Panchi-Sid OS. -Betrayed- - Page 3

owsome work u should be the script writer .this the 1st time i read ny serials os

WOW! a beautiful piece of writing. I could feel Sid and Paanchi here. Do write more. :)

Superb OS....Marvelous piece of Writing....Loved it Very Very Much Pls do Write more.....❤️ 😊 😳
Edited by kritishah3 - 13 years ago

hey u penned down each and every emotion sooooooooo perfectly dat is beyond my imagination and i cant believe dis ur frst os

This is so lovely. I just love the way you depicted Panchi's feelings in this.