING AGAIN...........ITZ DAMN GOOD...............take care..............
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its long since you updated last. Please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooohhh you won't believe....but i read all the parts at one go....
gosh!!!!! i have never read so much in my life.....may be not even the novels.....

but only got to do that coz there is Ind vs Aus match going on and i got the PC all for myself.....
so took full advantage of it......

really shruti..... it was a lovely story so far....eagerly waiting for the next update......

update soon....would surely like to know what will happen to Maaneet after their confrontation with Badi Maa and Bade Paa.....


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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
this update is for vidu87, mrk_1
 
Part 59(1/2)
 

Geet was confused as to what she should do now; they will take Maan definitely back to Delhi or shift him in Ahmedabad and bring Dev heer; they can not move her ant where;

 
G: badi Maa I just want to make a call and she fled to the nearest PCO even before BM could say any thing
 

Maan shrugged now what his little wifey is upto

 
Geet called Lily's house
 
: hello
 
G: hello ji, may iu talk to Lily Didi
 
: whose there?
 
G: its Geet Khurana
 
: Geet Beta sorry beta she is not at home has gone to meet her
fianc
 
G: can I know where she has gone
 
: New Inn
 
G: thank you, bye
 
: bye
 
She comes out wow Geet the luck is on your side, now I just ned to take them to New Inn
 
She went to the waitng family and glared at Maan and Dev to keep quite { unme itni khahan himmat ki kuch bol paaye}
 
G: BM lets go to Variety { to reach Variety book house back in '95 you have toi cros New Inn on way}
 

BM: why?

 
G: I want to take a get well card for Darjee
 
BM: what?
 
BP: isn't it very childish?
 
G: I may be your Badi Bahu but I am still a kid (she made a baby face) {how can some one refuse that innocent looks}
 
Dev and Maan hit their heads in frustration
 
D (wispers): now what is she upto?
 
M: why don't you ask? Meri to himmat nahin hai, aur waise bhi
meri to shamat aani hi hain
 
D: bro aap itna darte kyo ho
 
M: tu nahin darta na, jaa jaa ke puch
 
D: meri to Bhabhi hain
 
M: aur meri joru hai
 
D: yes aur aap uake Gulaam
 
M: shaadi ho jaane de phir dekhta hoon, tu apni biwi ke samne kitna bolta hain; who hain to iski hi behen, aur who bhi badi
 
D: bro ab darao mat
 
BM: tum dono kya khusur phusur kar rahe ho
 
Both smiled weekly
 
Meanwhile the reached the turn to New Inn, they were on foot as it is connected by footpaths
 
Just as they turned Geet saw Lily parking hey Kinetic she sighed and turned to BM & BP
 
G: hey that's Lily and ran to her and hugged her
 
Lily was taken aback by the sudden impact, she swirled,
 
G: wow, what a surprise, Lily you here
 
L: hi Geet, why such a warm welcome
 
G: just listen and she quickly briefed her every thing and also why she needed her support
 
Lily was amused by what Geet said and nodded in a yes
 
 
how will Lily help?
how will she manofy Bade Papa and Badi Maa?
 
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part 59 other 1/2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40795494 Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update shruthi........
no idea what geet wants lily to do now
Edited by puth - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
 I loved geet, bubbly and intelligent always know how to tackle the problm.
loved dev- maan conversation.🤣
 both r poor.
ek ka bhabi aur ek ka patni .
dono hi darta hain.
geet met lilly and now waiting for her plan .
update soon.